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Yours Sir
Waiting
anticipating
heart pulsating
Yours Sir, i
mumble before
you chain me
Postition 1
on my knees
ready to please
mouth open wide
Position 2
blindfolded
hands chained
and lifted up high
my legs spread wide
Position 3
where to start
it’s all a bit hazy
and i'm really dizzy
my memory has faded
will you fill in the blanks?
anticipating
heart pulsating
Yours Sir, i
mumble before
you chain me
Postition 1
on my knees
ready to please
mouth open wide
Position 2
blindfolded
hands chained
and lifted up high
my legs spread wide
Position 3
where to start
it’s all a bit hazy
and i'm really dizzy
my memory has faded
will you fill in the blanks?
Author's Note
TPR - Hit Me Like A Man.
https://youtu.be/Z6ZtYZiHong
https://youtu.be/Z6ZtYZiHong
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Re. Yours Sir
Anonymous
13th Oct 2016 8:02pm
Super sexy ink 💋
The title is true perfection for this write.
You captured the details superbly. 💓
The title is true perfection for this write.
You captured the details superbly. 💓
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Re: Re. Yours Sir
14th Oct 2016 2:34am
Thank you so much, lovely Heart!
I was having doubts about this one, so I'm really glad you like it :-)
I was having doubts about this one, so I'm really glad you like it :-)
Re. Yours Sir
13th Oct 2016 8:44pm
...love the dominance and submissive feel to this ink, Duende. :) Her granting him total control of her; Sexual possession is a beautiful thang'.
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Re: Re. Yours Sir
14th Oct 2016 2:37am
Submission is indeed a beautiful thing!
Thank you so much for your comment, lovely Rain!
Thank you so much for your comment, lovely Rain!
Re. Yours Sir
13th Oct 2016 9:41pm
Re: Re. Yours Sir
14th Oct 2016 2:38am
Re. Yours Sir
Anonymous
14th Oct 2016 00:03am
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Re: Re. Yours Sir
14th Oct 2016 2:39am
Re. Yours Sir
Anonymous
14th Oct 2016 1:49am
double *Ooh*
(I just got through reading Lady H`s piece so it was only fair to *Ooh* again ... ;) ...)
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Re: Re. Yours Sir
14th Oct 2016 2:41am
Lady Devlin, you make me smile :-)
You must be talking about Heart, gonna check her out!
Double ooh and some aah's back...
You must be talking about Heart, gonna check her out!
Double ooh and some aah's back...
Re. Yours Sir
14th Oct 2016 1:50am
So happy you released this 😁
Not gonna say my thoughts because they are all kinds of dirty. But you could guess 😉
Not gonna say my thoughts because they are all kinds of dirty. But you could guess 😉
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Re: Re. Yours Sir
14th Oct 2016 2:44am
Yeah, I could definitely guess ;-)
I had doubts, but I'm glad I released this... it's a bit of a warming up for the next...
Thank you so much for your comment, babe!
I had doubts, but I'm glad I released this... it's a bit of a warming up for the next...
Thank you so much for your comment, babe!
Re. Yours Sir
".......and in a haze of decadent surrender
the summoning of position 3
she bows down upon the floor
her ass lifted high towards me......Master
My crop rhythmically striking
her most tender flesh
whimpering and red
loving this position best
the bull hard and stiff,
my nature elated
she gives to me her sweetest gift
spread wide, awaiting my violation.......
.......oh tis the beauty of our
joy and pain
Pleasure in hearing you mumble my name.......Sir ;-)
Oh how you started such a delicious fire inside this ink. I'd love to here your opinion of position 3 :-)
#msdelicious. #inyourroom
the summoning of position 3
she bows down upon the floor
her ass lifted high towards me......Master
My crop rhythmically striking
her most tender flesh
whimpering and red
loving this position best
the bull hard and stiff,
my nature elated
she gives to me her sweetest gift
spread wide, awaiting my violation.......
.......oh tis the beauty of our
joy and pain
Pleasure in hearing you mumble my name.......Sir ;-)
Oh how you started such a delicious fire inside this ink. I'd love to here your opinion of position 3 :-)
#msdelicious. #inyourroom
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Re. Yours Sir
14th Oct 2016 2:55am
Re: Re. Yours Sir
14th Oct 2016 3:04am
Thank you so much, lovely Crim!
Killer ending? I really like that description :-)
I thought I might be asking for some trouble, but I tend to do that anyway, so I decided it should stay! So glad you liked it!!!
Love, Duende
Killer ending? I really like that description :-)
I thought I might be asking for some trouble, but I tend to do that anyway, so I decided it should stay! So glad you liked it!!!
Love, Duende
Re. Yours Sir
15th Oct 2016 6:02am
I have to say,I really loved the photo
And your lines are truly seductive to read...
And your lines are truly seductive to read...
