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In the bag
Aw fuckin hell
He's actin like he's in the bag again
Getting so high
Only lucifer can see me
from the vatican
And that's just me looking in the mirror
While I walk the path that I ascend
I am not bananas
Just the crate they put bananas in
I'm that akin
to beasts of burden
But am I the horse
Or the one who tightens
The straps of saddles in
I take myself back to school
In my mind
I'm Billy Madison
You wanna be high too
Well baby I'm your madicine
I just sit here crazy
Inside my walls
Going mad as sin
Talking to meself and answering
If you piss yourself off
Never fret I am he
So you can be mad at him
I'll just write my hymns
Cause I am me
And I am glad I am
He's actin like he's in the bag again
Getting so high
Only lucifer can see me
from the vatican
And that's just me looking in the mirror
While I walk the path that I ascend
I am not bananas
Just the crate they put bananas in
I'm that akin
to beasts of burden
But am I the horse
Or the one who tightens
The straps of saddles in
I take myself back to school
In my mind
I'm Billy Madison
You wanna be high too
Well baby I'm your madicine
I just sit here crazy
Inside my walls
Going mad as sin
Talking to meself and answering
If you piss yourself off
Never fret I am he
So you can be mad at him
I'll just write my hymns
Cause I am me
And I am glad I am
Published 7th Jul 2016
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7th Jul 2016 4:24pm
"Getting so high
Only lucifer can see me
from the Vatican"
fucking fantastic David!!!
love Crimsin
Only lucifer can see me
from the Vatican"
fucking fantastic David!!!
love Crimsin
7th Jul 2016 5:41pm
Thank you and thank you again. I never feel like the stuff i write is great, just familiar. You guys are amazing, i always panic a bit before i post, when i write it's like one shot, one kill. Hardly ever do I edit, except to correct spelling or make sure that i have legitimacy to the way i've used a word. Almost all is just what the word soup feeds me! Peace and love, from under all, never above.
7th Jul 2016 4:38pm
Not many will catch this, but lucifer is the name of a deep space telescope in the vatican! Peace and love!
10th Jul 2016 7:02am
the fact the vatican has a telescope blows my mind.. let alone its name lol
Anonymous
7th Jul 2016 11:17pm
Loving your mind brother... Spill your alphabet... Edit as needed, sure there's a little fear with what we shed.... We bare our souls, our insecurities, or wisdom or delusions it's all perspective 😉👊👍
10th Jul 2016 7:01am
Welcome to DUP. I enjoyed your poem, especially the line "I am not bananas, Just the crate they put bananas in" your imagery and metaphors are very good! keep em coming!
30th Jul 2016 5:05pm
I really like the flow to this.Psychotic but not insane.Insightful imagination you got.
