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Hunger
I want you to devour
Me
I want your mouth all over
My succulence
I want you to suck
My glistening ruby until
I cannot stand it anymore...
and then,
suck some more
I want your face messy with me...and
I want you to be maddened
with my heady scent,
compelled
to have your fingers buried in my
desperate
dripping
necessity
while the sensual supple of your
mouth
worries
my swollen
rubied peak.
I want you soooo achingly
Adamantine
that you turn your
body
while you're bedeviling me so angelically
and
shove
your
Urgency
into my mouth,
pumping your hips, not letting me escape,
me pinned beneath you
incapable of breath without inhaling more
of your strength,
taking you further,
you surging deeply...
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Re. Hunger
6th Oct 2016 11:11pm
i'm surging with sensual desire of this sexy write..
oh beautiful Savaja you have such a way about you :)
love Crim
oh beautiful Savaja you have such a way about you :)
love Crim
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Re. Hunger
6th Oct 2016 11:33pm
Re. Hunger
7th Oct 2016 00:50am
I...this...holy...yeah...lost the words...where's my fan? Is it hot in here?
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Anonymous
7th Oct 2016 3:32am
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Re. Hunger
7th Oct 2016 4:51am
"desperate
dripping
necessity ", the form makes this line extra sexy to me for some reason lol, intense provocative write Savaja...
dripping
necessity ", the form makes this line extra sexy to me for some reason lol, intense provocative write Savaja...
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Re. Hunger
7th Oct 2016 10:49am
Now THAT...is my kinda hunger!!
Yea, your command would be my wish lmao... Wowzers!! :)
Yea, your command would be my wish lmao... Wowzers!! :)
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7th Oct 2016 6:13pm
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Anonymous
8th Oct 2016 1:59am
Tingle maker is right!!! My gorgeous Savaja your pen does it again...this chick is clenching thighs and drooling behind rosy lips...what I would give to be in the same room with you for an afternoon, ltm...
With much much love always - Schiitaryn xoxox
With much much love always - Schiitaryn xoxox
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Anonymous
8th Oct 2016 10:39am
Ah my luv... their you are .. beautiful seduction as only you can deliver.
✨Always peace Trish
✨Always peace Trish
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Re. Hunger
8th Oct 2016 8:27pm
My, my...
sounds a like a yummy time.
An all you can eat buffet. So
Very hot and visually stimulating.
Keith
sounds a like a yummy time.
An all you can eat buffet. So
Very hot and visually stimulating.
Keith
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Re. Hunger
9th Oct 2016 4:54am
When words sparks so many joyous images my brain is dancing! Exquisite pen!
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Anonymous
10th Oct 2016 1:11am
What a lovely write and so demanding, uhmmmmm I am all about that you know.
I would love to hear this pass your lovely lips in a recorded version. then who knows what I might do?
I would love to hear this pass your lovely lips in a recorded version. then who knows what I might do?
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Re. Hunger
16th Oct 2016 5:38am
Dear Savaja,
I'm so glad to have landed on your page, this write is a stunner!
while you're bedeviling me so angelically > I adore this description!
It's the first time I see someone use the word 'ruby' and I really love your choice of wording in Necessity and Urgency (that's so clever, I wish I came up with that ;-)
I had to look up Adamantine... such a beautiful word, I am in awe!
I'm so glad to have landed on your page, this write is a stunner!
while you're bedeviling me so angelically > I adore this description!
It's the first time I see someone use the word 'ruby' and I really love your choice of wording in Necessity and Urgency (that's so clever, I wish I came up with that ;-)
I had to look up Adamantine... such a beautiful word, I am in awe!
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Anonymous
28th Oct 2016 2:46pm
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Anonymous
31st Oct 2016 00:09am
This drips with sensuality and passion mixed with needs of such carnality...I am in awe...stunning poetry Ms. Savaja.
~ Áine
~ Áine
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Re. Hunger
16th Oct 2017 2:43pm