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Ambiguity Sucks Period (ACROSTIC) NaPoWriMo #11
Ambiguity is a premeditated
Murderer strangling clarity
Barehanded by the throat
Into a warped possibility that
Grows from shallow ground,
Unearthed mounds of mis-
Interpretation from a densely
Trodden system of hope until
Yielding a false prophet of truth.
Shouldn’t we at least position as
Understanding adults, hold no
Contempt for the past while
Knowing direct honesty would
Salvage an eternal friendship?
Perhaps acquaintances are not
Enough to satisfy the palpable
Reality of our yearning psyches;
I don’t know which direction to go,
Other than where my heart points.
Do you?
~
Author's note: Opting to work on various forms
throughout NaPoWriMo. First Up, Acrostic.
Let's hope I finish before I reach S for Sestina!
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Re. Ambiguity Sucks Period (ACROSTIC) NaPoWriMo #11
11th Apr 2016 7:02pm
Re: Re. Ambiguity Sucks Period (ACROSTIC) NaPoWriMo #11
11th Apr 2016 7:09pm
Re. Ambiguity Sucks Period (ACROSTIC) NaPoWriMo #11
Anonymous
11th Apr 2016 8:34pm
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Re. Ambiguity Sucks Period (ACROSTIC) NaPoWriMo #11
11th Apr 2016 10:33pm
"strangling clarity ?" the murderer
protests, "I was merely clearing
his throat..."
excellent poem, Ahavati ..:)
protests, "I was merely clearing
his throat..."
excellent poem, Ahavati ..:)
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Re. Ambiguity Sucks Period (ACROSTIC) NaPoWriMo #11
12th Apr 2016 7:24am
your poem is like a typhoon blowing thru the fog of uncertainty.
defiant piece...
defiant piece...
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Re. Ambiguity Sucks Period (ACROSTIC) NaPoWriMo #11
Re: Re. Ambiguity Sucks Period (ACROSTIC) NaPoWriMo #11
12th Apr 2016 6:50pm
Re. Ambiguity Sucks Period (ACROSTIC) NaPoWriMo #11
14th Apr 2016 12:12pm
Damn nice poem and I think you've just inspired me to resolve an ongoing issue in my life...
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Re: Re. Ambiguity Sucks Period (ACROSTIC) NaPoWriMo #11
14th Apr 2016 5:53pm
Exactly. I'm done with the ambiguous bullshit.
If you have something to say, say it direct.
If you have something to say, say it direct.
Re. Ambiguity Sucks Period (ACROSTIC) NaPoWriMo #11
14th Apr 2016 10:39pm
Great write Ahavati :)
I immediately think of Ray Bradbury’s great escape…
”and there was the sound of thunder“ best line ever!
We had a discussion on it in Comp II, and of course
it’s thought everywhere that it was that shotgun again.
I raised my hand and said, no! It was the dinosaurs!
Time was warped and they brought’em back because
of the butterfly. Anyway, I love that story.
No one really knows of course, but regardless, I couldn’t believe I found myself saying it.
I immediately think of Ray Bradbury’s great escape…
”and there was the sound of thunder“ best line ever!
We had a discussion on it in Comp II, and of course
it’s thought everywhere that it was that shotgun again.
I raised my hand and said, no! It was the dinosaurs!
Time was warped and they brought’em back because
of the butterfly. Anyway, I love that story.
No one really knows of course, but regardless, I couldn’t believe I found myself saying it.
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Re. Ambiguity Sucks Period (ACROSTIC) NaPoWriMo #11
18th Apr 2016 4:46am
Re. Ambiguity Sucks Period (ACROSTIC) NaPoWriMo #11
20th Apr 2016 00:05am
Re. Ambiguity Sucks Period (ACROSTIC) NaPoWriMo #11
22nd Apr 2016 3:12pm
you pose such intriguing questions, miss vati ....
... you are much like my personal rumi
xo
... you are much like my personal rumi
xo
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Re: Re. Ambiguity Sucks Period (ACROSTIC) NaPoWriMo #11
22nd Apr 2016 3:31pm
Re. Ambiguity Sucks Period (ACROSTIC) NaPoWriMo #11
Anonymous
23rd Jul 2017 5:11pm
Fuck Yeah!
Round of applause from Blaze and Co.
Round of applause from Blaze and Co.
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23rd Jul 2017 6:50pm