celestial lust

thank you most kindly Adam..

love Crim

"stringing together constellations
 out of adjectives and verbs"

This was a very cool and sexy opening stanza Brenda.

If you hadn't stated that this
is about someone else, then
I'd say that you are writing
about yourself, because
you can definitely craft
poems in an amazing
way.

  Great poem... Dantalyon

thank you graciously Dantalyon..

love Brenda

beautiful & fiery as a comet, Crim.
these are the dreams & poems
that hang on you like stardust...

thank you kindly John :)

love Crim

oooh brenda
such wonderful imagery
this is pure magic
xoxox

thank you beautiful Katja I cherish your visits..

love Brenda

i just adore you, Brenda
this is exquisite, it sparkles

thanks for the read xo

thank you lovely Miki for making me smile this morning :)

love Brenda

The best time you can spend feeling small.

In the eyes of your one.

thank you kindly..

love Crim

Love the title
Love the poem, especially the last line. ...
xo

thank you Poet I adore your thoughts and visits..

love Brenda

Awww . . . Leave the stardust in your hair to attract what you're only dreaming of here.

thank you Jerry I just might :)

love Brenda

Oh my tinygodsjaggedsaintsandgods.

Im in love, this has me actually
teary eyed ..wth ladyloves.

Am breathless and forgot what
else to say..

-Howlings

thank you graciously lovely Howlings..

love Crim

Sometimes we awake from dreams to realize
what's been inside us all along. We wake to
remember, and to believe.  It gets us through
the daze of life.

I really enjoyed the correlation between dreams
and stars.

thank you most kindly sage one..

made me see this poem in a different light :)

love Crim

thank you graciously Cinnamon..

love Crim

Brenda.. sweet, Brenda.. this is the most beautiful piece of writing, i've ever read.. who ever inspired, you must hold in the highest regard.. brilliantly done.. into the list it goes.. so i can cherish it's beauty forever.. love you...



Dave

thank you most graciously Dave you touched my heart with your comment..

love you my brother..

xoxo Brenda

This is pretty damn good 😁

"you're a man of the highest caliber
the God's made you right"

Love that line

thank you most kindly DC :)

love Crim

My Beautiful Brenda....this swept me away in its beauty and verse....just gorgeous...I was able to see my girl shaking those blond locks as she rose from slumber...

I love you so much :)

xoxo Taryn

thank you beautiful one I cherish your thoughts :)

I love you so much..

xoxo Brenda

Beautiful imaginary, I want to piggyback your dreams
<3 dkruie

thank you most graciously Dkruie :)

love Crim

I always thought you had a touch of the cosmic to you Crim.  This is a stellar fantasy that might end up in my own dreams.

"brand new stars are born
from your poetic verse
 
the cosmos unfolds in front of me
celestial music is your voice "

I see a star in every line of this.  Pure magic, poetry from the Milky Way.

aw thank you graciously Sir Crow :)

love Crim