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Charcoal Colored Thoughts
longing to create some beauty
a masterpiece lovingly made
though my mind has turned dark
my brightly infused watercolors
replaced with charcoals
coloring my thoughts a deep onyx
wanting the rain to caress my nude form
wash away all the sins of yesterday
kiss me in the lonely, ugly places
left holding wilted black lilies
so symbolic of my feelings
tender of soul, fierce of mind
letting the dew wash over me now
knowing today is a new day
with more poetry on the horizon
accepting charcoals can create
the most poignant of pictures
I take them in hand and begin again
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20th Apr 2016 3:42pm
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20th Apr 2016 10:21pm
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20th Apr 2016 4:35pm
very beautiful
sometimes charcoal sketches are emotional than colour paintings...
sometimes charcoal sketches are emotional than colour paintings...
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20th Apr 2016 10:22pm
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20th Apr 2016 10:52pm
Trust your muse to guide your hand and make a rainbow in black and white...
JJ
JJ
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20th Apr 2016 11:05pm
thank you JJ I will I am seeking her..
hoping to be blessed with beauty if not that honesty at least..
your visits and thoughts are cherished..
love Brenda
hoping to be blessed with beauty if not that honesty at least..
your visits and thoughts are cherished..
love Brenda
Re. Charcoal Colored Thoughts
20th Apr 2016 11:08pm
I used to do charcoal art - I loved it as a medium - 'accepting charcoals can create
the most poignant of pictures
I take them in hand and begin again' - simply beautiful :-)
the most poignant of pictures
I take them in hand and begin again' - simply beautiful :-)
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20th Apr 2016 11:29pm
I adore getting to know more about you David :)
thank you for showing this write love..
love Breda
thank you for showing this write love..
love Breda
Re. Charcoal Colored Thoughts
20th Apr 2016 11:55pm
"accepting charcoals can create
the most poignant of pictures
I take them in hand and begin
again"
This is a great verse to finalize
this heartfelt and hopeful poem
with.
Like you said...
"I begin again"
We always have this ability... resilience, reimagining ourselves,
redefining.
And, charcoal sketches are an
art all of their own.
Dantalyon
the most poignant of pictures
I take them in hand and begin
again"
This is a great verse to finalize
this heartfelt and hopeful poem
with.
Like you said...
"I begin again"
We always have this ability... resilience, reimagining ourselves,
redefining.
And, charcoal sketches are an
art all of their own.
Dantalyon
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21st Apr 2016 4:42am
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21st Apr 2016 2:10am
This is incredible. You caused me to think and feel at the same time. I love that feeling
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21st Apr 2016 4:42am
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21st Apr 2016 5:24am
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21st Apr 2016 6:04am
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21st Apr 2016 8:26am
"Accepting charcoals can create..." Ain't that the damn truth! Awesomeness!
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aw Poe so glad you liked this one being the awesome artist you are and charcoal being your favorite medium..
love Crimsin
love Crimsin
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Anonymous
21st Apr 2016 9:27pm
That's my girl, holding strong and never giving up.....I'm so proud of you My Beautiful Brenda...these lines are just wonderful...
"letting the dew wash over me now
knowing today is a new day
with more poetry on the horizon
accepting charcoals can create
the most poignant of pictures
I take them in hand and begin again"
With all my love always - Taryn xoxo
"letting the dew wash over me now
knowing today is a new day
with more poetry on the horizon
accepting charcoals can create
the most poignant of pictures
I take them in hand and begin again"
With all my love always - Taryn xoxo
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21st Apr 2016 9:51pm
thank you for showing me your love on this write..
I wasn't sure about it as you know..
I love you..
xoxo Brenda
I wasn't sure about it as you know..
I love you..
xoxo Brenda
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Anonymous
22nd Apr 2016 8:04am
shaded of grey
your colors weep
dormant bouquet
in twilight sleep
mind of beauty
distorted thought
outlook gloomy
but say thou nought
<3 dkruie
your colors weep
dormant bouquet
in twilight sleep
mind of beauty
distorted thought
outlook gloomy
but say thou nought
<3 dkruie
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22nd Apr 2016 3:14pm
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23rd Apr 2016 1:54am
Brenda, simply brilliant.. just breathtaking.. loved this, and love you!!
Dave
Dave
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23rd Apr 2016 1:15pm
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Anonymous
26th Apr 2016 11:32pm
You've left me with speech.
And I have to have this,
yeah Im coming back for
this beauty. Gawd damn it.
I am about to make you my
woman, fuck lol cant help it.
Feeling all kind of ways when
reading you. Like I said, youre
the first to ever get to me in
plentiful angles, this is piercing.
;)
And I have to have this,
yeah Im coming back for
this beauty. Gawd damn it.
I am about to make you my
woman, fuck lol cant help it.
Feeling all kind of ways when
reading you. Like I said, youre
the first to ever get to me in
plentiful angles, this is piercing.
;)
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27th Apr 2016 4:34am