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"Confessions of a Mass Worderer..."
I fought 'gainst this 'diss-ease'
see, I know there are those
that may despise these...
Thoughts...
scramble as they ramble
thru the woulda, coulda
n' shoulda's of this preamble...
but a penny I gamble,
the verse...once it disperse,
"I Stallone" n' just go Rambo...
The velocity n' frequency of
this spittin' spree keep hittin'
thee with furious ferocity flexed
with Worderous glee...
I seize, the 'seas row'
flossin' as I'm glossin' the flow
showin' those foes, how it goes...
blow after blow...
'they all fall down'
deadend by the sound
of the Worderer's:
Vicious vernacular
Eloquently spectacular
Resonatin' linguistically sound
Sensibilities be bound
Ear-wary, deep seeded...in ground
Fillin' 'em, illin' them
killin' 'em like 'weed'
with a need to read
they 'sweat' my 'wet'
'eye feed' they concede...
Defeated, 'haters' should
crater their plans til the next
millennia...
Though the nature of beast
predicts most will desire to
re-fire what little is into them...
N' yet you bet...
The Worderer has amassed
a MASS of verbiage in his 'brim'
so the cost of accostin' the boss
of Worderous debris will be sky high
as another 'Might End' me fist
is lost, by a Wordererin' Me...
see, I know there are those
that may despise these...
Thoughts...
scramble as they ramble
thru the woulda, coulda
n' shoulda's of this preamble...
but a penny I gamble,
the verse...once it disperse,
"I Stallone" n' just go Rambo...
The velocity n' frequency of
this spittin' spree keep hittin'
thee with furious ferocity flexed
with Worderous glee...
I seize, the 'seas row'
flossin' as I'm glossin' the flow
showin' those foes, how it goes...
blow after blow...
'they all fall down'
deadend by the sound
of the Worderer's:
Vicious vernacular
Eloquently spectacular
Resonatin' linguistically sound
Sensibilities be bound
Ear-wary, deep seeded...in ground
Fillin' 'em, illin' them
killin' 'em like 'weed'
with a need to read
they 'sweat' my 'wet'
'eye feed' they concede...
Defeated, 'haters' should
crater their plans til the next
millennia...
Though the nature of beast
predicts most will desire to
re-fire what little is into them...
N' yet you bet...
The Worderer has amassed
a MASS of verbiage in his 'brim'
so the cost of accostin' the boss
of Worderous debris will be sky high
as another 'Might End' me fist
is lost, by a Wordererin' Me...
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Re. "Confessions of a Mass Worderer..."
20th Jul 2016 9:51am
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20th Jul 2016 9:56am
Wow... I'm Trippin' becuz U must know I'm deeply addicted to U!! lol
N damn I didn't expect a response so soon but hey it's great n moreso becuz it's YOU! I'm honored, flattered, n just plain bananas over ur RL add n constant support! Muah! Thankies mami lol
N damn I didn't expect a response so soon but hey it's great n moreso becuz it's YOU! I'm honored, flattered, n just plain bananas over ur RL add n constant support! Muah! Thankies mami lol
Re. "Confessions of a Mass Worderer..."
20th Jul 2016 11:13am
Well PM I'm wanting to hear your voice speaking these words...great write. 👍
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Re: Re. "Confessions of a Mass Worderer..."
20th Jul 2016 12:53pm
The last time I promised to do an audio with a piece, I didn't do so becuz of my storage problems soooooo this time I will say, IF I can I will. :) n thank you my dear for ur sweet thoughts n support :)
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1st Aug 2016 00:47am
Re. "Confessions of a Mass Worderer..."
20th Jul 2016 2:38pm
The MW back at it again. ..
Haha!!!
That pen is lethal my brotha. .
Slick twists n turns
All up in this vibe!!!!
Haha!!!
That pen is lethal my brotha. .
Slick twists n turns
All up in this vibe!!!!
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Re: Re. "Confessions of a Mass Worderer..."
