Stars Harmonizing~

oh beautiful Rain completely mesmerized and seduced by this cosmic heavenly verse :)

love Brenda

I love your comment, Crim! :) Thank you so much...

Holy. Cow. Gorgeous!

Big smile! Thank you Willow! :)

Thank you so much Adam! Truly appreciated! :)

This felt magical!!! Such a beautiful spill my sweetness :)

I'm pleased you took in my mystical font. :) Thank you Poe!

If you won't object to some honest criticism, I think that there is a sort of overkill in this poem -- sometimes you pile the imagery on too thick. There should be a simpler, more elegant way to say something rather than "I feel galactic morsels of his christened verbs…
globally warming my intellectual gifts." VMMV.

Thanks AlwaysHungry for your criticism.  
My pen is a metaphoric whore. She spreads her legs wide and constantly across the page.  
Sorry it feels like overkill to you, but its how I write. Simplifying my thoughts is not an option.  
Though after you quoted my lines, they do seem a little stuffy. I’ll try to soften it up a bit. Thank you! :)

Miss Rain, Miss Rain. . .there's nothing to soften here, my Queen. . .You're style is unique, boundless and nowhere near the word "whore". . .if you bend your poetic pen to please others than you'll be just another poet who can strum two lines together, but for a poetess like you who brings such imagery and structure and form, not to mention feeling, depth and desire into your poetry (such as this one & your countless others). . .you should be more than just worshiped and more than just appreciated. . .it is poetess's like you that make me WANT to be a better poet, and without your inspiration would simply be just heartbreaking [for me] . . . I love you, and that is my thought.

~Devlin.
 

I've already stated my feeling towards your amazing and humbling comment already, but let me publicly say, I adore you as a person, in awe of you as a poet, and respect you as friend.  
You're simply the best! xoxoxo  
Deeply appreciative of you Lyn!  

Thank you so much OS! ;) So happy you decided to keep her... xo

Lady Rain.. absolutely beautiful..  such passion.. loved this write..



Dave

I love that you love this ink, Dave! Thanks sweetheart...

....such a lovely comment shared by you Amedeo, thank you! :) I'll make an effort to knock at your front door soon...

Every planet, like every person, is uniquely different,  Yet despite their differences, they're able to orbit each other in harmony.

...now this was pretty darn profound, snug! I adore this comment! Thank you hun... :)

My hell Rain . This is beautiful.  You are memorizing.
Trish

lol...love your exciting, beautiful one! Thank you for the sonnet support and for adding her to your cyber-shelf. :)

Absolutely beautiful in presentation.  Passionate indeed.   The opening stanza I find to be so colorful, it's hues sparkle to this reader.  It cast a certain spell upon the mood of this ink.  Comes as no surprise, my partiality to your work but this is great.

...beautiful reply Archie. :) Always loved your comments. Thanks so much and thrilled you're keeping her.  

Celestially sensational Rain!
Makes me wanna be your rocket man...
JJ

...jj, you can be my rocket man babe, I won't mind. :) Always a joy when you bighting up my page.

Absolutely beautiful!
Xx-Sara

...so happy you think so saraeaton! :) Thank you lovely one....

My gawd Melia! Simply beautiful! I so adore you.... yes I do! :) xo

Fine lines discovered
Creativity lives here I'm positive of it xx

Appreciate the poetic love, Rose! :) Thank you!

Mesmerizing and magical write! Love it!!!

He moonlight me with perfect zenith > such an enchanting line!
And then: where poetry copulate > perfection!

...yes indeed Duende! So happy you enjoyed my attraction to the stars. :) Thank you!

The beauty of two poets writing off each other creates an unbreakable
circle of cause and effect in the atmosphere of the universe. Your use
of alliteration in this is excellent, as are your references to the spheres
and body of planets. It was a cosmic ride upon words deemed inspired.

What a stellar comment Ahavati! Of course, I don't expect anything less when it comes to you and your amazing mind. :)  Indeed our pens have been flirting with each other, so it's easy to pull energy from one another. Thank you for the read.

I'm glad you're not the coy type Rain.  You don't waste time with ambiguity but get right to the galactic heart of the matter.

"I recognize what to wish for when the
ensuing meteor in his smile develops into
beautiful sentiments circling me like
mercury orbits the sun"

There's rapture to this, and it thrills me.  I can do without the telescope looking through your eyes.

Crow, you do know you are one of the poets who comments I can not wait to read, right?! ;)  They energize me! You inspire me! :) Thank you for the constant poetic support. Pen love~

stars harmonizing..
i already knew this was gonna be
a metaphorical marvel..
..
this reaffirms why i enjoy poetry so much
..it allows space for the extravagant
and for the laymen
...and everything in between..
to me poetry is the seasoning to life
it gives it so much flava..

lovely scribe Ms Rain..

Naajir you.....you just make me feel so good inside, really you do. :) Thank you for the warm words that always manage to heat my pen's skin...

Thank you so much Tod!  :)

Hi Tara,
What a pleasure to read you again after my absence. You played with my mind, erotic sensibilities and my love of beautiful poetry. You should be published world wide and lauded.

My sweet, gentle funnyman, you move me tenderly, always! Thank you for those inspiring and humbling words. I miss you! Appreciate you stealing her. :)  

such word sex! rainy girl you can make a guy wet. haha

lollol... well hell, that wasn't my intentions with this one, but hey, if that's how it moved 'you', then this girl is all smiles. ;) Thanks Den!

ooh *applause* and throws lilies your way...wow!  such a gorgeous, tantalizing write
that one can't help but indeed be mesmerized and fall in love with each stanza
that renders one's heartbeat to dance to the rhythm of each fluid word...
no words, just amazing!  so glad that i can finally re immerse myself into your ink drops
thank you for sharing!!! -- barrie X

barrie!!!!!!  :) So good to see you my lovely friend. It's been awhile! Thank you for the sublime commentary. You have always had a way with making a poet feel good about the content they put out for others to read, and I'm so appreciative of your support. :) Thank you for adding her. xo  

"Like frost in hot cappuccino"
Love this ephemera

I'm such a cappuccino nut that you may find a line reference about it in quite a few poems of mine. :) Thank you whale, love hearing from you...    

wonderful ending..I enjoyed this very much...

Thank you for window shopping my poetry.  Cant wait to taste your ink....😘