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- - - THE STRUCTURE OF COLLAPSE - -
Am I truly self-destructive
In this sickening spiral?
There is nothing left to do
But await the coming doom
It is inevitable
And quite pitiful
That it has come to this
It is inevitable
And quite beautiful
The structure of my collapse
I am truly self-destructive
And burning from deep within
The only thing left to do
Is to make you despise me
It is inevitable
And quite pitiful
That you ever loved me
It is inevitable
And quite miserable
The structure of your collapse
Maybe once, a long time ago
I held a semblance of hope
That festered like a cancer
And excepted the fact that
I will take the world with me
On my day
The powerful will fall
From decadent nests
On my day
The beautiful bare scars
Drawn from their own hands
On my day
The winter chill approaches
And the warm blood will spill
On my day
When I consume societies
The world will finally burn
On my day
Wrath endures
(c) 2015 Frank Green
Published 15th Nov 2015
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Anonymous
15th Nov 2015 8:45pm
'I am truly self-destructive
And burning from deep within
The only thing left to do
Is to make you despise me'
. . .fan~tastic. . .my King. . .in all it's death & glory. . .yours, Devil~lin.
15th Nov 2015 10:08pm
Darkest Lord Hades a powerful write..
I bow to you..
the whole poem blows me away but the ending hit like a bomb went off..
"On my day
The powerful will fall
From decadent nests
On my day
The beautiful bare scars
Drawn from their own hands
On my day
The winter chill approaches
And the warm blood will spill
On my day
When I consume societies
The world will finally burn
On my day
Wrath endures"
with love and respect Crimsin
I bow to you..
the whole poem blows me away but the ending hit like a bomb went off..
"On my day
The powerful will fall
From decadent nests
On my day
The beautiful bare scars
Drawn from their own hands
On my day
The winter chill approaches
And the warm blood will spill
On my day
When I consume societies
The world will finally burn
On my day
Wrath endures"
with love and respect Crimsin
Anonymous
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16th Nov 2015 2:38am
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16th Nov 2015 3:10am
My unholy trinity, thank you. I'm sure that everyone feels as if they hit the pit of despair at times in their lives. This is what I believe would happen when someone with means is pushed beyond and decides to push back.
Anonymous
16th Nov 2015 9:45pm
. . .And let's just hope they fight with words and not weapons, as you've done so cleverly here. . .I believe the world would be a much better place but for now, in the Kingdom of Hades, this is all what truly matters. . .Yes. . .*ego stroke*. . .
16th Nov 2015 7:58pm
The reckoning is powerful here, SirHades!
..as we all fall down, we must make a jaded splash ;)..
"It is inevitable
And quite beautiful
The structure of my collapse"
~fav spot & yes it is.. great thought-path from pain btw..
the best Wicked gets even..;) loves your pen sweet sir!
shine & curtsies,
~d
..as we all fall down, we must make a jaded splash ;)..
"It is inevitable
And quite beautiful
The structure of my collapse"
~fav spot & yes it is.. great thought-path from pain btw..
the best Wicked gets even..;) loves your pen sweet sir!
shine & curtsies,
~d
16th Nov 2015 10:43pm
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