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Loving an angel
deep brown eyes seen long ago
before the lights halo over his head
seen in a photographs of another
who walks with his wild kingdom
hair over his shoulder tied
with a bandana swept back proudly
seen long ago a wanderer who paints
colours in the wind
sounds of rustling dove wings
whiteness reflected on a window pane
tears in silence amid mocking laughter
the wind blows away dreams
whimsical moments whispered
gone like a puff of smoke.
Published 18th Jan 2017
| Edited 24th Apr 2019
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18th Jan 2017 10:56am
Grace, I must say I've always admired your way of ending poems so perfectly
"whimsical moments whispered
gone like a puff of smoke"
Heart wrenching piece through and through, the sadness and longing were prevalent throughout. Great pen my friend.
~anonshadow😏
"whimsical moments whispered
gone like a puff of smoke"
Heart wrenching piece through and through, the sadness and longing were prevalent throughout. Great pen my friend.
~anonshadow😏
18th Jan 2017 8:47pm
Anonshadow, thank you for such kind words and for reading me.:) honoured as always.
18th Jan 2017 3:34pm
What a beautiful testament to someone who's crossed the bridge, Grace. I agree with anon regarding the ending. Stunning.
18th Jan 2017 8:49pm
Coming from a talented writer thats high praise indeed Ahavati. Thank you so much for reading me.
18th Jan 2017 7:15pm
Where, why and how life takes us...everything causes impact in some shape or form- as does this emotive Write!!!
Mis-understandings snap-judgements and pettiness - at times rear their head in the best of folk.
when this happens there are rationalazations within that mind- to cause such hurtful actions.
For that to happen...for such actions to take place is simply childish and spreads un-warrented pain.
Spreading pain to another is a true sin!!!
To endure such things is said to build character....I think it just hurts.
Deep Well of
Felt Ink Dear Grace!!!
Mis-understandings snap-judgements and pettiness - at times rear their head in the best of folk.
when this happens there are rationalazations within that mind- to cause such hurtful actions.
For that to happen...for such actions to take place is simply childish and spreads un-warrented pain.
Spreading pain to another is a true sin!!!
To endure such things is said to build character....I think it just hurts.
Deep Well of
Felt Ink Dear Grace!!!
18th Jan 2017 8:53pm
We learn well, Soul, from life's experiences and meeting people along the way. Thank you for dropping by and reading. Honoured.
