Your vibe has got me drunker than the vodka i've been sippin'

"....Cigars on ice, cigars on ice  
Feeling like an animal with these cameras all in my grill  
Flashing lights, flashing lights  
You got me faded, faded, faded  
Baby, I want you, na na  
Can't keep your eyes off my fatty  
Daddy, I want you, na na,,,,"  Beyonce  
 
That's the vibe I feel after reading this.....gettin' high off your love; don't know how to behave (from D'Angelo's "Brown Sugar)  
 
Feelin' this ink.  A truly great treatment of a very familiar theme 😏  

"I been sippin', that's the only thing
That's keeping me on fire, me on fire
Didn't mean to spill that liquor all on my attire
I've been drinking, watermelon"  <--- HA! Had a feeling someone would bring in 'drunk in love' as reference. :) Hell, I know I did. lol... I love me some B
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Your comment was so much fun, had me rocking to the lyrics. Made me want to fill the tub up halfway then ride it with my surfboard. lol... Thank you Archie and appreciate you listing her.

Myyyyyy, my my my my
I literally get lost in your sensual pieces.. They're mesmerizing to say the least. I had to pull my hair up off of my neck reading this 😊. I'll take another refill on this sis most definitely.. Love love~

My beautiful lil sis, you make me blush with your haikus-cherry love. Pull that gorgeous hair up and wet the nap of your neck with some....'vodka', then let the hubby lick it off... hehe....
Thank you hun, appreciate you babysitting her... xo

So sensually delicious.
The imagery is so potent....the words linger, burning passionately within.
Truly brilliant ink.

Hi there Heart! :) It's a pleasure inhaling your presence in my neck of the woods. Truly wonderful comment you've left me. I do appreciate the ink support and will stop by your poetic canvas soon....
Pen Respect~

straight, no chaser.
that kinda sexy loving will get you where the vodka won't...

yeah, the kind that hide inside the hangover...
Thanks John! :)

there's such earthiness in your delivery of this piece, rainy lady
such a compelling write
loved it
xo

....that's a beautiful observation dancedoll.
 I thank you kindly suga! xo

Elle Varner-Can I get a refill playing in my mind as I read..... :)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mJIbNepRCS8

"cause you’re intoxicating my mind
feels like a conversational lush,
I don’t know how much is too much." <--Shell, we were thinking the same way. ;)
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Girl, I was inspired by Elle's Refill, Drunk In Love by Beyoncé, Blame It On The Alcohol by Jamie Foxx, and  Please Don’t Kill My Vibe, by Kendrick Lamar.

Thanks love for passing through..xo

A title that just draws the reader in
And indeed glad I did
Intoxicating write Rain  we've come to expect from you xx

...a sip or two of vodka always draws you in. ;)
 Thank you Rose, I appreciate you! xo

Melia, your words are like a barrel of grapes that you stomp and make homemade wine, and with every glass... I sip your rich lines slowly. ;) Thank you so much!

....well pass the bottle please, I'm about to erupt. ;) Thanks!

well i'm buzzing, a sparkling sapphire, this is so beautiful I think going to go somewhere and cry,lol, definitely one of my faves, what the hell is going on that the universe is pumping out genius works like this and others I read today? n e way a supreme serenade goddess...

lol... gon' on and cry, ain't nothing wrong with a real man crying. So pleased you could feel my vibe, Dean!
Thank you and appreciate you kidnapping her for a while. ;)

A refill indeed... I'd knead my greed  
into the molten skin, I sin every moment I begin to feed my creed
with the pen strokes of Rain I desperately need! :) yea, I'm more than tipsy off your heat lol

lollol.... that was so dope, Rich! Stay tipsy for awhile.  It makes everything mellow and moist... :)
Thanks Poe!

Intoxicating lines Rain!  It left me both shaken and stirred. I've always got some vibe to pour if you're interested...

Crow, a lady like myself always love a fine glass of... 'vibe'. ;)
Love it! Thanks and I adore that you decided to keep her...

Rain.. so seductively brilliant.. i love reading you..



Dave

aww... thank you sweety, good to see you back! :)

this reads like multiple mind-gasms
flowing through secret chasms
and flagrant finger spasms
and it is here we can acknowledge
that sometimes the pen leaks
and sometimes it squirts..
..
werk that ish Rain!
ha!

can't Jamie Foxx outta this one
and blame it on the alcohol eh?

....you know I had to put a little bit of Jamie foxx in the mix of this mixture. lol..
Love the mind-gasms reference. Your responses regarding my ink are always so delightful, generous, ego-stroking and sexy to me. Thank you Naajir!

The inebriated ebb of the moon pulls us toward
strange shores, places we've always wanted to
go but never had the map of directions. We realize
we never needed one to begin with when the boat
arrives at the shore.

...dang, simply beautifully said. So well put Ahavati! You are such a gem! Thank you! xo

How is it possible that I've missed a poem that contains martini??? ;-)

Brilliant ink again, Rain! You have a way with words that is beyond compare! ♥

lol... We would be great girlfriends hanging out on ladies night-out, sharing drinks... :)
Thank you for the poetic love....

You're welcome, dear!

Yeah... we definitely would be :-)

such a long time since I've read you.
word play and flow....fire
you light my poetic desire..
truly the master for creating such an intoxicating vibe

your comment rocked, Free!

...humbled by your words, thank you...