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infection
a haunting in the silence
insisting on a takeover
a twisting unkindness
harnessing many different forms
its hatred burrows inside,
burning
its lust consumes the body,
tempting
its trickery induces hope,
misleading
slithering over the surface
injecting a venom so powerful
it pushes from within
and outside, it suffocates
a wild entanglement
that appeared so wonderfully
mouth-watering
weakens at a mere glance
and crumbles at a touch
march 12, 2011
insisting on a takeover
a twisting unkindness
harnessing many different forms
its hatred burrows inside,
burning
its lust consumes the body,
tempting
its trickery induces hope,
misleading
slithering over the surface
injecting a venom so powerful
it pushes from within
and outside, it suffocates
a wild entanglement
that appeared so wonderfully
mouth-watering
weakens at a mere glance
and crumbles at a touch
march 12, 2011
Published 27th Jul 2011
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27th Jul 2011 4:07pm
very infectious poem ashley. well written.
one or two things might improve the overall read.
*it's needs an apostrophe,you might consider capitalizing the i in it's as there is no period at the end of the fourth line.
that said i really enjoyed reading it.
shine on!
one or two things might improve the overall read.
*it's needs an apostrophe,you might consider capitalizing the i in it's as there is no period at the end of the fourth line.
that said i really enjoyed reading it.
shine on!
27th Jul 2011 5:57pm
thank you very much!! i'm glad you enjoyed it :)
with the "its" however, if i put in an apostrophe, it will make it "it is" instead of the possessive.
thank you again for your comment!
with the "its" however, if i put in an apostrophe, it will make it "it is" instead of the possessive.
thank you again for your comment!
27th Jul 2011 6:02pm
Anonymous
27th Jul 2011 8:09pm
You have such a lovely style of writing. (:
