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In her naked form...
In her naked form
she shares, feedin' one
her pristine nudity...
Alabaster skin, so supple
her heavin' breast's display
erected nipples' hunger to be
touched, proclivity...
To taste of her plump
sweet red lips, her silky tongue
tied unto mine, that's where I long...
To be, caressin' the curvature of
such a scrumptious svelte body
long legs wrapped 'round waist
it's hard, to not want a nibble
a lick, a taste, of her hallowed
n' treasured place...
To wade into the rivers
gleamin' , streamin'
the sweetest honey
all over my happy face,
I'd gladly gobble it gone,
none will have went to waste...
In her naked form...
She's at the the apex
of anyone's sexually
desired fantasy...
Yet, what is of the utmost
of beauty...
Lost... within her wanton,
lustful, n' warmly lovin' soul...
100% exposed for all to see...
to her...beamin' so heavenly,
my Goddess, I fall to knee
n' supplicate unto thee...
Published 20th Jan 2016
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20th Jan 2016 4:28pm
Oh Poe...i love this...a bit of different from you in expression...but in your usual wonderful word form...one of the best here at word play and effective rhyme...
Reeeaally enjoy this. She is a lucky gal! My rl is full too...lol i need to toss some...or this would be on right now.
Love
J
Reeeaally enjoy this. She is a lucky gal! My rl is full too...lol i need to toss some...or this would be on right now.
Love
J
20th Jan 2016 5:18pm
Well if there's one thing u either figured out or need to know is I'm ALWAYS ready to flip the script n change up my style, just whatever n however it strikes me at the time lol
Thank u my sweetheart, happy to hear u wanted to list it, that's compliment enough :)
Thank u my sweetheart, happy to hear u wanted to list it, that's compliment enough :)
20th Jan 2016 6:38pm
versatile is what you do best, poe.
i said something on one of savaja's poems this week re exhibitionism that applies here too [me thinks]
besides the calculated risk, there's a sense of empowerment that can't be found from any other source...
... that really comes across here
"100% exposed for all to see...
to her...beamin' so heavenly,"
^^^^^
loveeeed that!
this was super sexy
xo
i said something on one of savaja's poems this week re exhibitionism that applies here too [me thinks]
besides the calculated risk, there's a sense of empowerment that can't be found from any other source...
... that really comes across here
"100% exposed for all to see...
to her...beamin' so heavenly,"
^^^^^
loveeeed that!
this was super sexy
xo
20th Jan 2016 7:10pm
I simply try to stay true to my heart n art... thank u my beauty , grateful I am always :)
20th Jan 2016 11:32pm
Bravo!! I love this one 😊 Sensual, erotic, and pleasurable. Im not into that hardcore stuff but love when you write in this manner. Makes me feel...tingly inside. Lol Lovely!!
20th Jan 2016 11:46pm
Aaaawww sweet Elle! It's so wonderful
to hear from u again! no hardcore huh? lol happy to know this was right
on the level u can deal with then lol
Thank u my sweetness :)
to hear from u again! no hardcore huh? lol happy to know this was right
on the level u can deal with then lol
Thank u my sweetness :)
20th Jan 2016 11:45pm
"To wade into the rivers
gleamin' , streamin'
the sweetest honey
all over my happy face,
I'd gladly gobble it gone,
none will have went to waste... " <--Well, you just go head fella and get to lickin', without wasting a single damn drop! lmbo....
You a bad man, Rich! A sexy one too! ;) This was glossed in seduction and hot as hell... Enjoyed!
gleamin' , streamin'
the sweetest honey
all over my happy face,
I'd gladly gobble it gone,
none will have went to waste... " <--Well, you just go head fella and get to lickin', without wasting a single damn drop! lmbo....
You a bad man, Rich! A sexy one too! ;) This was glossed in seduction and hot as hell... Enjoyed!
20th Jan 2016 11:50pm
Dearest Tara I'm sure u know it'd be impossible NOT to get diabetes from UR sugar!! lol... Thank you my dear, truly n always, I'm grateful always :)
21st Jan 2016 2:53am
Well hot damn! Got me thinking all dirty and stuff....nicely done. WOW! <3
22nd Jan 2016 9:55am
Damn nearly missed this comment... Sorry my precious lady. :( anyways,
"Thinking all dirty n stuff huh? Mmmm... Would u care to eloborate? lol... Thank you my sweet one, blessed I feel to have you in my lil corner of the DU. :)
"Thinking all dirty n stuff huh? Mmmm... Would u care to eloborate? lol... Thank you my sweet one, blessed I feel to have you in my lil corner of the DU. :)
23rd Jan 2016 4:52am
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21st Jan 2016 11:14am
Ahhh Erotic Ninja, luv ~ :-*
Sometimes you leave me so very conflicted after reading one of your incredible poems. This is one of those times oddly enough for, though this poem drips luscious, verdant sensuality, there is somewhat about it that feels poignant to me as well. Tis why when first you posted it and I read, I did not immediately comment.
Mayhap, I am misreading here, but there is, to me, such a sense of reverence, awe, and true heart involvement and with it, this feeling of constraint and the ultimate in unrequited desire... :-*
You write this exceedingly well, luv, placing it within most tender folds of intense passion.
Sometimes you leave me so very conflicted after reading one of your incredible poems. This is one of those times oddly enough for, though this poem drips luscious, verdant sensuality, there is somewhat about it that feels poignant to me as well. Tis why when first you posted it and I read, I did not immediately comment.
Mayhap, I am misreading here, but there is, to me, such a sense of reverence, awe, and true heart involvement and with it, this feeling of constraint and the ultimate in unrequited desire... :-*
You write this exceedingly well, luv, placing it within most tender folds of intense passion.
21st Jan 2016 1:11pm
See why I NEED ur thoughts?!
They're uplifting n inspiring! Thank you so so much my dear Savaja, truly appreciate you n the support.
N nope, at best it's wistful dreaming
bout unattainable pairings lol
They're uplifting n inspiring! Thank you so so much my dear Savaja, truly appreciate you n the support.
N nope, at best it's wistful dreaming
bout unattainable pairings lol
Anonymous
21st Jan 2016 5:12pm
Does sound rather like she is nothing less than a goddess and worshipped like one too
22nd Jan 2016 1:08am
Aaaawwww well, too bad for me
that 'Goddess' is faaaaarrrr from my reach! but as close as my next daydream lol... Thank u my sweetness, appreciate u much :)
that 'Goddess' is faaaaarrrr from my reach! but as close as my next daydream lol... Thank u my sweetness, appreciate u much :)
22nd Jan 2016 1:55am
Mmmmmmmmm Hot Purple this one this Poet!! Some very intense sexsual lines thruout this one.......enjoyed very much wading in your river......xo :)
22nd Jan 2016 10:07am
Well then wade on my flower, n enjoy as much as you want lol... Thank you
for your continued, wonderful support
I deeply appreciate it n you :)
for your continued, wonderful support
I deeply appreciate it n you :)
20th Feb 2016 8:01pm
Your avatar could have been the woman you 'tastily' write about, breasts to the fore.
21st Feb 2016 10:28am
Lol thanks, but nah that was simply a photo I saw n wanted to "re-express" in my way, becuz the original was ALOT thinner! lol but I'm happy you liked n thank u for your time n thoughts . :)
Anonymous
12th Jun 2016 3:39am
Oh. My. God.
I...yeah...nope...words all scattered...I am discombobulated...
Timid
I...yeah...nope...words all scattered...I am discombobulated...
Timid
12th Jun 2016 7:38am
Lol well I'm happy you at least managed to leave an attempt at speech lol... Thank you, I'm honored :)
