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if you sleep alone
think of me, sleeping alone
remember those nights of our inseparateness
our bodies close, in alluring contact
as I touched you touching me, out of fear, maybe –
fear of growing mature; & growing apart
we held each other in the night
while the night held its own secrets
but for now, let’s dwell in the sensual
the glittering sparks along our shorelines
ascending heat, rude kisses, & beating hearts
arms encircling, & legs like spiraling vines
till you pushed me away, to find the rigid
reminder of my portentous warlord.
did you swarm over it with your primitive mouth,
to go where decorum does not follow?
you took wicked delight in my moans, claiming
to want me in your mouth, in your throat, in your belly
& moaned in echo when I pulled you off by the roots
of your hair, not wanting our desire to end
in a sticky glaze on your tongue
love is brutal when I hovered over you like a destroyer,
my hands full of your naked, dewy flesh,
my mouth tasting the tips of your indelicate fruits
until it abridged the locking of our loins,
pounding like savages, speaking in foreign tongues!
remember those nights, & if it arouses you,
lying there all nude & beautiful, as you are in my vision,
then touch yourself – pinch your nipples as you do;
let your fingers wander to your pleading hooded haven
go in deep.. deeper than rivers.. notorious & daring
play your cun’tessa like Stradivari’s violin
play it; play it till it makes music!...
(Art: Willy Kessels)
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Re. if you sleep alone
Nothing like dreaming/wishing for these sensuous delights.
I sensed within your thoughts and words that this was a
"born again" love affair, which in my opinion is the absolute
best kind. You penetrate over and in her your desires to
reawaken her lust, and John, you do it all quite well. Good
job poet!
Then again, I may be all wet!
I sensed within your thoughts and words that this was a
"born again" love affair, which in my opinion is the absolute
best kind. You penetrate over and in her your desires to
reawaken her lust, and John, you do it all quite well. Good
job poet!
Then again, I may be all wet!
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Re. if you sleep alone
27th May 2016 3:56am
Re. if you sleep alone
27th May 2016 3:57am
"play your cun’tessa like Stradivari’s violin
play it; play it till it makes music!"
the concerto of passion nothing finer John..
stirring me deep with this beautifully done erotic..
love Crim
play it; play it till it makes music!"
the concerto of passion nothing finer John..
stirring me deep with this beautifully done erotic..
love Crim
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Re. if you sleep alone
27th May 2016 4:16am
you took wicked delight in my moans, claiming
to want me in your mouth, in your throat, in your belly
& moaned in echo when I pulled you off by the roots
of your hair, not wanting our desire to end
in a sticky glaze on your tongue
love is brutal when I hovered over you like a destroyer,
my hands full of your naked, dewy flesh,
my mouth tasting the tips of your indelicate fruits
until it abridged the locking of our loins,
pounding like savages, speaking in foreign tongues!
Gorgeous lines ... Speaks of the savagery of passion in such eloquent tones
to want me in your mouth, in your throat, in your belly
& moaned in echo when I pulled you off by the roots
of your hair, not wanting our desire to end
in a sticky glaze on your tongue
love is brutal when I hovered over you like a destroyer,
my hands full of your naked, dewy flesh,
my mouth tasting the tips of your indelicate fruits
until it abridged the locking of our loins,
pounding like savages, speaking in foreign tongues!
Gorgeous lines ... Speaks of the savagery of passion in such eloquent tones
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27th May 2016 8:01am
This is so familiar to me : 'I pulled you off by the roots
of your hair, not wanting our desire to end
in a sticky glaze on your tongue
love is brutal when I hovered over you like a destroyer,'
yet when it left me, or I left it or however the story went on that occasion it always, no matter which way, left me feeling inadequate and missing a bit. I really enjoyed this, allowed me to go over old ground and take a new route. Thank you.
of your hair, not wanting our desire to end
in a sticky glaze on your tongue
love is brutal when I hovered over you like a destroyer,'
yet when it left me, or I left it or however the story went on that occasion it always, no matter which way, left me feeling inadequate and missing a bit. I really enjoyed this, allowed me to go over old ground and take a new route. Thank you.
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27th May 2016 9:01am
Re. if you sleep alone
27th May 2016 2:27pm
That final stanza and couplet are a symphony in and of themselves.
Beautifully composed, John.
Beautifully composed, John.
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27th May 2016 9:04pm
"you took wicked delight in my moans, claiming
to want me in your mouth, in your throat, in your belly
& moaned in echo when I pulled you off by the roots
of your hair, not wanting our desire to end
in a sticky glaze on your tongue"<--- Oh my John! Good lawd, you got me letting out a moan. HAWT!
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Re. if you sleep alone
28th May 2016 11:40am
You orchestrated a beautiful ballad...this was dripping with seduction..take your bow Maestro :)
Fav line
"we held each other in the night
while the night held its own secrets "
Fav line
"we held each other in the night
while the night held its own secrets "
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28th May 2016 7:08pm
What sweet music indeed, daring and playful. Those last two lines were wonderfully sexy!
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Anonymous
29th May 2016 10:53pm
Sir John, I gasped breath from the first to the last....one out doing the other...I can't even pick...all I can say is I pray I have room in my damned Thought Provoker Reading List....With love always - Taryn xoxo
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31st May 2016 9:07pm
Re. if you sleep alone
1st Jun 2016 00:31am
Feddeler, your poetry belongs in a classy erotic magazine... if you haven't already been published. Somehow, I feel like your poetry has the women swooning and the men howling at the moon, which is a reflection of your skill with the genre. This poem is brilliant! I liked the slow buildup in the story, crescendoing with powerful imagery and the final stanza... I visualised Cun'tessa bowing to a standing ovation with flowers falling at her feet.
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1st Jun 2016 5:10am
Sweet is the honey of such delectable lines... I could nearly feel his heated touch upon her dewy flesh. A true transport for the mind's prudent means to encapsulate desire's intricacies and sensuality, and oft times so unabashedly sought. Always a pleasure, blue angel
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Anonymous
1st Jun 2016 10:18pm
Your form and control, good sire, are matchless. I have nothing more to say or add. Reading this has given me such a plethora of emotions. Thank you for the read.
Phoenix
Phoenix
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Anonymous
20th Jun 2016 11:54am
You make me moan and yearn
inside.
..somewhere deep..but never
far out of your holding hands.
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inside.
..somewhere deep..but never
far out of your holding hands.
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Re. if you sleep alone
28th Jun 2016 6:42am
Re. if you sleep alone
1st Jul 2016 6:42am
You have a way of capturing the mind of the reader from beggining to end.Good stuff.
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