A Swallow

Don't go beyond one, though. Anonshadow, you are a talented writer.

Thank you Grace, I am honored that you think so:) Thank you for reading me.






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Why thank you, Amelia. I'm always glad to see you drop by, I greatly appreciate your support.





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I was thinking about how dark/black seems to be a popular notion in 'dissolving' into oblivion to numb the pain when white/blank is more close to reality and truth.  You painted the imagery pretty well, only the ones who have been there will identify with this poem.  
On personal note, don't ever feel you're alone, you can message me anytime.

Yes I've noticed that as well. I suppose I had always imagined it as black, but it is a white blankness.
I appreciate your kind words, Vee.

And as a friend I thank you.



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those last few lines are deep af brotha! major props.

<3

Thank you brad, I truly appreciate your kind words.






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I'm glad the white of paper (or screen) is more appealing to write about than the over-experience of the other.

Thank you kindly for the read and comment, I appreciate it!






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Thank you kindly for the read and comment, I appreciate it!






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Very talented potential, you brought the feeling of what it's like to abuse drugs within this.
The last few lines are also very touching.
Keep up the good work.

Thank you, I truly appreciate you saying so. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment!





~anonshadow😏

Your welcome :)