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Fuck With Me Shit?
I'm a mean succubus
did I tell you?
i'll fucking suck you dry
don't give a damn about your refinement
i'll sip you like you're the finest whiskey
then piss you out and on to the next one
can't play a gamer
I'm from the streets
learned everything the hard way
whores don't fall in love
though they talk a good game
play with my head psst I think not
you'll feel my sting as I leave you in the dust
not grown up enough kid you don't make the cut
I need an Incubus that knows what the fuck he's doing
knows where all my buttons are at and pushes them
you grazed me but I'm not fazed
I ride hard do you?
you have no idea what I deal with
no clue to who the hell I am
if you think I'm aggressive you'd be right
cast me aside really I don't give a fuck
I will never have chains on me
despite what I say it's just more whore play
you think me under your thumb?
ha what the fuck is going on in your life?
getting beat down I bet
watch and wait when you're looking for the right
i'll hit you with my left take you down to the ground
I'm pissed the fuck off mainly at myself
for letting myself think anyone could keep a real rider down
I spit my fire let it burn who this is intended for
let it roll of the backs of the rest
just telling you don't know
who the fuck you're messing with
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Re. Fuck With Me Shit?
20th Apr 2016 4:46am
*Crim drops mic and struts off with the sound of her stilettos clicking the floor, while the song "She's a Bad Mama Jama" plays in the background.* xo
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20th Apr 2016 10:58pm
Re. Fuck With Me Shit?
20th Apr 2016 4:46am
oh my, Crim, this simply blisters with anger. I love it. Beat down that incubus until he's a dribbling pile of sniffed over dog shit. Seriously, this is awesome.
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Re: Re. Fuck With Me Shit?
20th Apr 2016 10:59pm
thank you Darkest Lord Hades for such a fiercely fantastic comment..
love Crimsin
love Crimsin
Re. Fuck With Me Shit?
20th Apr 2016 5:02am
"i'll fucking suck you dry
don't give a damn about your refinement
i'll sip you like you're the finest whiskey
then piss you out and on to the next one"
He's probably not the finest
whiskey though Crim if he's
put you into this irate state
of mind... and, rightfully so;
you're not to be fucked with.
Dantalyon
don't give a damn about your refinement
i'll sip you like you're the finest whiskey
then piss you out and on to the next one"
He's probably not the finest
whiskey though Crim if he's
put you into this irate state
of mind... and, rightfully so;
you're not to be fucked with.
Dantalyon
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Re: Re. Fuck With Me Shit?
20th Apr 2016 11:00pm
thank you Dantalyon graciously for the continued love you've shown me..
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. Fuck With Me Shit?
20th Apr 2016 5:23am
stalkers come around, never know who they're gonna hit.
there's enough fire here to burn it down, Crim...
there's enough fire here to burn it down, Crim...
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Re: Re. Fuck With Me Shit?
20th Apr 2016 11:01pm
thank you John though he's not a stalker just an irritation to my mind's peace..
love Crimsin
love Crimsin
Re. Fuck With Me Shit?
20th Apr 2016 10:32am
Oh shit, it hit the fan, n if I were him I'd split, like scram, run mutha fucka RUN!!! got the Crim spittin grim, so ya ass is Done!! lol go get em lady! lol
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20th Apr 2016 11:01pm
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Anonymous
20th Apr 2016 9:51pm
Angry and raw, visceral and real. Crim has left no doubt in my mind, I am going to put the seat down when I am done!
haha well done!
haha well done!
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20th Apr 2016 11:03pm
Re. Fuck With Me Shit?
20th Apr 2016 10:53pm
now! that was fuckin scary and I really mean fuckin scary - scary but enjoyable like a good scary movie - I just love the line "whores don't fall in love " and would like to steal it as a title for a poem with your permission of course :-)
excellent stuff - so glad you're back :-)
excellent stuff - so glad you're back :-)
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Re: Re. Fuck With Me Shit?
20th Apr 2016 10:57pm
you made me giggle with your comment David and of course I would be honored to see a poem of yours titled thusly :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
Nomen omen!
20th Apr 2016 11:41pm
Crimsin by name, crimson by coloured rage, crimson by nature to leave you burnt. Anyone who thinks you are nothing but a fragile flower, certainly has not read your words and inhaled the immense passion and strength in your writing! More fool the fool who thinks otherwise, just don't waste too much time on them; mess with the red and end up dead.
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Re: Nomen omen!
21st Apr 2016 4:40am
Re. Fuck With Me Shit?
21st Apr 2016 2:16am
The worm has turned...And is now packing an Uzi.
I love to see the embodiment of "I have had E-Fucking-Nuf"
Great ink
I love to see the embodiment of "I have had E-Fucking-Nuf"
Great ink
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Re: Re. Fuck With Me Shit?
21st Apr 2016 4:41am
thank you kind Sir for such an awesome comment..
with love and respect Crimsin
with love and respect Crimsin
Re. Fuck With Me Shit?
Anonymous
21st Apr 2016 9:24pm
My Beautiful Brenda, had to giggle over the first comment left by Rain, you picked up the mic after I had chucked it down, we do feed off each other don't we lovely one? When you write lines like this you bring out the untamed beast in me....
"I need an Incubus that knows what the fuck he's doing
knows where all my buttons are at and pushes them
you grazed me but I'm not fazed
I ride hard do you?"
I love you!
With love always - Taryn xoxo
"I need an Incubus that knows what the fuck he's doing
knows where all my buttons are at and pushes them
you grazed me but I'm not fazed
I ride hard do you?"
I love you!
With love always - Taryn xoxo
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Re: Re. Fuck With Me Shit?
21st Apr 2016 9:49pm
lovely one this is an oldie I was feeling much like you when I decided to post this..
I love you so much and know you will be writing as sexy as ever soon and yes we do feed off each other's energies..
I know I get so inspired by your presence..
loving you with my whole heart..
thank you lovely one..
love Brenda
I love you so much and know you will be writing as sexy as ever soon and yes we do feed off each other's energies..
I know I get so inspired by your presence..
loving you with my whole heart..
thank you lovely one..
love Brenda
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Anonymous
23rd Apr 2016 1:51am
Dropping the truth, as only you can.. Brenda, i loved the flow.. and the honesty.. you are such a poetess.. so many layers, so much depth.. love you!!
Dave
Dave
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Re: Re. Fuck With Me Shit?
23rd Apr 2016 1:17pm
this is an old poem I had in drafts..
not really how I feel at the moment..
though I thank you graciously for showing me love on it Dave..
love Brenda
not really how I feel at the moment..
though I thank you graciously for showing me love on it Dave..
love Brenda
Re. Fuck With Me Shit?
Anonymous
26th Apr 2016 11:35pm
Ha! you are fierce and
can sense it.
Let it ride.
An honor to read of. I needed
this.
can sense it.
Let it ride.
An honor to read of. I needed
this.
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