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Like two big ole slices of Cherry Pie...I FUCK'd a round n' ate 'em...
I've never
been one
to
force
feed
my member
down
a tender
throat
But I remember, a contender
bent her will vyin for the thrill
of drill in hopes the thrust would
choke...
She spoke joyously of
all that meat, she'd greedily
eat, slobber, n' stroke...
Though things this day
went another way
when she more than implied
I just go n' have us a three way...
They were two of the most
salaciously, sexually, lasciviously
physically fiendishly greedy women
I've ever seen...I mean damn
I already 'see' the guys frontin'
GREEN' eyes...they'd despise
every second tryin' to decipher
the whys of how one guy...
could hit the jackpot
of sexual decadence... Well here's a reverence...I gave them all of me
Heavy pettin', consistent wettin'
of pussies, tongue, tits,
n' ass treatin' It was so sweet
n' kept eatin' em like
I had the munchies...
The thick cockhead strokin'
Heavy handed chokin' their backs broken in, it was 24/7 sin! Still I continued gettin' 'DAT work in...
Exhaustion didn't even have a say
Because when you've been treated
with a trip to heaven? I'm not sure
about you BUT all I ever wanna do
is STAY!!
been one
to
force
feed
my member
down
a tender
throat
But I remember, a contender
bent her will vyin for the thrill
of drill in hopes the thrust would
choke...
She spoke joyously of
all that meat, she'd greedily
eat, slobber, n' stroke...
Though things this day
went another way
when she more than implied
I just go n' have us a three way...
They were two of the most
salaciously, sexually, lasciviously
physically fiendishly greedy women
I've ever seen...I mean damn
I already 'see' the guys frontin'
GREEN' eyes...they'd despise
every second tryin' to decipher
the whys of how one guy...
could hit the jackpot
of sexual decadence... Well here's a reverence...I gave them all of me
Heavy pettin', consistent wettin'
of pussies, tongue, tits,
n' ass treatin' It was so sweet
n' kept eatin' em like
I had the munchies...
The thick cockhead strokin'
Heavy handed chokin' their backs broken in, it was 24/7 sin! Still I continued gettin' 'DAT work in...
Exhaustion didn't even have a say
Because when you've been treated
with a trip to heaven? I'm not sure
about you BUT all I ever wanna do
is STAY!!
Written by
Poetikmind
(_---_)
Published 17th Aug 2016
| Edited 26th Oct 2016
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Re. Like two big ole slices of Cherry Pie...I FUCK'd a round n' ate 'e
Anonymous
17th Aug 2016 6:18pm
So you had your pie, and ate it 2?. . .Hilarious, my fine erotic friend;). . .Enjoyed the energy & the vibe. . .~xo, Devlin.
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Re: Re. Like two big ole slices of Cherry Pie...I FUCK'd a round n' at
17th Aug 2016 6:31pm
Ah yea!! I mean why have pie n not eat it too!? lol... Thank u sweetheart, always honored n grateful for your support :)
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Jun 2019 1:47pm
17th Aug 2016 6:20pm
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Re: Re. Like two big ole slices of Cherry Pie...I FUCK'd a round n' at
17th Aug 2016 6:33pm
Well in the words of Gladys Knight: "save the overtime for me!" Lol
Thank u sweetness, honored n flattered always :)
Thank u sweetness, honored n flattered always :)
Re. Like two big ole slices of Cherry Pie...I FUCK'd a round n' ate 'e
17th Aug 2016 7:23pm
Lucky ladies indeed!!! And from the looks of these lines:
"They were two of the most
salaciously, sexually, lasciviously
physically fiendishly greedy women
I've ever seen..."
You were a lucky man! HOT INK love! 💋💋💋
"They were two of the most
salaciously, sexually, lasciviously
physically fiendishly greedy women
I've ever seen..."
You were a lucky man! HOT INK love! 💋💋💋
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Re: Re. Like two big ole slices of Cherry Pie...I FUCK'd a round n' at
17th Aug 2016 7:25pm
Lmao... Yea lucky ;) lol thank you my sweetness, happy you liked n truly grateful for all support :)
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Jun 2019 1:47pm
17th Aug 2016 9:04pm
<< post removed >>
Re: Re. Like two big ole slices of Cherry Pie...I FUCK'd a round n' at
17th Aug 2016 9:12pm
Re. Like two big ole slices of Cherry Pie...I FUCK'd a round n' ate 'e
Three times yes to this one!
Heavy handed chokin' their backs broken in, it was 24/7 sin! > brilliant, my favorite line!!!
I keep reading their backs broken, which sounds nice (haha) after chokin... just a suggestion!
(I think you put the 'in' after broken because of sin and it works both ways, though I prefer broken over broken in)
Heavy handed chokin' their backs broken in, it was 24/7 sin! > brilliant, my favorite line!!!
I keep reading their backs broken, which sounds nice (haha) after chokin... just a suggestion!