20th Jul 2016 2:45pm
Lol thanks bro. But hey your pen is just as deadly, n no one knows it better than I do! lol... Truly honored bro. Thank u so much :)
Re. "Confessions of a Mass Worderer..."
Anonymous
21st Jul 2016 3:46am
Wowzers Poet!!! Awesome piece my friend......you can write anything.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
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21st Jul 2016 1:24pm
Re. "Confessions of a Mass Worderer..."
21st Jul 2016 9:14am
"Vicious vernacular
Eloquently spectacular
Resonatin' linguistically sound
Sensibilities be bound
Ear-wary, deep seeded...in groun"
this was my favorite little paragraph! Oh your twists and turns upon the tongue tickle and tease.
-Stone
Eloquently spectacular
Resonatin' linguistically sound
Sensibilities be bound
Ear-wary, deep seeded...in groun"
this was my favorite little paragraph! Oh your twists and turns upon the tongue tickle and tease.
-Stone
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Re: Re. "Confessions of a Mass Worderer..."
21st Jul 2016 9:23pm
Thank you! I'm blushing now lol... Happy you liked the lil twists n turns my sweetness :) appreciate your support always :)
Re. "Confessions of a Mass Worderer..."
21st Jul 2016 8:15pm
You know I've told you before when it comes to 'spitting rhymes', you are the dup master. The best I tell ya!
I mean, this is almost better than leaning back in your ole skool cutlass, sitting on 20s, listening to Tupac, sippin' on gin n juice. Almost... ;)
I mean, this is almost better than leaning back in your ole skool cutlass, sitting on 20s, listening to Tupac, sippin' on gin n juice. Almost... ;)
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Re: Re. "Confessions of a Mass Worderer..."
21st Jul 2016 9:26pm
That imagery you painted was so damn cool I can't disagree with you my dear! lol... N truly I'm grateful for ur amazing n sweet comment :)
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31st Jul 2016 2:47am
"The velocity n' frequency of
this spittin' spree keep hittin'
thee with furious ferocity flexed
with Worderous glee... "<------ I rewind this part, just to see you *flex* one mo'gin... ha!
you know how I feel when you spit, but hearing this one in audio was 'Kill Bill' bad-ass...
Gave it an 'add' nod!
this spittin' spree keep hittin'
thee with furious ferocity flexed
with Worderous glee... "<------ I rewind this part, just to see you *flex* one mo'gin... ha!
you know how I feel when you spit, but hearing this one in audio was 'Kill Bill' bad-ass...
Gave it an 'add' nod!
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31st Jul 2016 9:10am
Re. "Confessions of a Mass Worderer..."
21st Jul 2016 8:51pm
That pen you grip,
Let's true art slip
Upon every white page
You undeniably Slay~
I love it!
Let's true art slip
Upon every white page
You undeniably Slay~
I love it!
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Re: Re. "Confessions of a Mass Worderer..."
21st Jul 2016 9:27pm
Aaaaawwww..!!!! Thank you my sweet one! I'm honored n flattered... Truly n always appreciate you! :)
Re. "Confessions of a Mass Worderer..."
22nd Jul 2016 1:31pm
Re: Re. "Confessions of a Mass Worderer..."
24th Jul 2016 8:17am
You see me!? Damn n here I thought was well hidden! Lol truly, flattered n honored by your support always my sweet one :)
Re. "Confessions of a Mass Worderer..."
24th Jul 2016 2:53am
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24th Jul 2016 8:18am
Re. "Confessions of a Mass Worderer..."
24th Jul 2016 4:01am
"Vicious vernacular
Eloquently spectacular " Indeed..never am I disappointed in anything you write..absolutely loved this !!!!
Eloquently spectacular " Indeed..never am I disappointed in anything you write..absolutely loved this !!!!
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Re: Re. "Confessions of a Mass Worderer..."
24th Jul 2016 8:20am
Aaaaawwww... Well I feel the same about your ink my sweetness! Thank you, got me all flustered n whatnot lol
Appreciate you. :)
Appreciate you. :)
Re. "Confessions of a Mass Worderer..."
