SMörgåsbord

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Really feeling Sara Bright man's "Eden". Dark and Gothic flowing with Gregorian chant motifs beneath then melody.  A perfect catalyst for such a decadent feast :-)

I was looking for your second comment... here it was (lol)    
   
Great you felt it!  
The Gregorian chants are to blame for the priests in this piece... it wasn't me ;-)

I love that you add music to your poetry. I think sharing music shows a piece of yourself. Also puts me somewhat in the mindset you might of had while writing.

Just felt the need to say that ^^

I really appreciate it that you say that!

I agree... music says a lot about who you are and yes... I always try to create a setting! I am amazed how many people check out the link... it makes me smile :-)

Mind going wild again ^^
Greatness :-)

Great to hear you love this one :-)  
 
Thank you so much for your comment!

sexy Duende how well I know these Gods..

red hot ink!

love Crim

Thank you so much for your comment, dear Crim!

Red hot... that made me smile big time :-)

Thank you so much for your extensive comment, Boian!  
I really appreciate that!  
 
I'm not suprised by your favorite lines and I'm so glad you picked up the 'quick reading' part! By packing those line closely together I tried to force the reader to read it quickly and give it a meaning... a feeling...  
 
Great to hear you love the music... that was what started this poem (and '4 brothers, one submissive' by DevilsChild)  
 
Thank you for taking the time to read, listen and comment :-)

This was so raw. Sexually deprived, sexually broken.  This reads like a Caliguan feast. Hedonistic and of the soul...as if you truly felt and experienced this.  This aroused me to the point of wanting to be there  feasting upon such a decadent smoqrgasbord.   Powerful and erotic Duende. >:-)

Thank you so much for your enthusiastic comment :-)

That it reads as if I experienced it is a great compliment! It was the video and all those hands etc. which inspired me! Never done something like this, but I came close ;-)

I dream, but I shall never admit it. :)

You don't have to, dear!

Just dream...

Thank you so much for your comment!

Feeling the forbidden vibe here. ..taking place where obscure  scenery commands the night...spread out over a table as the gallery lurks about sampling your delicacies. .not so delicately. .
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Delicious imagination you got there.Duende...

Thank you so much for your comment and for calling this delicious, Naajir!

your delicacies. .not so delicately. . > really love your description :-)

Hot as hell...steamy ink 🔥💋
Love it Duende 💓

Thank you so much, dear Heart!

Great to hear you love this piece :-)

It sounds like you turned the tables Duende, first a submissive and very delicious lamb until

I’m morphed into
an aggressive animal
shivering and quavering

and justice is served.

A succulent write with a happy ending.  Now what's for dessert?

Thank you so much for you comment, Crowfly!

You make me smile with your view :-)
Aggressive can be interpreted in a different way, though it's always nice to hear what other people see in it...

I can go for some strawberries and cream now, served with a glass of champagne!

Simply Brilliant.. and luscious.. excellent write.. you got skills..



Dave

Thank you so much, Dave!

You make me blush...
Glad to hear you enjoyed this one :-)

I`m a fan.. bravo!

lips licking
fingers flicking
juices are dripping
tongues keep slipping
canes continue whipping

Thank you so much for your comment!

Fans are always welcome as does a bravo :-)

My apologies for not replying sooner, I found out I forgot :-/

What a pick, for my first read!! (There is now, an aggressively raw and passionate porno playing in my mind)
Many thumbs up, among other things! I'm playing!
Love it! Eager to get to the next one.

Wow... talking about an enthusiastic comment :-D

Well... if this was your first pick, you have a pretty good idea of what the main theme of most of my erotica is ;-)

Thank you so much for your amazing comment, you've just made my day!

P.S. Enjoy the play...

Haha!! your comment gave me an eruption of laughter. We're gunna get along great!! :p

yes

now see.. .

mmhm mm mmgood,

speechless my Duende,  
dreamy with hearts in my eyes

Mmm... was what I was thinking while writing :-)

I'm glad to hear it mmm'ed you as well!

Thank you for your amazing comment, lady!