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Re: Re. Yours Sir
Thank you so much, Kasai!
Great to hear you love the pic (and my poem) because that was what started this piece!
I had something else in mind, but the words went this way... sometimes that happens ;-)
Great to hear you love the pic (and my poem) because that was what started this piece!
I had something else in mind, but the words went this way... sometimes that happens ;-)
Re. Yours Sir
15th Oct 2016 2:09pm
Ahhh, Duende, luv ~
I have made my way to your environs at last and glad I am, indeed, to be here.
I can see that I shall have to delve deeply within your works for this is quite the excruciate enticement... ;-*
You write here with a concise intensity that tightens the suspense and makes what is already a riveting poem yet more erotically focused.
One feels the frisson of barest breath teasing across skin throughout this creation. Tis sensual beyond belief, luv...
I have made my way to your environs at last and glad I am, indeed, to be here.
I can see that I shall have to delve deeply within your works for this is quite the excruciate enticement... ;-*
You write here with a concise intensity that tightens the suspense and makes what is already a riveting poem yet more erotically focused.
One feels the frisson of barest breath teasing across skin throughout this creation. Tis sensual beyond belief, luv...
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Re: Re. Yours Sir
Dear Savaja,
How to reply on a comment like yours?
I am so honored by your words and your praise, that you left me a bit speechless... that doesn't happen very often ;-)
Welcome to my page and thank you so much for reading me and leaving such an extensive and beautiful comment! I will delve into your words as well...
Love to you,
Duende
How to reply on a comment like yours?
I am so honored by your words and your praise, that you left me a bit speechless... that doesn't happen very often ;-)
Welcome to my page and thank you so much for reading me and leaving such an extensive and beautiful comment! I will delve into your words as well...
Love to you,
Duende
Re. Yours Sir
15th Oct 2016 10:16pm
The first two positions are so intense I don't wonder at your dizziness in the third. I love that open end, inviting the reader to contribute to the fantasy. The pleasure's yours, Madam.
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Re: Re. Yours Sir
16th Oct 2016 4:22am
Re. Yours Sir
Anonymous
16th Oct 2016 4:18am
Wowzers Duende.......what a hot write......very visual I must say.......enjoyed this very much.......really crafty in talent here......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. Yours Sir
Thank you so much, flowery one!
I'm so glad to hear you enjoyed this :-)
Purple love back at ya!
I'm so glad to hear you enjoyed this :-)
Purple love back at ya!
Re. Yours Sir
17th Oct 2016 10:16am
a paddle fits so well in a loving hand;
there are more than 3 pleasures.
venerable poetry...
there are more than 3 pleasures.
venerable poetry...
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Re: Re. Yours Sir
17th Oct 2016 3:18pm
Well... I never felt it in my hand ;-)
There are certainly more than 3 pleasures...
Thank you so much for your comment, John!
There are certainly more than 3 pleasures...
Thank you so much for your comment, John!
Re. Yours Sir
17th Oct 2016 12:44pm
Oh, Duende... I love this write. I am amazed by the beauty of submission and dominance that my inexperienced skin longs for it. Having glimpses of it from your ink...just wonderful.
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Re: Re. Yours Sir
17th Oct 2016 3:24pm
Ah, my dark one...
I am grateful that you enjoy the glimpses I share!
Dominance and submission is indeed a beatiful thing... I'm sure one day you will take the first step on a never ending journey!
Thank you so much for your comment!
I am grateful that you enjoy the glimpses I share!
Dominance and submission is indeed a beatiful thing... I'm sure one day you will take the first step on a never ending journey!
Thank you so much for your comment!
Re. Yours Sir
Anonymous
22nd Oct 2016 5:45pm
Totally fucking brilliant, and sexy.. passionate ink..
Dave
Dave
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Re: Re. Yours Sir
22nd Oct 2016 6:09pm
Totally brilliant comment... you make me smile :-)
You are my number one commenter today :-)
Thank you so much!
You are my number one commenter today :-)
Thank you so much!
Re. Yours Sir
22nd Oct 2016 6:38pm
Re: Re. Yours Sir
22nd Oct 2016 6:48pm
Well... that's not up to me to decide ;-)
Thank you for your comment!
I truly appreciate it!
Thank you for your comment!
I truly appreciate it!
Re. Yours Sir
Anonymous
30th Oct 2016 1:01am
Duende, I have a special place deep within me for this type of subject matter...on point dear lady and huge smiles were brought to my lips - luuuuuuuved this....thank you for the fantastic read!
~ Áine
~ Áine
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Re: Re. Yours Sir
31st Oct 2016 5:00am
Wow... what amazing comment! Thank you so much, Aine!
I'm glad to hear you loved this one and that it brought smiles to your lips!
You made me smile too with your words :-)
I'm glad to hear you loved this one and that it brought smiles to your lips!
You made me smile too with your words :-)
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