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The Vicissitude Of Love
Translucency of our love, morphed through eons of
treacherous storms some lucid, others ambiguous
words were merely breaths of smoke rising from
dormant oceans of volcanic ripple convoluted and
muddled, conjugating perfectly reposed strings
misconstruing language of love.
Ripeness of our flesh fed furtive whispers of
self exile, the solitude imprisoned through past walls
impairing fingers and touch; expanse of emotions
were sirens to song of death filling aspirations for
Elysian fields with hopelessness and despair
in this space of 'Us' .
Living truth of our love fragmentally premature
at birth in this breath, testimony inked on petals
shall blow on through passages of time
ashes to ashes, our eulogy concealed in a vessel
soundless and motionless sphering to another time
re-birthed with hopes of perpetual existence
entwined in numinous divinity.
I shall be there, my love
waiting for your arrival
persevering
four seasons of weather
to be whole again
with you as one.
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Re. The Vicissitude Of Love
19th Jan 2017 7:31pm
I'm glad You came back...I already had this saved in my private folder- but tis nice to have it here on RL where it belongs!!!
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Re. The Vicissitude Of Love
19th Jan 2017 7:40pm
Re. The Vicissitude Of Love
20th Jan 2017 8:02am
Welcome back Vee!!
Thanks for giving us a chance to express our appreciation, I hate commenting on comps for obvious reasons.
"the solitude imprisoned through past walls
impairing fingers and touch; expanse of emotions
were sirens to song of death filling aspirations for
Elysian fields with hopelessness and despair
in this space of 'Us' . "
this is captivating, fascinating poetry Rina!! a definite multi-read.
good luck!! for the comp!
Thanks for giving us a chance to express our appreciation, I hate commenting on comps for obvious reasons.
"the solitude imprisoned through past walls
impairing fingers and touch; expanse of emotions
were sirens to song of death filling aspirations for
Elysian fields with hopelessness and despair
in this space of 'Us' . "
this is captivating, fascinating poetry Rina!! a definite multi-read.
good luck!! for the comp!
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Re. The Vicissitude Of Love
20th Jan 2017 8:31am
Incredible piece of poetry, Vee. Positively adore the third stanza, simply amazing.
Always love the ways you describe things in such a unique manner, such as love and longings.
~anonshadow😏
Always love the ways you describe things in such a unique manner, such as love and longings.
~anonshadow😏
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Re: Re. The Vicissitude Of Love
9th Feb 2017 4:38am
It's not hard to go to that place mentally, leaving all behind...the problem is leaving and coming back to reality but at least in poetry we can do that Dear Mourganna, Thank you for diving in that mental place with me.
Re. The Vicissitude Of Love
20th Jan 2017 10:17am
it's poetry of patience,
there is a someone for every lonely one;
so elegant...
there is a someone for every lonely one;
so elegant...
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Re: Re. The Vicissitude Of Love
9th Feb 2017 4:33am
Very true John, there's someone out there but sometimes it takes a lifetime or two to find them :)
Re. The Vicissitude Of Love
20th Jan 2017 11:11pm
Soo many variables...so much joy and sorrow....so many challenges---losses and gains...within this single emotion that forms that ONE unique, relationship....
and yet for those fortunate to find that bond, a blessing---no matter the duration....
Mo Chara chotha`imid...this is exceptional....breath-catching in its lovely lines--the final ones deeply touching
Thank you for returning with yet another gift of your remarkable talent!
and yet for those fortunate to find that bond, a blessing---no matter the duration....
Mo Chara chotha`imid...this is exceptional....breath-catching in its lovely lines--the final ones deeply touching
Thank you for returning with yet another gift of your remarkable talent!
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Re: Re. The Vicissitude Of Love
22nd Jan 2017 4:29pm
You were spot on my dear Enchantress, wiser than the winds upon seas. Lucky are the ones to find the one in one lifetime but for some it might take more than once to find synchronicity of time and the alignment of the stars but in the meantime we'll have great poetry. Thank you my dear friend for the honor and for the affirmation.
Re. The Vicissitude Of Love
22nd Jan 2017 4:15am
Lady, your pen is Everything and a bag of chips! :)
Wow! What a beautiful mind you have, Vee! xo
Wow! What a beautiful mind you have, Vee! xo
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Re: Re. The Vicissitude Of Love
22nd Jan 2017 3:28pm
it better be tortilla chips Rain, i have a secret obsession to anything hot'n spicy ;)
Re. The Vicissitude Of Love
28th Jan 2017 3:52am
OHhhhhh such marvelousnesses of flow, the True Way Poemes Doth Tippeth their Poesy Toes into the Museful Waves, Rippling the Mirroreous Fountain of Deep Inspiration...
Really liked the flow to this, and then the shortness of the lines of the last stanza bringing it to a close.
Really liked the flow to this, and then the shortness of the lines of the last stanza bringing it to a close.
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Re: Re. The Vicissitude Of Love
28th Jan 2017 4:00am
Jim, where da hell have you been my ole' pal, jeez this place have been on placid mode lately, dammit you need to come more often, to shake us a bit from the state of conformity ;)
Re. The Vicissitude Of Love
Anonymous
8th Feb 2017 5:37pm
I love the depth of strength which is so reflected in this piece.
The bond never to be broken, regardless of challenging seasons.
Truly beautiful. A keeper for me.
The bond never to be broken, regardless of challenging seasons.
Truly beautiful. A keeper for me.

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Re: Re. The Vicissitude Of Love
9th Feb 2017 4:35am
Thank you so much Deeply, a true bond can never be broken whether we are with them physically or not, I'm very glad you liked this poem.
Re. The Vicissitude Of Love
6th Apr 2017 2:35am
I love where you say,
"words were merely breaths of smoke rising from
dormant oceans of volcanic ripple convoluted and
muddled"
Enjoyed this.
"words were merely breaths of smoke rising from
dormant oceans of volcanic ripple convoluted and
muddled"
Enjoyed this.
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