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To My Sacred Dearest Friend ~ Lily
I'm not sure you know how much I luv ya
if only you could count the many tears
my heart has bled and shared with yours
you've given me friendship outlasting them all
your own strength gives me courage to face tomorrow
when I honestly felt hopeless and didn't want to
you were always there to say......
"now flower you know that's not right"
making me laugh thru the sadness
you always told me exactly how it was
even when it hurt me deep within
then your spiritual hug would heal me
thru the years I've been blessed by you
feeling that precious smile upon my soul
like an Angel always looking over me
how truly beautiful you are inside and out
with those peering gorgeous sapphire eyes
to a hugging, caring heart beneath your skin
my life with all those who have met you
has been blessed beyond the heavens
thank you my eternal Sista for luving me
Copyright © 2016 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
if only you could count the many tears
my heart has bled and shared with yours
you've given me friendship outlasting them all
your own strength gives me courage to face tomorrow
when I honestly felt hopeless and didn't want to
you were always there to say......
"now flower you know that's not right"
making me laugh thru the sadness
you always told me exactly how it was
even when it hurt me deep within
then your spiritual hug would heal me
thru the years I've been blessed by you
feeling that precious smile upon my soul
like an Angel always looking over me
how truly beautiful you are inside and out
with those peering gorgeous sapphire eyes
to a hugging, caring heart beneath your skin
my life with all those who have met you
has been blessed beyond the heavens
thank you my eternal Sista for luving me
Copyright © 2016 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
Published 11th Sep 2016
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Anonymous
11th Sep 2016 3:37am
Ah, my Flower ... I hope Lily knows how much she is cherished to have her own poem; such a divine tribute penned by a wonderful woman. . .touched, and heartfelt is what I grasped through and through. . .love to you, Lady. . .~Devlin.
11th Sep 2016 4:20am
Precious Dev......thank you for your beautiful words.......Lily and I have shared it all together.......by each other's side is where we've always been and will always be.......appreciate you my friend......purple luv & hugs xo :)
What a compelling and heartfelt piece of poetical writing, flower.
Friend, as you have described is certainty honored by these
loving words you have graced your beautiful poem with. Your
friend will read these words and weep I have a strong feeling.
Can't say it any better than Delvin, so I won't try.
Friend, as you have described is certainty honored by these
loving words you have graced your beautiful poem with. Your
friend will read these words and weep I have a strong feeling.
Can't say it any better than Delvin, so I won't try.
11th Sep 2016 4:30am
Awe SG......you're another precious friend I'm blessed with.......so appreciate your graceful words upon this ink.......I wanted her to know exactly how much I felt her.......cry tears for her.......luv her......I'm so very blessed to have crossed life paths with such a beautiful soul......as with others......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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11th Sep 2016 3:50am
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Sista Lily.......I think your snorty laugh is cute......LOL!!! Seriously.......I'm so blessed by having you in my life to share every thing with.......the friendship we have given each other thru the years has never once wavered.....thank you for sharing with me with all that you are and ignoring all my flaws as well. You will not be alone thru the hard days and decisions that are coming your way.......honored by the RL add on.......standing beside you always.......prayers......luv & hugs your way xo 🌸🤗💜
11th Sep 2016 3:55am
11th Sep 2016 4:53am
Hey Kavik......that they do my precious friend.......Lily is very good at that......if I remember right.....so are you.....thank you for those times.......appreciate you.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
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11th Sep 2016 4:25am
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11th Sep 2016 4:55am
Welcome to DU!! Hi Punjabi......very happy you've stopped by to visit my page.......glad you liked this......thank you.....purple smiles & hugs xo :)
Anonymous
11th Sep 2016 4:31am
Aww 💜
Such a beautiful tribute. Heartfelt, lovely words, which makes the heart smile and feel comfort and love so deeply. 💓
Such a beautiful tribute. Heartfelt, lovely words, which makes the heart smile and feel comfort and love so deeply. 💓
11th Sep 2016 4:57am
Hi Heart......thank you for such sweet words.......Lily always makes me smile and laugh.......I'm glad this touched you......purple luv & hugs xo :)
11th Sep 2016 6:02am
some are lucky and you are one I Have just come after some fun sleeping now ere runs all fun your poetry continues to allure me then i compose one softly as it may be and now tis a late hour to sleep still my eyes for your screen do leap come again be a sport tell your sista what she is thought of by poets as harsh as you can b e but slump when it comes to flowery poetry you are soft and sweet again even though DUP gives you a name insane but do thus friendly remain the DUP is your domain both as soft and melodious way and cummmm you may in your own imitable way yes i will says again
12th Sep 2016 3:17am
Hi Again.......this is a heck of a response.......thank you for taking time for me......Lily is sacred to me......I wouldn't still be here if not for her......I appreciate your words and smile upon my page.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
ur a good sister that's why ALL read ur poetry...
