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'Packed in her Saddle' agin...
There he goes-
back at it again
Baby's ass
is so hot it's a sin
likely brushed ever
so slightly against him
the intensity of heat
had his meat thicken
solid like a steeled pin
Inspirin' the hungered grin
So to the knees he drops
teeth shreds panties
as the bubble bounces
n' pops, showcasin'
her ass-art doin'
an applause, n' then
Strong greedy hands
pry butter soft asscheeks
apart, as he starts to head-dart
all in, flipped, n flipped again
she squirts her passions
n' then she's licked,
n sticked-hours past
n' she's rewarded by him
with lava hot creamy, sticky
white toppin...'
back at it again
Baby's ass
is so hot it's a sin
likely brushed ever
so slightly against him
the intensity of heat
had his meat thicken
solid like a steeled pin
Inspirin' the hungered grin
So to the knees he drops
teeth shreds panties
as the bubble bounces
n' pops, showcasin'
her ass-art doin'
an applause, n' then
Strong greedy hands
pry butter soft asscheeks
apart, as he starts to head-dart
all in, flipped, n flipped again
she squirts her passions
n' then she's licked,
n sticked-hours past
n' she's rewarded by him
with lava hot creamy, sticky
white toppin...'
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Re. 'Packed in her Saddle' agin...
Anonymous
1st Apr 2016 00:49am
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1st Apr 2016 1:02am
Re. 'Packed in her Saddle' agin...
1st Apr 2016 1:08am
Erotic Ninja, luv ~ :-*
This is rather scrumptious... Mayhap, the real sin is you and these screaming steamers you write, luv, making folk want to do all sorts of naughty, naughty things to you...I mean, things, that's it, things... ;-*
Estas muy travierso...
This is rather scrumptious... Mayhap, the real sin is you and these screaming steamers you write, luv, making folk want to do all sorts of naughty, naughty things to you...I mean, things, that's it, things... ;-*
Estas muy travierso...
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Re: Re. 'Packed in her Saddle' agin...
1st Apr 2016 1:19am
Lmao...things to me?? Mmmmmm lol
thanks for the wonderful imagery lol n the support :)
thanks for the wonderful imagery lol n the support :)
Re. 'Packed in her Saddle' agin...
Anonymous
1st Apr 2016 1:12am
Whoa Poet......dynamic sexy write as usual.......I'm lost for words actually.....enjoyed.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
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1st Apr 2016 1:24am
Re. 'Packed in her Saddle' agin...
1st Apr 2016 1:25am
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1st Apr 2016 1:30am
Interesting? lol well I'm pleased it was interesting to u, n as always j truly appreciate your support :)
Re. 'Packed in her Saddle' agin...
1st Apr 2016 2:16am
Read this steamy piece PM and thought 'I may just have to excuse myself...' LOL ;)
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Re: Re. 'Packed in her Saddle' agin...
1st Apr 2016 3:09am
Lol well tell me where ur 'excusin' urself too n I can Cum give u a helpin hand lol thanks so much sweetness :)
Re. 'Packed in her Saddle' agin...
1st Apr 2016 2:44am
wow what a booti-ful imagery you created in this piece bro... very hot indeed! let me go grab my queen hehe... *big daps* :D
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Re: Re. 'Packed in her Saddle' agin...
1st Apr 2016 3:10am
Aaahhh yea go git her bro! lol
Thanks so much for your kind words n support, deeply appreciate you :)
Thanks so much for your kind words n support, deeply appreciate you :)
Re. 'Packed in her Saddle' agin...
1st Apr 2016 5:40am
you know what they say Poe... a spanking is one handed round of applause... g'on & show your appreciation to the lady lol
loved this
loved this
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Re: Re. 'Packed in her Saddle' agin...
1st Apr 2016 10:19am
Hhhhmmmm what an "ass-tute" observation! okie will do! lol.
Many thanks my sweetness, always :)
Many thanks my sweetness, always :)
Re. 'Packed in her Saddle' agin...
1st Apr 2016 5:50am
holy &^$% this was loaded gun lol
dare to say, i liked it too much.. good thing tomorrow is friday, i can go to confessional of all the unspeakable things i was thinking of reading this ;)
dare to say, i liked it too much.. good thing tomorrow is friday, i can go to confessional of all the unspeakable things i was thinking of reading this ;)
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Re: Re. 'Packed in her Saddle' agin...
