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dream
if this is a dream dont wake me
my life is perfect lately
the cause for this is her
she made my life perfect
i never want her to leave my life
i never will treat her bad
she makes my life perfect
i would never want to loose her
but if this is a dream dont wake me
my life is perfect lately
the cause for this is her
she made my life perfect
i never want her to leave my life
i never will treat her bad
she makes my life perfect
i would never want to loose her
but if this is a dream dont wake me
Published 13th Jul 2011
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8th Aug 2011 7:11pm
i think its good, though i feel u should add a little more to it, tell how she's made your life perfect, this may be a dream, but give me imagery. something to see, how she's made your life perfect.. hope this helps, an if doesnt think i just ranted, but its still a good write!
