Disobedient Submissive

thank you beautiful one for getting this write and reinforcing it with your words of wisdom..

you always show me so much love and understanding..

I love you so much :)

xoxo Brenda

I enjoyed your deleted poem as well as this one.
This is like a continuation.
You trying to be a dominant but give in and become a submissive.

Both very sexy and very much enjoyed 😁
You have such a wondrous mind 😀

thank you graciously DC you do to :)

love Crim

thank you Sir for your deep and accurate observations on this write..

with respect Crimsin

burning me with guilt  
upon reflection  
on what I write and say  

eating me alive  
I spit venom  
then drink it back down  

writhing in my own poison  
I hope you didn't  
see me in my vulnerability  

I so get this Brenda, it's a fine line to walk..
you deserve the very best and any man , muse or whatever
who can't appreciate you when your being silly or unreasonable can suck it hard !
loved the honesty in this !
loves you Sis!
Always
Jackie xoxoxoxox

thank you lovely Jackie for showing me love on this write :)

love Brenda

Quite a bit of rhyme for you, interesting.  
 
I've long wondered if submissives are disobedient because they want to be, or if it's just natural human traits exposing themselves. I suspect a little bit of both, but still lean away from the ladder... hah...
 
Enjoyed...

thank you Fenom I think I desire the punishment so I push buttons..

love Brenda

I love the honesty to this Crim, disobedient but brilliant.

"fearing you read the poem I deleted  
I can't approach you  
as bold as I am you make me shake"

I do a lot of deleting of my own work.  Please don't pull this one.  It's a keeper as far as I'm concerned.    
   

thank you kindly Sir Crow :)

love Crim

One of your most honest poems to date

You're really the Dominant you know, you always control everything ...

Bad ass Like

of course you're right Poet thank you I cherish your visits and thoughts..

love Brenda

that's a devastating look at the lifestyle, Crim,
fleeing from then returning to the addiction.
words like switchblades...

thank you John I love your poetic, insightful comments..

love Crim

Brenda,
  As I read this poem and really listened to the words I was intrigued. You my love are brave
enough to look at yourself and are willing to be honest with yourself.
It is rare today. I have felt this theme
from write to write now that I have read you so often. I love your honesty.
Keith

thank you Keith for continuing to show me and my writes love..

love Brenda

Brenda, this poem bleeds brutal honesty.. and on a subject not easy to write about.. it's like a self-confession.. trying to purge all the demons, that have brought you pain.. true bravery is looking something in the eye, whether it be man, woman, ghost, or demon.. it's not going away easily, and facing our darkest fears.. which you do here, and everyday.. this was brilliantly penned.. and as always, i wish you nothing but happiness.. with love..




Dave

thank you Dave I love you..

xoxo Brenda

you always write bravely with exposed ink on a naked page...

thank you Dean for the love..

love Crim

Sexiness as always is flowing from your ink. Searing salacious hunger.. much enjoyed! blue angel

thank you beautiful Angel as always I cherish your thoughts :)

love Crim

I shoved my cock down a server at subway...wouldn't stop talking and fucked up my order...then got a ticket on the next train out of town..lol sexy sweet darkness nice!

thank you graciously for the kind and funny comment :)

love Crim

written so well that I almost wanted to lecture you about being a bad submissive and you know I can't sit at ease with this stuff - so well done this poem really works as it should even for me ;-)

thank you David for showing this write love for being a naughty submissive..

love Crim

i'm not a submissives arse but this speaks to me, beautiful brenda...
"I know words cut
even the hardest hearts
feeling you holding back your tirade
if you should unleash it on me"
^^^^
cuts like a knife when they're stoic & swallow their disappointment
... i love how you've bared yourself here
xo

thank you beautiful Katja it does hurt when they simply withhold..

love you lady :)

xoxo Brenda

Ladyloves, I am loving the
quivers sent my way,

will not say more, cannot
say

 "ahem"  

mmhm, must be careful
exploring your wells of
deep ends lol


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so pleased this ink affected you in such a way..

love Crim