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18th Nov 2015 3:17am
Thank you sweet cheeks! I’m kinda’ proud of that stanza too. :)
Never really been a woman that needed to speak much or try to attract attention. I work daily on being a better me, respectfully. Appreciate you leaving me some love Lady T….
Never really been a woman that needed to speak much or try to attract attention. I work daily on being a better me, respectfully. Appreciate you leaving me some love Lady T….
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17th Nov 2015 1:19am
lovely Rain love that you know who you are a confident gorgeous woman..
love the format and picture of you hot damn lady ;)
love Crim
love the format and picture of you hot damn lady ;)
love Crim
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18th Nov 2015 3:19am
Thank you sexy Crim! Confidence and a smile is the sexiest thing a woman can wear. ;)
Thank you for the compliment.....xo
Thank you for the compliment.....xo
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17th Nov 2015 3:36am
You're hot to trot, Rain. 'Nuff said . . .
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18th Nov 2015 3:25am
Hot to trot? Gosh, haven’t heard that description with me in the same sentence in over 20 yrs. Lol..
Flattered though, Jerry! Thankya kind sir!
Flattered though, Jerry! Thankya kind sir!
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17th Nov 2015 4:42am
I love Macy, dig your take so much..this is really awesome T. Every woman should really read this and find something to own....think even more every man should and damn well listen.
Brava
Love
Jennifer
Brava
Love
Jennifer
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18th Nov 2015 3:30am
Aww thank you Jen! Glad you enjoy this ink. I can only hope this young generation of women learn how to love themselves, own, embrace and celebrate who they truly are, respectfully.
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17th Nov 2015 4:45am
"Queen roots grounded in soil that produces
a home grown woman- phenomenally"
*Cue my one-woman standing ovation*
This is spectacular, and I will save it for a day that I forget how powerful simply being me truly is...
a home grown woman- phenomenally"
*Cue my one-woman standing ovation*
This is spectacular, and I will save it for a day that I forget how powerful simply being me truly is...
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18th Nov 2015 3:34am
First-off, let me say your user name gives several ideas for musing. Love it! :) Secondly, I’m thrilled with your response, Beautiful E. There is empowerment amongst women, when we can share advice/experience, and use it to motivate ourselves. So thank you for adding her to your virtual library and I will definitely be by your pad to check out your décor…..
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17th Nov 2015 5:12am
this feels like one of those 'for the record' type vibe...you stated your case clearly and eloquently Rain...so whoever had the cloudy thoughts certainly got a new forecast. ....Rain with a sunny outlook..handle your bizness girlie. .luvin the self assertiveness
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18th Nov 2015 3:36am
Yup Naajir! You understood this ink’s message pretty well sir! Lol…. Love that you really get me!
Thank you for the ink love and I’m honored you added her to your collection....
Thank you for the ink love and I’m honored you added her to your collection....
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17th Nov 2015 2:18pm
Every woman should read this Rain.Also every man should, too. Written by a deeply eloquent, confident woman who owns her own soul.
Beautifully presented picture by the way. Bravo!
Beautifully presented picture by the way. Bravo!
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18th Nov 2015 3:38am
I’m all smiles, thanks to you Tony! :)
You are so good for my ego! Thank you for the compliment....
You are so good for my ego! Thank you for the compliment....
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17th Nov 2015 6:54pm
Very bold, almost defiant and definitely you. I always admired that in you.....and your glorious ink. Now, as for that "Maya" voice, I dunno about that 😂
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18th Nov 2015 3:43am
"almost defiant?!" Who me? lol.. Ok, maybe just a little. Maya’s voice was somewhat lethargic, tempo slow, always selecting her words carefully before speaking. (which is the correct way), but me? You know I talk fast without many breaths. My voice needs Ritalin or Adderall :) But you got the point of my ink… Thank you for the listings…
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17th Nov 2015 8:20pm
I won't try to define you except to say you're a fierce and sexy woman and one of the finest writers here. Great job showcasing this with the perfect pic. You look so relaxed.....
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18th Nov 2015 3:44am
Goodness! What a flattering comment Crow!