1st Apr 2016 10:22am
Aaaawww there she is! lol
Yea it's ok to enjoy yourself, n I've
an "IN" with the big guy, he's ok with
it too! lol... Thanks bunches my dear
truly appreciate your support :)
Yea it's ok to enjoy yourself, n I've
an "IN" with the big guy, he's ok with
it too! lol... Thanks bunches my dear
truly appreciate your support :)
Re. 'Packed in her Saddle' agin...
1st Apr 2016 6:59am
hot hot hot..
i am diggin this my brotha..
"So to the knees he drops
teeth shreds panties
as the bubble bounces"
ha!! say it again!!
you put that patented
spice of yours on this joint
fo sure..
i am diggin this my brotha..
"So to the knees he drops
teeth shreds panties
as the bubble bounces"
ha!! say it again!!
you put that patented
spice of yours on this joint
fo sure..
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Re: Re. 'Packed in her Saddle' agin...
1st Apr 2016 10:25am
Lol hey bro. you already know how it is! lol I thank you greatly, n as always appreciate your continued support always :)
Re. 'Packed in her Saddle' agin...
1st Apr 2016 9:09am
Oh my,
I think i need a cup of iced tea to cool my cheeks
***fans flushed face***
So hot, Lady Rain
I think i need a cup of iced tea to cool my cheeks
***fans flushed face***
So hot, Lady Rain
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Re: Re. 'Packed in her Saddle' agin...
1st Apr 2016 10:34am
Lol... Aaawww well now that's sweet of you to say! Thank you so much sweetheart, I'm flattered n please be kind n share some of that tea? lol
Appreciate u :)
Appreciate u :)
Re. 'Packed in her Saddle' agin...
1st Apr 2016 9:17am
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1st Apr 2016 11:33am
Thank you my friend, I'm happy you liked it n truly grateful for your thoughts n time :)
Re. 'Packed in her Saddle' agin...
1st Apr 2016 10:48pm
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2nd Apr 2016 1:40am
Lol I'm glad you liked this my friend, thanks a lot u now gave me grinning :)
Re. 'Packed in her Saddle' agin...
2nd Apr 2016 1:10am
"So to the knees he drops
teeth shreds panties"<-- so, who dis' hoe you cheating with, cause I damn sure don't wear panties. Haha
Sexy, hot, smoking ink, Rich! ;)
teeth shreds panties"<-- so, who dis' hoe you cheating with, cause I damn sure don't wear panties. Haha
Sexy, hot, smoking ink, Rich! ;)
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Re: Re. 'Packed in her Saddle' agin...
2nd Apr 2016 1:42am
What!!?? Baby U I'd never cheat on!!
If was U n the pantie u wore becuz I asked, so I could capture ur 'love juice' in them lmao... Thank u my sweet "possessive" beauty lol
If was U n the pantie u wore becuz I asked, so I could capture ur 'love juice' in them lmao... Thank u my sweet "possessive" beauty lol
Re. 'Packed in her Saddle' agin...
3rd Apr 2016 5:18am
"There he goes-
back at it again
Baby's ass
is so hot it's a sin"
Great opening lines Poetik.
You always pen these erotik
pieces so vividly, taking the
reader straight into the room
like a voyeur.
Dantalion
back at it again
Baby's ass
is so hot it's a sin"
Great opening lines Poetik.
You always pen these erotik
pieces so vividly, taking the
reader straight into the room
like a voyeur.
Dantalion
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Re: Re. 'Packed in her Saddle' agin...
3rd Apr 2016 10:44am
Thanks bro. I just wanna get, hold, n keep the reader's attention lol.
Truly appreciate your support always :)
Truly appreciate your support always :)
Re. 'Packed in her Saddle' agin...
Anonymous
27th Apr 2016 4:27pm
A sweet noon treat, I love those.
;)
;)
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Re: Re. 'Packed in her Saddle' agin...
27th Apr 2016 4:30pm
Aaawww... Me too! N night, morn, in between the in between a etc. lol thank u my sweetness, truly n always grateful for your support :)