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Cruel One The Sadist
broken for your pleasure
depraved of mind
twisted vixen
who seeks your displeasure
I would run from you
if you were kind to me
I prefer the rattlesnake you are
that scares me, shakes me up
with your sudden appearances
bringing a deadly essence
tearing into me, fucking me rough
you pound through the doors of my mind
with brutal force, raping it
then casting me back into your dungeon
existing off the scraps of approval
you toss my way on occasion
knowing this about me
you own this lady
who suffers humiliation
to stroke your ego
here I am again
on my knees to feed your arrogance
you are a cruel one and I love it
seeing the confines of my cell
sends me in a rage at times
wondering do you hear my tantrums?
or do they fall on deaf ears?
knowing you're in control
gagging my mouth
chaining my aggression
with your mere presence
that makes me quiver with excitement
sweet torture
served with a side of hate
disdain for who I am and what I represent
the deviant Sadist in you
Published 21st Apr 2016
| Edited 22nd Apr 2016
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21st Apr 2016 2:32am
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21st Apr 2016 5:28am
tempting poetry & artwork, Crim;
the fascination of a girl, naked & in chains...
the fascination of a girl, naked & in chains...
21st Apr 2016 6:05am
21st Apr 2016 8:32pm
oh my stars, beautiful brenda, the masochist in me just rolled over {&} whimpered
loved this
xo
loved this
xo
21st Apr 2016 9:54pm
Anonymous
- Edited 21st Apr 2016 9:34pm
21st Apr 2016 9:32pm
My Beautiful Brenda, as I said to you, the submissive masochist in you shines beautifully in this write and in these fabulous lines...
"then casting me back into your dungeon
existing off the scraps of approval
you toss my way on occasion
knowing this about me
you own this lady
who suffers humiliation
to stroke your ego
here I am again
on my knees to feed your arrogance
you are a cruel one and I love it"
*
"knowing you're in control
gagging my mouth
chaining my aggression
with your mere presence
that makes me quiver with excitement
sweet torture
served with a side of hate
disdain for who I am and what I represent
the deviant Sadist in you"
I love you
With all my love always - Taryn xoxo
"then casting me back into your dungeon
existing off the scraps of approval
you toss my way on occasion
knowing this about me
you own this lady
who suffers humiliation
to stroke your ego
here I am again
on my knees to feed your arrogance
you are a cruel one and I love it"
*
"knowing you're in control
gagging my mouth
chaining my aggression
with your mere presence
that makes me quiver with excitement
sweet torture
served with a side of hate
disdain for who I am and what I represent
the deviant Sadist in you"
I love you
With all my love always - Taryn xoxo
21st Apr 2016 9:56pm
thank you beautiful one for showing this write and me so much love..
I love you so much..
xoxo Brenda
I love you so much..
xoxo Brenda
22nd Apr 2016 11:49pm
"you pound though the doors of my mind" Only a submissive truly understands that line.
From one sub to another, great work sister.
From one sub to another, great work sister.
23rd Apr 2016 1:09pm
Anonymous
23rd Apr 2016 1:57am
God Fucking Damn, Brenda.. only you deliver this level of art consistently.. i'm a huge fan, and always will be.. love you..
Dave
Dave
23rd Apr 2016 1:09pm
25th Apr 2016 12:34pm
Wow....so advanced as I am in years and a million miles of air travel, but never have I encountered anyone who craved that de Sade of me.
Probably too late, but I wouldn't have missed it for the world.
Thanks for the illumination.
Probably too late, but I wouldn't have missed it for the world.
Thanks for the illumination.
thank you kindly Sir for the attention you've shown this lady..
with love and respect Crimsin
with love and respect Crimsin
25th Apr 2016 5:34pm
The Marquis de Crow really loves this Crim, the perfect fantasy for a Monday morning. I'm beginning to shake my usual sense of futility as I contemplate your submission.
sweet torture
served with a side of hate
disdain for who I am and what I represent "
Wouldn't go that far but I aim to please. Now I guess I'd better get cracking...
sweet torture
served with a side of hate
disdain for who I am and what I represent "
Wouldn't go that far but I aim to please. Now I guess I'd better get cracking...
25th Apr 2016 6:14pm
I love it the Marquis de Crow :)
thank you Sir Crow for bringing me smiles this morning..
love Crim
thank you Sir Crow for bringing me smiles this morning..
love Crim
