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~poetic lover~
i'll love you with my quiet storm
a thundering heart threatening
to burst from my breast
*
as tempest winds of amour
cross the ocean's vastness
to caress your face at your shores
*
cumming to you as you fitfully sleep
in dream time my passion will find you
easing the dull ache of my lonesome heart
*
you are the one I seek
the man that gets me excited
as a storm brews in my panties
*
I ride the waves of ecstasy
as my storm becomes a tsunami of desire
then comes the sweet creamy rain of satisfaction
*
light up a smoke and smile
my fire doused, my arousal sated
*
ravaged by a poetic lover
who knows how to tame my elements
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Re. ~poetic lover~
So beautiful and seductive,Crimsin
Really want a smoke all the sudden.....
Much enjoyed
Really want a smoke all the sudden.....
Much enjoyed
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13th Sep 2016 12:13pm
Re. ~poetic lover~
13th Sep 2016 12:20pm
Yes, really enjoyable read. Makes me want one of those cigarettes. Great word use.
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13th Sep 2016 3:31pm
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Anonymous
13th Sep 2016 12:22pm
How I love this so 💓
This is so sensually delicious.
Every word so vivid, and deeply felt.
Very seductive, and sexy as hell.
This is so sensually delicious.
Every word so vivid, and deeply felt.
Very seductive, and sexy as hell.
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13th Sep 2016 3:30pm
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13th Sep 2016 1:01pm
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13th Sep 2016 3:31pm
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13th Sep 2016 2:17pm
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13th Sep 2016 3:32pm
Re. ~poetic lover~
13th Sep 2016 2:43pm
oh my stars.... i have missed your poems darling one...
... storms in a tea cup or a g-string; beautiful either way
simply loved this
xo
... storms in a tea cup or a g-string; beautiful either way
simply loved this
xo
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13th Sep 2016 3:33pm
Re. ~poetic lover~
13th Sep 2016 2:51pm
" Then comes the sweet creamy rain of satisfaction "
I've just creamed my mind space...
I've just creamed my mind space...
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13th Sep 2016 3:33pm
Re. ~poetic lover~
The Internet has many such poetic lovers.
I have most certainly been there, done that.
As I sit here I have around my neck a pendant
made by a lovers' hand. It came with a handwritten note . . .
"The heart -- I love you!"
(she mixed her blood in the ink to paint the heart)
The pieces of sea glass -- gathered by Lake Erie.
The shell -- I picked this up in Rhode Island while thinking of you.
The silver wire -- you'll notice 5 bands of silver -- that is my hand holding your heart.
I have most certainly been there, done that.
As I sit here I have around my neck a pendant
made by a lovers' hand. It came with a handwritten note . . .
"The heart -- I love you!"
(she mixed her blood in the ink to paint the heart)
The pieces of sea glass -- gathered by Lake Erie.
The shell -- I picked this up in Rhode Island while thinking of you.
The silver wire -- you'll notice 5 bands of silver -- that is my hand holding your heart.
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Re: Re. ~poetic lover~
13th Sep 2016 3:35pm
thank you Jerry for sharing your own personal experience with me what a beautiful treasure you've been given by someone so dear to your heart.. I love it :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
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13th Sep 2016 4:53pm
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13th Sep 2016 5:00pm
I deeply appreciate you sharing Jerry I hope your's is a wonderful day today :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
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Anonymous
13th Sep 2016 3:38pm
Brenda, i really like this new style you've been implementing lately, little snippets of pictures in some abstract way giving us a reflection of the whole picture. This is really beautiful, i was thinking which stanza i like the most but honestly i think each one compliments one another so well.
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13th Sep 2016 3:52pm
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Anonymous
13th Sep 2016 4:26pm
`ravaged by a poetic lover
who knows how to tame my elements` <----------I can relate. . .What is it with men & poetry?. . .Maybe, and perhaps it is a language that our own men fail to speak. . .Hmm. . .so many thought provoking lines, where to begin is beyond me. . .A stunning write. . .love to you, my Queen. . .~Devlin/TS.
who knows how to tame my elements` <----------I can relate. . .What is it with men & poetry?. . .Maybe, and perhaps it is a language that our own men fail to speak. . .Hmm. . .so many thought provoking lines, where to begin is beyond me. . .A stunning write. . .love to you, my Queen. . .~Devlin/TS.
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13th Sep 2016 4:59pm
thank you graciously my Queen yes these poetic men do have a way about them :)
love you..
xo Brenda
love you..
xo Brenda
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13th Sep 2016 6:42pm
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13th Sep 2016 7:02pm
Re. ~poetic lover~
14th Sep 2016 00:37am
I LOVE the this and pic that goes with this. I yearn for it be just like mine. <3
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Re: Re. ~poetic lover~
14th Sep 2016 11:38am
thank you Mysterious one you made me smile it is like yours lovely lady :)
love Crim
love Crim
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15th Sep 2016 2:13am
Re. ~poetic lover~
14th Sep 2016 00:42am
I always enjoy your weather, peaceful, sultry or turbulent. There could be driven snow or sunshine. Demons or angels stirring things up. I'm no meteorologist so I'll just say the forecast calls for Crim....
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14th Sep 2016 11:38am
Re. ~poetic lover~
15th Sep 2016 5:45pm
Dear Crim, I think this is my favorite of yours so far!
Such a sensual easy flowing piece ♥
"I ride the waves of ecstasy
as my storm becomes a tsunami of desire
then comes the sweet creamy rain of satisfaction" > beautiful lines, love the elements in it, so ending the poem with 'elements' was perfection!!!
Such a sensual easy flowing piece ♥
"I ride the waves of ecstasy
as my storm becomes a tsunami of desire
then comes the sweet creamy rain of satisfaction" > beautiful lines, love the elements in it, so ending the poem with 'elements' was perfection!!!
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17th Sep 2016 11:29am
Re. ~poetic lover~
Ms. Brenda
So sensually beautiful...
You are a seductive
little girl with words
that arouse and soothe.
Beautiful..simply beautiful .
With all due
respects my
friend ...
Love
Keith
So sensually beautiful...
You are a seductive
little girl with words
that arouse and soothe.
Beautiful..simply beautiful .
With all due
respects my
friend ...
Love
Keith
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17th Sep 2016 11:30am
Re. ~poetic lover~
17th Sep 2016 6:56pm
Ooo how this delivered me
in the hands of delicious
chills. ..
Ouw!
-Howlings
in the hands of delicious
chills. ..
Ouw!
-Howlings
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18th Sep 2016 00:06am