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Fuck Me
step to me bitch
I fucking dare you
i'll bash you in the head
leave your ass in the ground
weak ass pussy punk
fuck there are no more
enemies or contenders
peel back your face show the real you
rawr, rawr, rawr
leaking from both sides of your mouth
makes me irate
you fake little cunt
trying to bring me down
your game is weak
big man afraid of his own shadow
scared of me damn right
i'll smear you like shit
on the walls of society
leave you leaking from the side
rawr, rawr, rawr
slash burn, kill
fucking insane with rage
i'll asphyxiate you
watch your ass turn blue
piss on your grave
as I stick you in a hole
step to me motherfucker
I fucking dare you
diarrhea running from your mouth
i'll shove your dick down your throat
stop the shit from flowing
rat, punk bitch
step to me bitch
I fucking dare you
i'll bash you in the head
leave your ass in the ground
(for Hades Heretic Anthem comp.)
(inspired by Slipknot's Spit It Out)
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Re. Fuck Me
Anonymous
19th Jun 2016 4:16pm
I wish I could say I'd never felt this way..
wish I could say someone didn't come to mind while I read. lol
your lovely soul does a powerful darkness, always brilliance in your ink
best of in Hades' Comp
much love xx
wish I could say someone didn't come to mind while I read. lol
your lovely soul does a powerful darkness, always brilliance in your ink
best of in Hades' Comp
much love xx
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Re: Re. Fuck Me
19th Jun 2016 4:33pm
thank you beautiful Miki only sorry someone ever made you feel like this lovely lady..
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. Fuck Me
19th Jun 2016 4:20pm
"Rawr, rawr, rawr"
Fuck Yeah; shred that
Biiiaaatttccchhh into
tiny, insignificant
bleeding pieces.
This has my blood boiling
now; not that it ever isn't...
Dantalyon
Fuck Yeah; shred that
Biiiaaatttccchhh into
tiny, insignificant
bleeding pieces.
This has my blood boiling
now; not that it ever isn't...
Dantalyon
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Re: Re. Fuck Me
19th Jun 2016 4:34pm
thank you most kindly Dantalyon smiling that I got your blood pumping with this..
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. Fuck Me
19th Jun 2016 5:18pm
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20th Jun 2016 1:40am
Re. Fuck Me
19th Jun 2016 5:37pm
"diarrhea running from your mouth
i'll shove your dick down your throat
stop the shit from flowing
rat, punk bitch"
Note to self; remind me to never piss Crimsin off.
i'll shove your dick down your throat
stop the shit from flowing
rat, punk bitch"
Note to self; remind me to never piss Crimsin off.
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20th Jun 2016 1:41am
Re. Fuck Me
19th Jun 2016 5:42pm
Remind me not to cross you Crim. This packs a punch in more ways than one.
"step to me bitch
I fucking dare you
i'll bash you in the head
leave your ass in the ground"
My ass is already down there. I pity whoever it is you're addressing with these fierce and powerful lines. The title alone is a sure fire attention-getter. Good luck with the comp sweet Crim!
"step to me bitch
I fucking dare you
i'll bash you in the head
leave your ass in the ground"
My ass is already down there. I pity whoever it is you're addressing with these fierce and powerful lines. The title alone is a sure fire attention-getter. Good luck with the comp sweet Crim!
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Re: Re. Fuck Me
20th Jun 2016 1:42am
thank you Sir Crow simply a comp. entry no person I'm directing this too :)
love Crim
love Crim
Re. Fuck Me
19th Jun 2016 8:10pm
Considering I'm not exactly human I feel this way about the humans that hate me
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Re. Fuck Me
19th Jun 2016 8:46pm
Omgosh precious soul, once again, you blow the competition clean out of the water... look at them all sailing by, their limbs twitching, wishing they'd never attempted to play!
love, Jade
love, Jade
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Re: Re. Fuck Me
20th Jun 2016 1:43am
thank you most kindly Jade though there are some fierce competitors in the comp..