25th Jul 2016 12:39pm
This is lyrical dynamite. I love the way the words flow, the syntax and rhyme is on point. Dig this write.
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Re: Re. "Confessions of a Mass Worderer..."
25th Jul 2016 12:53pm
Boom! That's a wonderful comment you spilled bro! N I of course am deeply grateful, truly n always appreciate your kindness n support :)
Re. "Confessions of a Mass Worderer..."
27th Jul 2016 4:58pm
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27th Jul 2016 9:17pm
Re. "Confessions of a Mass Worderer..."
Anonymous
28th Jul 2016 10:33pm
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28th Jul 2016 10:55pm
Re. "Confessions of a Mass Worderer..."
31st Jul 2016 2:17am
damn Poe you got mad skills I got chills listening to you deliver you verse :)
love Crim
love Crim
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Re: Re. "Confessions of a Mass Worderer..."
31st Jul 2016 9:27am
Well now I'm big time blushin! You my dear deserve a big ole juicy kiss! C'mere...mmmmmmuuuuuaaaaahhhh!! lol thank you sweet Crim, deeply grateful always :)
Re. "Confessions of a Mass Worderer..."
1st Aug 2016 00:40am
You got mass raves on this
lyrical contribution Poe, and
rightfully you should have.
You made me think of seeing
you up on a stage like in the
movie, "8 Mile," doing a battle
against someone.
I think that you'd kill them and
the crowd though and be dubbed
a mass-worderer and they'd
also get you for being a lethal
weapon.
Great write Bro... Dantalyon
lyrical contribution Poe, and
rightfully you should have.
You made me think of seeing
you up on a stage like in the
movie, "8 Mile," doing a battle
against someone.
I think that you'd kill them and
the crowd though and be dubbed
a mass-worderer and they'd
also get you for being a lethal
weapon.
Great write Bro... Dantalyon
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Re: Re. "Confessions of a Mass Worderer..."
1st Aug 2016 2:24am
You're the best bro! I'm honored n truly thank you for your support n kindness :)
Re. "Confessions of a Mass Worderer..."
Anonymous
1st Aug 2016 3:43am
You were born to do spoken word, it comes so natural to you and its obvious and I know its not easy to keep the rhythm with one flow especially when you're doing it on camera with the visual. Awesome ink PIKM, you kept it real with steady flow of lethal ink..what can i say that all those other commentators above me have not said already except to add, you live breathe and die for the poetic word and very few people can claim that title xox
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Re: Re. "Confessions of a Mass Worderer..."
1st Aug 2016 10:20am
My sweetest Vee...I really wanna tattoo you with a big ole kiss right now! lol... Such a very sweet n sincere comment, got me all big cheese smilin n whatnot! lol a million thank yous n gratitude stretchin for miles... :)
Re. "Confessions of a Mass Worderer..."
4th Aug 2016 9:35pm
The lyrical flow, the verbiage the whole darn piece is just fiyah..... executed with ease.... You did the damn thing here.... Word play is bananas!!!!
~BSavvy
~BSavvy
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Re: Re. "Confessions of a Mass Worderer..."
4th Aug 2016 9:41pm
Aaaaawwww...my dear smoovness, how deeply flattered I am n honored
for your thoughts, of course support always! thanks for givin me a big ole Kool Aide smile! lol
for your thoughts, of course support always! thanks for givin me a big ole Kool Aide smile! lol
Re. "Confessions of a Mass Worderer..."
9th Aug 2016 3:06pm
Re: Re. "Confessions of a Mass Worderer..."
9th Aug 2016 10:10pm
Wow I'm greatly flattered! :) thank you so much for your time n thoughts on my ink :)
Re. "Confessions of a Mass Worderer..."
12th Jan 2017 10:52am
Absolutely amazing poem you made here,
I loved it you really did your thing on this one! 😃
Great job 👏🏼😊
I loved it you really did your thing on this one! 😃
Great job 👏🏼😊
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12th Jan 2017 7:30pm
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