sin

Ahh, Brenda...don't forget that little thing remaining in the box...Hope remains.  Much love...
Willow

thank you lovely Willow for that hopeful note :)

love Brenda

Takin' it to the limit here, Brenda.
What an evil demon you unleashed
Hopefully it will soon sate itself . . .
Until the next time!

thank you Jerry yes was I hope it is sated..

love Brenda

Deeply moving write, sweet Crim 💓
Every word felt. How I know of that Pandora's Box...
Potent expression.

thank you beautiful Heart for understanding..

love Crim

sharp and dark and sinfully elegant in its way, well done crim

thank you most kindly Vandel..

love Crim

thank you Nemo it very well could have been..

love Brenda

Brenda.. loved the phrasing in this.. beautiful as always.. love you!!




Dave

thank you Dave I appreciate and love you my friend..

xo Brenda

another excellent write - despite the thrust of this write, you were not to blame. Demons will always find a way out, with or without our assistance :-)

powerful stuff dear friend :-)

thank you David I take comfort in believing that to be true..

love Brenda

I had to scroll up and see if this was in the lyric section (I rarely look at sections first). It appears to have a chorus and melody to its rhythm. I feel some of this, especially the Pandora's Box reference was inspired by your previous discussion thread. And that's a good thing. Sites should inspire creativity through open and honest discussion.  It's true that once negativity takes hold it becomes a swirling mass of destruction swallowing all it can to grow.

thank you most graciously Sage one I suppose it could be lyrical but it was kind of mantra of regret for opening that box..

love Brenda

aw Lily you are a very talented poetess.. thank you for showing love to this write..

love Crim

My Beautiful Brenda...please never hold regret for any thought which leaves that incredible head of yours...casualties no...never...thought provoked readers...always...

I love you very much

xoxo Taryn

thank you my beautiful one though there were casualties from me opening Pandora's box and I'm feeling really bad about it..

I love you :)

xo Brenda

you witness empirical devastation, Crim,
curiosity won't let us keep the lid on that box.
killer lyrics...

thank you John for feeling this write..

love Crim

Pandora's box... there's something so intriguing about that!

Stunning write, dear Crim!
Love the repetition... it makes the poem even more powerful...

Love, Duende

thank you lovely Duende for the great comment..

love Crim

Sounds very loving, lol.
Demons don't scare me. Humans are the weird ones 😜

Great write!

thank you DC for making me smile with your comment :)

love Crim

I may be missing something, but it seems that the Pandora's Box is your "Fuckers Stand" poem, which lamented the feeble turn the criticism has taken here.  I rarely read much that's constructive with terse remarks that really say nothing.  It's fine to be supportive, but that can go too far.  If we don't get the "honest feedback" we're writing in a vacuum.  Thanks for the courage to address this Lady Crim.  Even the controversy may be healthy.

From reading the previous comments and looking over your poetry lady Crim it would seem that passion, regardless of the subject is what drives you...'tis a good thing for anyone I would say...otherwise life would be pretty boring. I look forward to reading more of your artistry.

~ Áine

The urge within you; the daemons rife
with sin that you have skrybed here
has been done superbly Brenda.

The things with unleashing these Entities
from within - the Pandora's Box - is that
we do not know what the consequences
will be, or for how long they will last.

Their duration depends upon a lot of
variables and they usually leave a
swath of destruction & carnage.

  Take caution with them: Love and Namaste... Dantalyon

Very worthy Write.....but i seriously doubt your 'sins' are even nearly that powerful.   BLESS ye, dear

Pandora is the truth hidden in all of us.. beautiful lines Love to you always, Brenda.
✨Trish

Precious Crim......I'm always in awe reading your writes.......they always cause me to stop and say "WOW!" Brilliant ink that I've enjoyed......purple luv & hugs xo :)