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Faintly, I Hear...
the pain of heartache resonates the sorrowful melody of a thousand burning violins
in time the flames will die in the shadow of resurrected hope
leaving the memory of music swirling in the ashes
Published 29th Dec 2015
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Anonymous
29th Dec 2015 7:29am
Omw. I love the 1st two lines! A thousand burning violins... such powerful imagery!
Powerful write
Powerful write
29th Dec 2015 5:58pm
30th Dec 2015 2:57am
Beautiful imagery sweet lady.
Can feel the sorrow and pain of an ending. Then there is the faint stir of hope and the chance for something new in the end. Almost like spring following winter. Enjoyed
Keith
Can feel the sorrow and pain of an ending. Then there is the faint stir of hope and the chance for something new in the end. Almost like spring following winter. Enjoyed
Keith
30th Dec 2015 3:37am
Thank you so much Keith, and I am so grateful for the reading list add!
30th Dec 2015 5:27am
Want a beautiful haunting write. In my mind, You can actually feel & hear the eerie melody. Excellent imagery. SURVIVOR➰
30th Dec 2015 6:23am
30th Dec 2015 11:40pm
31st Dec 2015 1:04am
I got goosebumps reading this, Chanel... just amazingly written in it's simplicity....
5th Jan 2016 4:01am
Thank you! You and your beautiful soul have become invaluable to my writing experience and I appreciate you tremendously!
Anonymous
16th Jan 2016 4:02am
very very lovely... thousand burning violins...
ah yes...luvin the imagery...
swirling in ashes and all...
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ah yes...luvin the imagery...
swirling in ashes and all...
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16th Jan 2016 3:11pm