I’m humbled! Thank you so very much…. :)
I’m humbled! Thank you so very much…. :)
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17th Nov 2015 10:10pm
Rain some more!
I love your moves, I love your mind and i especially love the way you mind fuck me with your words !
Well done Rain!!!
((((((((((((((((((((((((Tara))))))))))))))))))))))))
loves you babes
Jackie xoxoxoxoxox
I love your moves, I love your mind and i especially love the way you mind fuck me with your words !
Well done Rain!!!
((((((((((((((((((((((((Tara))))))))))))))))))))))))
loves you babes
Jackie xoxoxoxoxox
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18th Nov 2015 3:46am
Well hell, mind fucking seems to be the in thang’ girlie! Lol…
Thank you for the wonderful compliment Jackie! Hugs&kisses….
btw.... I see you glowing, the shine looks good on ya.... xo
Thank you for the wonderful compliment Jackie! Hugs&kisses….
btw.... I see you glowing, the shine looks good on ya.... xo
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18th Nov 2015 1:15pm
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Rain, after reading this poem shortly after you posted it, my brain was swarmed with mind bees that buzzed so loudly I could not think. Introspective poems are my favorite to read and most heartfelt to write, so when the goddess of verse spills ink such as this, my overwhelmed mind had to seek a place of solitude and embrace your words until I could come out and form coherent sentences once again... I can hardly tell you what you mean to me, but if I could, it would be but one snowflake in a blizzard on a planet where blizzards rage from pole to pole in a never ending winter wonderland... so many voices would join mine to pile snow up to the sky!
When you walk, even in bare feet, your hips create waves of poetry that not even the numbness of paralysis can stop a lonely soul from crawling to surrender to your whims. "Everything" does not encompass all that you mean, so how can all of the dictionaries of the world hope to define one who can be a raindrop, or snowflake, or rivers and streams, or clouds in the sky, lakes over land or oceans deeper than the sky is high ever dream of defining one who breathes life into words, that brings life to places where no life has existed for so long that not even death remembers where solitude comforts me?
JJ
When you walk, even in bare feet, your hips create waves of poetry that not even the numbness of paralysis can stop a lonely soul from crawling to surrender to your whims. "Everything" does not encompass all that you mean, so how can all of the dictionaries of the world hope to define one who can be a raindrop, or snowflake, or rivers and streams, or clouds in the sky, lakes over land or oceans deeper than the sky is high ever dream of defining one who breathes life into words, that brings life to places where no life has existed for so long that not even death remembers where solitude comforts me?
JJ
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Goodness jj! I …..I…. I have no words. Literally speechless, and that’s a hard task to accomplish. I’ve been trying to think of a response equivalent to a level of admiration and respect as your remarkable comment, but I have nothing. I’m floored at the poetic-beauty of your words jj, and ‘thank you’ seems inadequate and does the thought of this comment an injustice, but at the moment, that’s all I’ve got, so, thank you! :) Glad you felt like holding on to her for a little while too. Be still my heart….
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18th Nov 2015 10:09pm
Finally! I have been trying for years to leave you speechless... success at last! Lololol, Just kidding of course, but still I am smiling to think I have done so. I just express myself as I feel and the words find their way out of my brain to be filtered through my heart while making their way to my fingertips... it's all your fault for inspiring me so!!!
JJ
JJ
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18th Nov 2015 4:03pm
This Is an Amazing Write Rain.... simply amazing.
This should be every woman's anthem for herself!!
Pen Praise
XOXO
Fire
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This should be every woman's anthem for herself!!
Pen Praise
XOXO
Fire
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18th Nov 2015 9:55pm
Hey Fire! That sounds like a fierce idea to me! :) I’m stoked you think so highly of this write. Happy to see you visiting my neighborhood. Thankya….
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18th Nov 2015 4:59pm
This was such a beautiful, powerful, thought provoking ink …
And what Fire said ^^^ oxo
And what Fire said ^^^ oxo
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18th Nov 2015 9:56pm
I’m ecstatic that you liked this ink enough to list it Je! :) Thank you for smiling upon my page, while bringing a smile to my face. Deeply appreciated!