(I think you put the 'in' after broken because of sin and it works both ways, though I prefer broken over broken in)
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Re: Re. Like two big ole slices of Cherry Pie...I FUCK'd a round n' at
17th Aug 2016 9:08pm
Aaawwww.... Thank u! lol I'm happy you enjoyed n yea I agree, it works both ways but I like urs too so I may edit n change it. Appreciate ur support sweetheart :)
Re: Re. Like two big ole slices of Cherry Pie...I FUCK'd a round n' at
17th Aug 2016 9:45pm
Re: Re. Like two big ole slices of Cherry Pie...I FUCK'd a round n' at
17th Aug 2016 9:46pm
Re. Like two big ole slices of Cherry Pie...I FUCK'd a round n' ate 'e
17th Aug 2016 9:49pm
Re: Re. Like two big ole slices of Cherry Pie...I FUCK'd a round n' at
17th Aug 2016 10:51pm
Wow...such a wonderful n enthused comment! I truly appreciate that n your thoughts n time on my ink. :)
Re. Like two big ole slices of Cherry Pie...I FUCK'd a round n' ate 'e
17th Aug 2016 11:30pm
Re: Re. Like two big ole slices of Cherry Pie...I FUCK'd a round n' at
18th Aug 2016 00:49am
Well every now n agin I can be lil audacious lol. Thanks a bunch bro. Truly grateful for ur support :)
Re. Like two big ole slices of Cherry Pie...I FUCK'd a round n' ate 'e
18th Aug 2016 00:14am
"could hit the jackpot
of sexual decadence... Well here's a reverence...I gave them all of me
Heavy pettin', consistent wettin'
of pussies, tongue, tits,
n' ass treatin' I was so sweet
n' kept eatin' em like
I had the munchies.."
damn Poe love the flow to this hot erotic!
love Crim.
of sexual decadence... Well here's a reverence...I gave them all of me
Heavy pettin', consistent wettin'
of pussies, tongue, tits,
n' ass treatin' I was so sweet
n' kept eatin' em like
I had the munchies.."
damn Poe love the flow to this hot erotic!
love Crim.
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Re: Re. Like two big ole slices of Cherry Pie...I FUCK'd a round n' at
18th Aug 2016 1:20am
Re. Like two big ole slices of Cherry Pie...I FUCK'd a round n' ate 'e
18th Aug 2016 3:23am
This poem is straight fire!!! May be the best erotic poem I've ever read. Great job bruh.
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Re: Re. Like two big ole slices of Cherry Pie...I FUCK'd a round n' at
18th Aug 2016 3:46am
Why thank you! Truly appreciate this great comment! I'm flattered n humbled...
Re. Like two big ole slices of Cherry Pie...I FUCK'd a round n' ate 'e
18th Aug 2016 12:15pm
is this where i share the awesome 2 glasses of water before a blow joy trick? lol jk
hawtness papi
pure hawtness
xo
hawtness papi
pure hawtness
xo
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Re: Re. Like two big ole slices of Cherry Pie...I FUCK'd a round n' at
18th Aug 2016 1:37pm
Uhm if ur doing on me? Hell yea!! lol
N thank you mami, you rock always! :)
N thank you mami, you rock always! :)
Re. Like two big ole slices of Cherry Pie...I FUCK'd a round n' ate 'e
19th Aug 2016 5:34am
Re: Re. Like two big ole slices of Cherry Pie...I FUCK'd a round n' at
19th Aug 2016 10:15am
Yes it would be! lol n aaawwww... Finally an acknowledgement on my artwork! :) thank u sooooo much my dear sweetness, truly appreciate your support :)
Re. Like two big ole slices of Cherry Pie...I FUCK'd a round n' ate 'e
19th Aug 2016 8:46am
yep..eat 'em both i say..
i mean..
what are they there for in the first place?
can't let fresh fruit go to waste..
you was just doing your job
as a responsible citizen
i mean..
what are they there for in the first place?
can't let fresh fruit go to waste..
you was just doing your job
as a responsible citizen
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Re: Re. Like two big ole slices of Cherry Pie...I FUCK'd a round n' at
19th Aug 2016 10:21am
Lmao!! I fuckin Love love love this comment! Thanks bro. for such a funny ass observation! lol... But ur right, I was just bein a responsible citizen! lol truly n always grateful for your continued support bro. :)
Re. Like two big ole slices of Cherry Pie...I FUCK'd a round n' ate 'e
19th Aug 2016 10:40am
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19th Aug 2016 12:35pm
Re. Like two big ole slices of Cherry Pie...I FUCK'd a round n' ate 'e
Anonymous
26th Oct 2016 00:06am
Hey Poet.....I got lost in this one.......mmmmmmmm.......sexy from beginning to end.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. Like two big ole slices of Cherry Pie...I FUCK'd a round n' at
26th Oct 2016 3:19pm
Youre welcome to lose yourself everytime u desire my dear flower! lol
Truly grateful for your words n support always :)
Truly grateful for your words n support always :)
Re. Like two big ole slices of Cherry Pie...I FUCK'd a round n' ate 'e
26th Oct 2016 3:10pm
The language in this is sublime and the image painted is a welcome one ;)
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Re: Re. Like two big ole slices of Cherry Pie...I FUCK'd a round n' at
26th Oct 2016 3:21pm
Well...CUM! Stay a long while, enjoy!! lol thanks my sweetheart, I'm flattered n greatly appreciative for ur support :)
Re. Like two big ole slices of Cherry Pie...I FUCK'd a round n' ate 'e
18th Jan 2017 2:13am
I love how you really make people visualize your poems. This,one I could clearly paint a picture in my,mind!!
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Re: Re. Like two big ole slices of Cherry Pie...I FUCK'd a round n' at
18th Jan 2017 2:48am
Well I'm happy the picture was clearly seen by you! Lol, n I appreciate the time you spent reading :)
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6th Mar 2017 11:04am
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6th Mar 2017 12:56pm