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Bubbly Blur
some where between
babbles and bubbles
we became a blues
of bohemian bliss
kisses and wishes
and strawberry sins
genitals and lips and
all there is in between
between you and me
the heat was rising
driving us insane
on a bubbly trip
let us rewind
first: wining
then: dining
third: dessert
finale: popping
or was it the other
way around, where
am i? where was i?
oh right the cork
it always starts
with a solid cork
popping came first
and last without doubt
babbles and bubbles
we became a blues
of bohemian bliss
kisses and wishes
and strawberry sins
genitals and lips and
all there is in between
between you and me
the heat was rising
driving us insane
on a bubbly trip
let us rewind
first: wining
then: dining
third: dessert
finale: popping
or was it the other
way around, where
am i? where was i?
oh right the cork
it always starts
with a solid cork
popping came first
and last without doubt
Author's Note
The Corrs - Summer Wine.
https://youtu.be/Vo1RKTGsm68
https://youtu.be/Vo1RKTGsm68
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Re. Bubbly Blur
11th Oct 2016 6:32pm
Love that picture 😁 The poem was super hot as well. It reads somewhat like a fairy tale. Really brings it to life.
It's been a sexy day here at dup 😎
It's been a sexy day here at dup 😎
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It most definitely is ;-)
Great to hear you think my poem is super hot and that you love the picture... it took me a while to find one that suited the poem!
Thanks for your comment... you make me smile :-)
Great to hear you think my poem is super hot and that you love the picture... it took me a while to find one that suited the poem!
Thanks for your comment... you make me smile :-)
Re. Bubbly Blur
11th Oct 2016 6:50pm
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My dear Crim,
So glad to hear you love this one!
Thank you so much for your comment :-)
Love, Duende
So glad to hear you love this one!
Thank you so much for your comment :-)
Love, Duende
Re. Bubbly Blur
11th Oct 2016 6:51pm
I love the B-B-Beeeeee iliteration:
"... between
babbles and bubbles
we became a blues
of bohemian bliss " Definitely caught my attention
and then into a bubbly blue haze , we descend
".....kisses and wishes
and strawberry sins
genitals and lips and
all there is in between
between you and me
the heat was rising
driving us insane
on a bubbly trip " I could really use this getaway today, right now!
wining, dinning, sexy-azz whining and oh , the popping. What a powerful metaphor for a whole lotta good things.
A delightful piece of ink on an otherwise ho-hum kinda' day here in the states 😉 A slightly different face for you Ms. Duende.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p1JPKLa-Ofc
"... between
babbles and bubbles
we became a blues
of bohemian bliss " Definitely caught my attention
and then into a bubbly blue haze , we descend
".....kisses and wishes
and strawberry sins
genitals and lips and
all there is in between
between you and me
the heat was rising
driving us insane
on a bubbly trip " I could really use this getaway today, right now!
wining, dinning, sexy-azz whining and oh , the popping. What a powerful metaphor for a whole lotta good things.
A delightful piece of ink on an otherwise ho-hum kinda' day here in the states 😉 A slightly different face for you Ms. Duende.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p1JPKLa-Ofc
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Thank you so much for your comment, MrM!
Great to hear you love the BBB alliteration and the metaphor!
When I learned the English word 'cork' I knew I had to do something with it... our Dutch 'kurk' doesn't sound like, or is in letters almost simular to anything else but 'kurk' ;-)
"I could really use this getaway today" > that makes me smile and that's also the reason I sometimes write poems like this one, just to snap out of reality... hihi @ ho-hum kinda' day!
Slightly different? Just another facet... there are more poems that are a bit 'off' but I never posted them...
Thank you for the music... cheers!
Great to hear you love the BBB alliteration and the metaphor!
When I learned the English word 'cork' I knew I had to do something with it... our Dutch 'kurk' doesn't sound like, or is in letters almost simular to anything else but 'kurk' ;-)
"I could really use this getaway today" > that makes me smile and that's also the reason I sometimes write poems like this one, just to snap out of reality... hihi @ ho-hum kinda' day!
Slightly different? Just another facet... there are more poems that are a bit 'off' but I never posted them...
Thank you for the music... cheers!
Re. Bubbly Blur
11th Oct 2016 7:28pm
I love the association between wine and...other stuff... :) Especially the popping! Sheer delight to read from beginning to end! :)
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12th Oct 2016 11:15am
Thank you so much!
I'm glad to hear it was a sheer delight, I had so much fun writing this one :-)
I'm glad to hear it was a sheer delight, I had so much fun writing this one :-)
Re. Bubbly Blur
11th Oct 2016 11:16pm
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Thank you so much sweet Poetik,
You brought a smile to my face with your comment :-)
You brought a smile to my face with your comment :-)
Re. Bubbly Blur
12th Oct 2016 00:50am
A very clever write, Duende. particularly the "popping" double entendre. Could be a blast of carbonation or something else entirely. Effervescent work in either case...
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12th Oct 2016 11:22am
Thank you so much for your comment!
Glad to hear you enjoyed my write and thank you for teaching me a new word: effervescent...
Glad to hear you enjoyed my write and thank you for teaching me a new word: effervescent...
Re. Bubbly Blur
12th Oct 2016 2:45am
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Thank you so much, Rain
You brought a smile to my face... creatively clever: I like that :-)
You brought a smile to my face... creatively clever: I like that :-)
Re. Bubbly Blur
12th Oct 2016 10:51am
Haha! Love it...
Your word play is excellent here... Brought a smile.
Happy popping ;)
Al-x-
Your word play is excellent here... Brought a smile.
Happy popping ;)
Al-x-
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12th Oct 2016 11:27am
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Anonymous
12th Oct 2016 12:41pm
Love this sexy write....and all of its in betweens;) 💓
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Anonymous
12th Oct 2016 8:18pm
Wine ... it`ll do it every time;) ... Love the wordplay from beginning to end; made me smile ... love you, beautiful Lady ... ~Devlin.
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13th Oct 2016 5:13am
Yep, wine will do ;-)
Thank you so much for your comment, I'm glad I made you smile!
Love you too, sexy!
Thank you so much for your comment, I'm glad I made you smile!
Love you too, sexy!
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12th Oct 2016 10:08pm
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13th Oct 2016 5:15am
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20th Nov 2016 7:31pm
Wildly wonderful write!!! ~~>Effervescently<~~ entertaining!! hehe!! Magically magnificent and mirthful!!
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So happy to hear you enjoyed this ink! I think this was the most fun one to write... the idea popped up in my mind and I knew I had to do something with it ;-)
Thank you so much for all your comments... you made this girl smile big time :-D
Thank you so much for all your comments... you made this girl smile big time :-D
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21st Nov 2016 11:13pm
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14th Feb 2017 3:38pm
This piece sets the memories and imagination flowing... Enjoyed and will read again for sure :)
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15th Feb 2017 5:13am
Thank you so much for your comment and the reading list add, great to hear you enjoyed this one! Welcome to page :-)