Pure Absolution-Flowing Freely

Mmmmmm you taste soooooo yummy... well at least in myind u do lol... Love the seductively acute word art my dear Rain :)

lol... isn't it all in the mind?! At least it starts there....  ;) Thank you Poe!

Thanks sexy OS! Sometimes my mind ache and I need to free it every now and then... ;)

Rain, i'm lost for words.. i'll just say your poetry draws me in.. and makes my heart race.. you're so gifted.. i'm a huge fan.. love, and respect...



Dave

Dave, your commentary slightly seduces me ever so gently. :)
Thank you for the kind remarks.

With respect and gratitude~

Seductive words... delicious ink... love this one!

Very beautiful picture you've chosen, it suits the poem :-)

Thanks a million, Duende! I appreciate you lovely one... :)

How sweet you are :-)
I appreciate you too, Rain!!!

"There’s no nouns or verbs that could
summarize that beautiful moment.
A moment that gifted me a box full of pure absolution,  
wrapped with a bow of euphoria."

lovely Rain your pen paints the night fantastic with it's erotic beauty..

love Brenda

Crim, happy you grabbed a favorite verse. Thank you for the sweet comment...
Ink hug~

That was absolutely gorgeous  Ms. Rain... Thank you for that intimate love story... or lust...

....a little of both, LBV! :) Thanks for coloring my page with your presence...

So very intoxicating.
It is difficult to pick out one portion that moves any deeper than the other.
A very delicious...sensual piece of ink, that awakens within.

Heart, your reply warms my 'heart'! :) I appreciate your vibe around my parts... Thanks sexy!

Rain, this evokes so many feelings, some of arousal, some of admiration.  Gorgeous lines:

"I no longer have a voice because….
your hardened urgency muted me.
When it slowly forced itself through dribbles of
lipstick and propelled me into silent intimacy"

But I'm particularly partial to these:

"Still smell the scent of your creed green Irish tweed
harmonizing with my cashmere mist…
sinking inside my skin."

I happen to be Irish and love the touch of cashmere, even in mist form.  You flow freely here, as always.  There's nothing like reading Rain....

Crow, you literally leave me smiling each time I read your commentary. You always pump me up!
An Irish man?! Oh, I'm a lucky girl! ;)
I loved that creed cologne on men, and well, I'm a cashmere mist kinda' girl. Thank you for always showing me 'you'. Appreciate you keeping her...

So this is what it means absolute surrender with no boundaries, no inhibitions.  Smoldering boundless sexual energy and you have mastered it so well Rain. I know everytime I see your new post, I know it will be a special treat :)

Vee, your comment is poetry in motion dear lady! You have a gift that comes out even in responses. How the heck do you do that?! :) Thank you so much for the awesome comment!

i'm "still smiling" too after reading that fiery drop, "Like the flawless seams of tensed ambrosia  in your skin. ",dam I could just pull up a chaise and lounge in your mind all day, nice Rain...

"dam I could just pull up a chaise and lounge in your mind all day," <---lol... love that!  I'm occasionally lounging in yours. ;) Thanks sweety!  

There are moments when I feel that a beautiful succubus has possession of your soul.  The way you are able to illustrate your work with such dynamic colors......painting pictures that grab hold of you beyond the flesh.  The way that this "oral" expose tugs at my aural, visual and spiritually erotic sensibilities.  Drawing me to the gates of le petit mortir.  Beyond your intellect, I knew there was a reason that I lust for you ;-)   as you said, "pure absolution"

Damn! I really don't have words for your comment Archie! It's quite beautiful and sensual. I believe I stated this earlier to a commenter above, but, your comment is truly lyrical art, poetry in motion, a sonnet symphony .  Love it! Thank you luv, and appreciate you listing her.  *p.s., no harm in lusting, right?!* ;)

......no harm at will :-) m

I left my arrogance scattered

This is the bridge to Love - complete surrender
from our arrogant ego.

The way you…
Let me in.
 
And this is the door - we must open ourselves
fully to be blessed with the experience.

This captures a woman's heart when we are
allowed "in" to love a man. Beautifully done.

....you have such a beautiful spirit, Ahavati! It shows through your words and the way you decipher other poet's thoughts...

Thank you so much for the lovely comment...

Rain, pure art
The seduction is in your form
The curves that temp to taste the edges we rarely ever dare to touch easily unravel and yern within your mist. Such a gift

Beautiful words, G! Thank you! So refreshing to feel your presence against my page's skin....

Appreciate you keeping her....xo

I really liked the twist and turns of the emotions
this poem was good