it not only inspires but fires
i see so many gals daily in the garden of Eden ...
THE comment is now befitting
it not only inspires but fires
i see so many gals daily in the garden of Eden ...
THE comment is now befitting
Thank you Again....it's definetly be lifting......appreciate you.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
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11th Sep 2016 11:17am
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12th Sep 2016 3:28am
Thank you EW......so glad you liked this.......Lily is a beautiful soul.......we've shared much together......appreciate you always.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
11th Sep 2016 11:48am
beautiful Flower such a loving write from such a tender soul as yours to sweet Lily :)
love Crim
love Crim
12th Sep 2016 3:29am
Precious Crim......always make me smile.......your words touch me.....Lily is so very sweet......glad you enjoyed.......thank you for the luv......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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12th Sep 2016 3:13am
Sweet Lily......your words touch me.......I'm glad you feel stronger cause you're one of the strongest souls I know......remember that.......never give up on you.....luv ya my sacred friend......xo 🤗💜
Beautiful tribute. BTW, is that you two in the picture or was the picture a symbolic choice?
12th Sep 2016 3:32am
Hey Solomon.......thank you for your thoughtful words.......no that's not a pic of Lily and I.....it's one that programs the meaning or our sacred friendship......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Thought of a rhyming caption for the picture, imagining they are waving perhaps at someone passing by on a boat:
The brunette and the redhead waded in the sea,
Waves passed under their high hems well above the knee,
Brunette's left hand hand held Red's right, other hands were free,
Waving gladly as our boat sailed by, just for me.
"Nice girls love a sailor", a song says merrily.
I thought, get me among them we'd make a merry three.
The brunette and the redhead waded in the sea,
Waves passed under their high hems well above the knee,
Brunette's left hand hand held Red's right, other hands were free,
Waving gladly as our boat sailed by, just for me.
"Nice girls love a sailor", a song says merrily.
I thought, get me among them we'd make a merry three.
13th Sep 2016 4:59am
Oh Solomon you made my night with this......last line made me giggle.......thank you for sharing your imagination with me.......you're wonderful.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
11th Sep 2016 7:58pm
12th Sep 2016 3:33am
Hi 23.......you're smile in always a welcome and encouragement.......thank you very much......purple luv & hugs xo :)
12th Sep 2016 5:10am
Touching tribute to your friend. Loving others is the highest calling. Namaste.
13th Sep 2016 10:30pm
Hey DC.......I agree with you.......luving other's is a sacred thing for sure.......specially a friend white such a beautiful heart and soul as Lily.......thank you for your heart felt words.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
12th Sep 2016 6:34pm
that is beautiful flower shows true luv for your friend and shows you are a great friend ,well done flower I know lily will like it very much
13th Sep 2016 10:33pm
My sweet friend........you're one of my longest friends that taught me what friendship is all about.......Lily is an awesome soul.......our friendship has been thru many trials and have never wavered.......thank you for the blessing of your thoughts.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
12th Sep 2016 11:24pm
You deserve Lily's luv Flower and I'm sure you reciprocate her warmth. Your poems indicate that you're a friend to be treasured, a kind (and very talented) soul. Regarding this Lily would say "now flower you really nailed it!" Excellent work!
13th Sep 2016 10:37pm
Hey Crow........lily and I have always been very close from the beginning of our friendship......thank you for your thoughts about our friendship and the encouragement of my talent.......I'm very touched by your words........purple luv & hugs xo :)
15th Sep 2016 1:38am
Have mercy......I sure did miss it......will answer it when I'm of sound mind.....sorry for missing it......have a blessed night xo :)
