* Mental Climax *

Rain.. oh my god!! this is so beautifully luscious.. lucky guy.. to have your eyes gaze upon him.. you are simply brilliant.. love this.. when i get room, in my reading list.. it belongs there.. love, and respect..



Dave

Dave, my gentle-Man, your mere presence adds color to any page and substance to any reading list. :) Thank you for the sweet reply.

Lyrical Hug~

How down-low?
Methinks very deep down low...
Your lyrics are ablazing!
JJ

Ha!  Low enough.... :)
You deserve a flirty spanking for babysitting her. ;) Thanks honeybun, appreciate you so much...always!

Dearest Rain,
 So wonderful to see you again.
So beautiful your words..so simply
you. Enjoyed this delicious write waiting anxiously for the next line.

Keith

There he is,..... Mr. it's been awhile.  :) So elated to see you my friend.  
I've missed you so much!  Thank you for allowing me to take in your positive vibe as you scroll through my wet lines.  Thank you for the RL add too!
 
 Pen love~

your pen spits orgasms in lyrical fits
staining pages as evidence left behind
from a crime of sublime poetry
that will be judged guilty of the most
sensual slaying the senses...

uhhh yeah..

Naajir, haven't you heard?! You are the manipulator of sexual tension. Your pen can attest to that! :)
 Thank you for the kind words sir! Appreciate you keeping her...

Rain....I've always been amazed and moved by your poerty..but this one right here...sits right at the tip..of all that is orgasmic. ..a menage a trois of intellect artistry  and emotion..channeled so beautifully through the tip of your pen...

Yeahh..had to come back for an encore reading. ..

 :)  Speechless! Thanks luv!

Sensually delicious 💓
Such a vivid write. One...which allows  the heart to race, and the legs to clench so tightly together.
Truly adore this piece.

...legs clenching tightly together....YES! Nothing like trying to hold back a heated twitch or throb. ;)
Thank you so much for the sexy comment, WHeart!

mmm...those 'veins' rolling against a tongue can be pure bliss.
Melia, you got my mind so naughty with your comment, sweet lady. Excuse me! Love your reply, thank you! xo

Beautiful beyond imagination, Rain. A masterly-achievement! Devoured this piece over and over.

Chi, you soft whisper you.
You always show up with the warmest breeze, moving me so gently with your words. Thank you beautiful spirit! So happy she's staying with you. :)

Sensual and luscious... thoroughly enjoyed!
How I missed these beautiful words of yours...

...and my words have missed that beautiful soul of yours, Duende. Always a joy when you visit me, leaving lyrical-bread-crumbs of goodness.  :) Thank you sweety!

     
....your comment was such foreplay to my eyes. Those inner thoughts you spoke about almost blossomed into fruition as my fingers traveled down south. ;) Thank you for the amazing comment Tod! Hugs for taking her home.    
   
#Iwouldloveforhimtogodownlow

haha...we want to know who is the inspiration..you can't just tease us like this Rain.  
I can just imagine the muse, rousing such fertile lands.  
This is so sensual, I'm just blown away how your words dance together in perfect tango.

lol... I'm such a tease Vee! I need to keep him for myself, don't want to share secrets. ;)  
I adore you beautiful wildflower! Your comments always... I mean always make me bubbly inside.  
Thank you gorgeous one!

Whoever the inspiration....he is definitely very lucky! This was sexy and captivating...I actually read it twice before commenting. Perfect imagery...you absolutely have a way with words Miss Rain. 💋

Well thank you darling! :) Lovely seeing a new face in my neighborhood! I'm touched by your compliment. And as soon as I have some 'extra' free time, I'll be sure to window shop your poetic-art gallery. Thanks for keeping her LyricalT

in-fucking-credible! what tongue!
if i could speak/articulate like you... i'd be selling novels.
gorgeous Rain girl!

.... you've always motivated me Dennis, nothing has changed about that ;)
btw.... I love the fact you noticed my tongue, she pretty prefect in the dark. Ha! Thanks babe....

<3 and i always will... both. ;)

So I have to tell you once again ... I just felt compelled lol. Every time you grace these pages I get sheer chills.. You are simply EVERYTHING❤️. I looooove it,

My ebony Barbie doll, it is you who is Everything. ;) Your latest piece is ravishing!
Thanks for adding her to your cyber bookshelf!
# Hugs&Love!

I love that second to last paragraph and the ending is cute...   This is a very creatively and tastefully written erotic poem.....

Thank you PoetsRevenge! :) Always great to see a new face peeking in my window. I appreciate you stopping through and I will definitely return the love soon.....

