tender lilt

Tender is racing through the veins of this verse. You rally have laid down your daggers in this extraordinary, beautiful poem. I could feel this in my soul as I read each word! Love it!!!
JJ

thank you JJ for such a lovingly beautiful comment..

love Brenda

My Beautiful Brenda, this is absolutely stunning with such a tenderness that it pulls me deep within you....you have stolen breath from me here lovely one. Take a bow!

I love you

With all my love always - Taryn xoxo

thank you beautiful one from my heart for all the love you show me moving me deeply..

I love you..

xoxo Brenda

Wow...a truly breathtaking, beautiful piece of ink!!! I loved this!

aw thank you Poe my friend..

love Crim

Brenda, you really need to
collect all of these writes
of yours that are like this
and compile them into a
compilation... they are truly
spectacular.

I'd want one - or, a few; one
to read, one to put into a
safe, and, one to give to
someone to share with.

  Dantalyon

thank you dearest Dantalyon for showing this style so much love..

i'll see what I can do..

love Brenda

Brenda, this is so beautiful.. made my list.. i love your tender writes.. i love that you only show that side every now, and then.. just blown away.. love you!!..



Dave

thank you from my heart Dave :)

love you too..

xoxo Brenda

my dear crimson
though you I know not
this side of innocence
I've barely tasted
innocence is beauty
of which I struggle in mind
the tenderness of voice
I myself find at peace.

beautiful your passage <3

thank you kindly..

I love your poetic comments..

love Crim

thank you graciously Todski..

love Crim

i love when we're allowed to see another of your beautiful facets...
... this was sheer loveliness, lady
xo

thank you beautiful Katja for the love on this write..

love Brenda

soft as the chants of mystical birds in a lagoon, Crim.
we delight in it...

thank you John for the lovely comment..

love Crim

You're usually pretty fierce Crim, but I love this dark delicacy.  You have your gentle side and it's well apparent here.  So many fine lines but these are my favorites:

"whisper my feelings for you        
as the meditation bell chimes        
steadying the rhythm of my heart "

Maybe this fortunate man's name could be your mantra.  Excellent work!        

thank you Sir Crow making me smile with such a beautiful comment..

love Crim

Dear Crim, how could I say more than already bestowed?  That I find peace from the peace you share here, is what I can add.  I hope it's a well you can draw from more often.  Be well Brenda.

RL

--Jade🌾

thank you Jade grateful this write brought you some peace.. touched by your RL add..

love Brenda

Fantastic work, Crimsin. I love the willow visual and the reference. This tree is the one I have always associated with life and life force.  I gravitated to those scenes in both Pocahontas and Avatar.
Guess my small pond and country creek childhood had something to do with it.
Thank You for stirring the feelings and the memories

Sir so happy this write stirred beautiful memories..

with love and respect Crimsin

such a beautiful piece - gave me that warm fuzzy feeling inside (not felt that for a while) :-)

excellent poem - easy add :-)

David so glad to give you that warm feeling :)

thank you my friend for the love..

love Brenda

Samantha thank you graciously..

love Crimsin

bedazzling beauty Crim! love the tender Crim (also) that peeks out every once in a while, nice Bren de la Bren...

aw Dean thank you my friend love Brenda :)

This is spell-binding. Thank you. I miss these moments. Refreshing yet heavy, wanting.

thank you Poppy for such a lovely comment..

love Crimsin

....this is simply gorgeous, Crim. Lovely write...xo

thank you beautiful Rain :)

love Crimsin

"the delicate shadows of your mind        
cast ethereal beauty on me        
rare gem hidden in the dragon's keep"... - This corresponds perfectly for how i feel when leafing through your poetic offerings. Your delicate shadows draw me in gently from the king of chaos' grasp. Though careful not to leave a trace of my nearing them,,,I leave in silence, but am filled with admiration. Love, blue angel  

lovely Angel thank you for gracing us with your presence again..

leaving your beautiful thoughts..

love Crim

If I could speak or type a thousand
words per minute

then it would be a moment a
photographed of my heart
pounding.. in motion

and poetry is just that.

..my freakative gods..damn

This is pure beauty felt iin
a dim lit room



-

ah lovely one how your comment kissed my soul..

was feeling down keep hearing "you can't always be up kid" in my mind..

so it is with writing we have our moments in the sun then fade to black..

thank you for such an uplifting comment..

love Crim

thank you so much dearest Amelia I'm touched and honored..

love Crim

A beautiful expression; your words flow through creating pure loveliness.

thank you graciously beautiful poetess..

love Crim