love Crim
love Crim
Re. Fuck Me
Anonymous
19th Jun 2016 9:46pm
You know when I feel like this I switch over to decaf, just saayin:)
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20th Jun 2016 1:44am
Re. Fuck Me
19th Jun 2016 10:18pm
OMFG Crim!!!?? This is vulgar n cold, uhm can u kiss me with mouth? lmao... Awesome, hot tempered spillage :)
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20th Jun 2016 1:44am
Re. Fuck Me
20th Jun 2016 1:39am
oooh god I feel like that sometimes too!! Thanks for expressing it so well!
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20th Jun 2016 1:45am
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20th Jun 2016 7:20am
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20th Jun 2016 3:16pm
Re. Fuck Me
Anonymous
20th Jun 2016 11:43am
Well fuck me too!
.. .you came slinging metal my
ladyloves.
I think to have felt a piece of flying
shard ;)
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.. .you came slinging metal my
ladyloves.
I think to have felt a piece of flying
shard ;)
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20th Jun 2016 3:16pm
Re. Fuck Me
Anonymous
20th Jun 2016 6:07pm
My Beautiful Brenda, fierce is what we have here....my girl at one of here finest moments! These words here SPEAK to me loudly...
"weak ass pussy punk
fuck there are no more
enemies or contenders
peel back your face show the real you
rawr, rawr, rawr
leaking from both sides of your mouth
makes me irate
you fake little cunt
trying to bring me down
your game is weak"
~ YES! Damn I loved this!
I love you - good luck in the comp!
xoxo Taryn
"weak ass pussy punk
fuck there are no more
enemies or contenders
peel back your face show the real you
rawr, rawr, rawr
leaking from both sides of your mouth
makes me irate
you fake little cunt
trying to bring me down
your game is weak"
~ YES! Damn I loved this!
I love you - good luck in the comp!
xoxo Taryn
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21st Jun 2016 1:07am
Re. Fuck Me
Anonymous
21st Jun 2016 2:54am
man I love this dark edge to you Brenda:)....gl with the comp....sounds like a girl writing my attitude cause I'm exactly like this and have said it more than once..just step to me punk ass bitch..like Eminem said..come on pussies, give me a reason to give this trigger a good squeeze..lol...in the great Soldier of course...BADASS
love Michael
love Michael
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22nd Jun 2016 4:00pm
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Anonymous
21st Jun 2016 4:09am
Whoohoo Precious Crim.....let him have it......I was just going to bed....all calm and peacful hearted.....I came amd read this hot fired ink and now I'm reved up....."rawr, rawr, rawr"......I'm luving it......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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22nd Jun 2016 4:01pm
Re. Fuck Me
Anonymous
24th Jun 2016 00:21am
Brenda.. loved this.. hardcore lyrics.. inspired by a heavy band.. love you..
Dave
Dave
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Re: Re. Fuck Me
24th Jun 2016 7:12pm
thank you kindly Dave this is how they inspired me lol :)
love you my brother..
xoxo Brenda
love you my brother..
xoxo Brenda
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30th Jun 2016 5:10am
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30th Jun 2016 6:38pm
Re. Fuck Me
24th Oct 2016 5:09am
OH MY FRICKEN GAWD, at first my jaw dropped, then I got to " rawr rawr rawr", I had tears forever rollin. I can just imagine someone so pissed that that came pouring out. I didn't realize till the end that it was for a comp. I'm going to keep this gem for forever.I sure hope you won you definitely deserved to. Excellent write Crim, mad respect,
SURVIVOR
SURVIVOR
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Re: Re. Fuck Me
24th Oct 2016 8:14am
thank you most graciously for such a fantastic response to this write no I didn't win this comp. there was some mighty stiff competition for it..
love Crim
love Crim
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Anonymous
4th Nov 2016 2:32pm
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