Sonsista...okay, you've been away and I've been lost and when it's time to get the train back on track...dammit woman you go and derail it...leaving me as usual clenching fists taking your name in vain, ltm...how I loved this...

"Your testosterone raging caused a lascivious holocaust
of your cock-i-ness,  
and I eagerly molded your prolific shaft into my image
as I descended down...then ascended off...just to get us off,
with the magic of my covergirl lip gloss-
glossing over your fullness."

A most excellent and superb write as always.

With love - Taryn xoxo

Lady T, when you come around you come bearing poetic gifts, dontcha'?! lol...
Always enjoy the presence of your sexy beautiful self.
Your visits are always a joy to experience! Appreciateya sweetheart! xo

I fucked you like musing was an ole skool blues record
scratching the needle inside the sluttiest creases of a
ardent harmony….
causing my body to vibrate while my voice moaned
the notes you stroked and strummed into a sensual melody
titled ' Mental Climax'.

... I just posed a question about vinyl on this site; there is a classic sensuality to it that makes for the glorious "notes", and even in the way it's held ...

This is marvelous work Lady Rain.

hmmm... a vinyl question? Now you know I'm curious! I'm gonna have to look for that thread to see what's up.... meaning... Ima' go be nosy! lol  And I agree, there is a deeper experience in love making when nostalgia is felt. I love your commentary Lobo. Great seeing you luv...

I'm in awe of this Rain.  I particularly like the spectacle of these lines:

"I needed to….I craved to,
I had to feel you grow and throb….
Swell and thrive inside both sets of my luscious warm
wet lips, until azure celestials became our lustful hell
and passion wore the cherub’s veil
with Leviticus climax as the crown."

I can only manage a crowfly climax, for what it's worth.  I'll stick around for the mental stimulation.

Crow, your comments always make me want to soar. That stanza you quoted is part of my fav too. I struggled with designing it and after reading it many times, it still seems a bit off but I like it all the same and glad you do to. And you can only manage but I can only imagine what a crowfly climax feels like. o_O  :) Thanks for babysitting her...

Stunning image to go along with the picture. At a loss of words as my lips are in a trance allowing the rushing flow That surges throughout me. In absolutely awesome of your gift.

" At a loss of words as my lips are in a trance allowing the rushing flow That surges throughout me."
^^^^^^^^^^  I just can't seem to get away from your seductive comments, nor do I want to. ;) Sexy comment G!
Thanks so much and adore that you decided to keep her.

I've perused this masterpiece yet for minute.  Righteously rich and damned grown and sexy........

"......making love till you scream, I wanna wake everybody
while we're making children, I wanna wake everybody"

well, I have now released my "Mental Climax" all over this luscious canvas.  a sensual tour de force Mistress Rain 😇/😈

and btw, I'm fo sho stealing that pic .......

.....always gotta' throw your signature trademark of song lyrics in, huh Archie?! lol.... Though you somehow manage to fine the appropriate ones because those are perfect for my opening stanza. Thank you for kidnapping her. Go head on and take the pic, you know I've snatched many of yours over the years. :)

atta girl, rainy lady, make the neighbors call animal control
ltm
tho, in all seriousness
i hereby crown you
the queen of erotic poetry
& bow to the sensuality of your pen...
... ever in awe of the fine balance
between subtle & sexual in your work
adored this
xo  

My gorgeous sexy dancedoll, you have rendered me speechless with such an amazing crown. :)
Coming from one of the BEST poetess on dup, I'm humbled and smiling like a Cheshire cat. lollol...
Thank you!...xoxo

I said it once, and to another amazing Poetess:  I`m like a bad period ... and I apologize, Woman, for missing this ... All has already been belted, shouted, praised & said ... All I have is this ``mental sigh`` to give you ... love to you, my Rain ... ~Devlin.

lol...Love your comment! We can't always response to every single poem posted, I know I can't and won't try. So I definitely don't expect others to do what I wouldn't do. I'm always thrilled when you visit Lyn. You always leave this sassy, fun and positive vibe in the air. Thank you lovely lady, for your constant support....xo

Read of the week for me
Easy being monday morning😊
But I doubt I'll read better by Friday as
This is just perfectly written
Loved it Rain xx

....humbled by your kind words and honored you're babysitting her, Rose. ;)
Any day is a great day for a mental climax, huh?! lol... Thank you!

...your adoration bloomed into a thousand words of appreciation, Adam.
Thank you so much and I appreciate you taken her.

*forgive my belated reply* xo

Thank you Danny! I do delight in your visits, comments and adds! Appreciate the poetic love! 🙂