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18th Nov 2015 7:30pm
take me to church goddess! i just love this gem soaked with sophistication, cant blame me for 'staring in your direction intriguingly' though, words of wisdom winding through your beautiful temple... just dam!!! i would say more but there really is no definition to the undefinable...
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18th Nov 2015 10:01pm
*sitting on the front pew, big hat on* saying, "hallelujah!" :)
Dean, Dean, Dean! I’m blushing, thanks to you fella! Much respect to ya, and thanks for keeping her…..
Dean, Dean, Dean! I’m blushing, thanks to you fella! Much respect to ya, and thanks for keeping her…..
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19th Nov 2015 1:22am
I can't help but smile every single time O read your pieces!! ( and it's not that regular phony smile, but you know the one that spreads slowly and builds!! YES you got me😊😊😘. You are simply Everything, this piece is as well. You have a gift of language and it just unfolds with grace and all those good things that make me tingle when I read Rainnnn💦.. ❤️ I love it
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19th Nov 2015 5:23am
Vivid, I kid you not, I smiled reading this, and not the phony kind but a smile that spreads slowly and builds. ;)Truly adore your comment(s). Thank you doll....
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19th Nov 2015 2:10pm
Positively prismatic! Growls and bows to your confident, and curvaceous inking! Much enjoyed, blue angel
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19th Nov 2015 11:04pm
....even your growls are sexy, Blue! ;) Thank you so much for the ink love.... appreciateya...
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You are a fierce woman my lady, WOW!
What an incredible boost to every woman. Not only am I keeeping this, but I am going to frame it and hang it in my wall of fame in my hallway, with your permission of course.
Brilliant and beautiful ; )
P.S. I just started wearing my stilettos again and putting one infront of the other....lol
What an incredible boost to every woman. Not only am I keeeping this, but I am going to frame it and hang it in my wall of fame in my hallway, with your permission of course.
Brilliant and beautiful ; )
P.S. I just started wearing my stilettos again and putting one infront of the other....lol
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Lovely Lena I'm honored by the thought sweety! Please take her, no permission needed. Really beaming from your response. Thanks for giving her a home and, *I love the way your footsteps sound in stilettos*. ;) So stoked to read your strategized steps towards a new path.... #Hug&Kisses
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20th Nov 2015 1:43am
Love the metaphorical play here, it speaks volumes about the poet and the woman ...
But what I enjoyed most is the last line ...
I've lived my life trying to fight against how others would define me, even those who claimed to love me, so yeah ... don't let the hounds of hell chase you into a corner ... Defining you.
xoxo Sis
But what I enjoyed most is the last line ...
I've lived my life trying to fight against how others would define me, even those who claimed to love me, so yeah ... don't let the hounds of hell chase you into a corner ... Defining you.
xoxo Sis
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20th Nov 2015 4:12am
Thank you Lobo for sharing a personal note with me. You know, if we fight trying to defend ourselves to people, including the ones we love, we will always lose that war. Folks will always try to judge and define you. We can only be true to who we are, that's how we win the battles. Thank you for lending me your eyes and showing me poetic love. Appreciateya......
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20th Nov 2015 7:02pm
first off, that's one of my fave pics of you, looking all hawt and dominant ;) yes, ma'am indeed
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you are, without a doubt, in a class of your own lady rain. as a friend, as a person, as a writer... undefinable, limitless & all around amazeballs
fine write about a darn fine woman
loved this, loves ya
xo
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you are, without a doubt, in a class of your own lady rain. as a friend, as a person, as a writer... undefinable, limitless & all around amazeballs
fine write about a darn fine woman
loved this, loves ya
xo
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20th Nov 2015 8:42pm
...dancedoll, you've got me smiling like a hyena.. :)
So humbled by your gorgeously motivating complimentary, and appreciative of the poetic support over the years. Everything you said about me, can and should be said about....you! :)
You are one of the joys of DU! Thank you beautiful! Xo
So humbled by your gorgeously motivating complimentary, and appreciative of the poetic support over the years. Everything you said about me, can and should be said about....you! :)
You are one of the joys of DU! Thank you beautiful! Xo