Can You See ME?

beautiful Rain I see you lovely lady your soul is poured out for us and you shine brilliantly!!!

love your scribing as well :)

love Crim

Thank you lovely Crim,
It's the heartbeat within my ink that I want readers to feel, and really see me.
Ink love~

"Read from the alpha to the omega of me
and soak up every nuance in-between."  ... It's a pleasure to breathe in your lines, and imagery! Intellectual sass painting a classy tempo. Love the flowing cadence. It's to savor more than once. Energetic ink, and image, complimenting each other perfectly! -  blue angel

I too love breathing in your fragrant lines, blue angel! Your lovely critique has got' me feelin' kinda' sassy! :)
Thank you for the ink love... Xo

Rain i recognise these thoughts. Brilliant..gorgeous write.  
You really have one of the most elegantly expressed tongues on this site...
Passionate and your beauty expressed most definitely not leaving your mind or human behind.  

Love
Jennifer

....your words are too kind Jen! My poetry is just a lyrical extension of me, so I can only hope folks can see the real me. A beautiful, yet humbling comment! Thanks suga!

First of all, the picturebox is beautiful you are gorgeous looking woman girlie, Second this poem speaks volumes about your creativity..
And lastly you're rhyming, Which we both know you don't prefer to do...  
This poem is perfect in every way, it tells a story, makes you think and feel, and, you rhyming is on point too!
Brava Sis in the list!
Zazzles xoxoxoxoxoxox

Girl, I'm so stoked by your words. You truly know me Jackie! I'm one of those poets who hate to rhyme because.....well hell, I'm not very good at it. lol. This was more of a spoken word piece. It seem to flow better verbally. I wanted to record it but can't find my mic. Such lovely compliments you've left me, thanks doll...appreciate the poetic love. Thanks for the listing too! Xoxo

. . .Wow, Miss Rain. . .this is a treasure. . .

I cherish and respect your poetic mind Lyn. :) Thank you sexy lady for the pen support and listing... :)

Loved to get a glimpse of you, Rain, of the beauty of your soul which reflects your write. Deep and beautiful. xoxo

...and I hope the glimpse was worth it. :) Thank you Chiyo! Always a pleasure when you come a-knockin'.
Ink hug~

Gabeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! :) I've done something grand whenever I see you in my area code. Thanks hun!

love what you do to words and may you always have a use for them.........curtsy bow DEEPLY:)

aww... I love that you love what I do to words. :) Thank you my gentle friend! Appreciate ya!

#curtsyBow

You are your poetry, beautiful and hypnotic in every word and syllable. Your ink is the blood that flows through your veins and onto the page. The life-force you spill on the canvas is inseparable from your soul. Seeing your ink is a viewing of all of you, sometimes inch by wondrous inch, other times the full essence of your magnificence... your poetry is Heaven and I would live in your words if I could transform into just one line of your verse...
JJ

JJ, your comment has given me a tiny poetic-charge that I don't want to come
down from. You always manage to get under my skin with your replies, in the most amazing and exhilarating way. You do know how to make this girl blush. :) Thanks sweety and appreciate the listing! Xo

Now there's a site I would love to see...

….and each time I read commentary from you, I’m always brought into the experience of feeling sheer appreciation and positive encouragement. :)
Thank you for being you! Pen hug lady T~

I see beautiful pictures above. A woman with a huge heart and deep feelings. An artist who can touch, help, heal, rejoice, and empower a soul with the stroke of a pen ; )

Beautiful

....aww,.... thankya my beautiful friend! Its poets like you and your ink support, that always bring me great energy. :) I’m constantly trying to critique my craft.
Hoping you are doing fine!  Have a great work week Lena! Xo

Oh I saw you!! Most def. Saw you n saw nothing short of pure beauty...
Yes, I love this spill from your creative heart n soul sweet one :)

Poe, I’m pleased to know that when you read me, you actually SEE me! :)
Thank you darlin’! Appreciate ya!

Curtains drawn
Stitched in writing
Baring all
Convealing nothing

Unique write, I am complexed by this. This is an inward question to me. We learn so much about ourselves in our own writings, discover hidden desires, feelings and talents. This is also hightened reading others. Always a degree of connection to the writer however more so to what ticks beneath. You are genuinely a gifted writer that inspires and awaken life withen many.

I won’t repeat my PM comment G, but you know this is a thumbs up reply. I feel like our poetry is public ‘confessions’ in every sense of the word. Truth, secrets, sin, organic validation, repentance, desires, demons, the good and the bad, everything that’s in our minds, hearts and spirits, comes out in poetry…. or at least it should.  Thanks suga’! Love when you pass through….

So beautiful Rain … you flow through your pen so smoothly, so elegantly, eloquently … if no one can see you, they must be blind. added to my list dear lady … ox

And this is such a beautiful, smooth and elegant response you’ve left me je. Thanks lovely one! It’s always a pleasure to have you soaking in my words. Thanks for the listing….

everytime i come sniffing around here, i'm never disappointed by your musings...
... some can't see beneath the surface of a word, they don't deserve to discover your depths
loved this, rainy lady
xoxox

.....“some can't see beneath the surface of a word, they don't deserve to discover your depths”<--I absolutely love this and it’s authentic truth.
#I just luvmesum-u dancedoll. Thanks sexy!

"leaving me wondering
if you truly saw me
or did you just see….
ink. ...

yes..some may become enamored
with your style but did they soak up
the substance...

guess that's the double edged sword
of being so poetically gifted
the depth of you crying out
through a beautiful array of words..

Naajir, man you need to stop molesting my ego,........... oh who am I kiddin’, please continue…. Lol  
I can only hope readers are able to peel away my literature-clothing, and see my smooth, yet bruised skin…  
Thankya fella!

No one could possibly read your work and just see ink Rain your character shines through every  word you write and especially with this wonderful, creative piece. A lot of soul displayed here..
Thanks for sharing.

"No one could possibly read your work and just see ink Rain your character shines through every  word you write” <-- and no one could possibly adore you as much as I do, poetically. :) Thank you my funnyman….

this is simply breath-taking...gorgeous imagery, your pen always spill ink drops
of such poetic beauty...that awakens the senses, 'tis truly inspiring!
thank you for sharing -- _xx_ - barrie

barrie, when you come around, you do bring a basket full of goodies, don't you?! :)
Your comments are so lovely and positive. Loving the ink-connection. Thank you and thanks for the listing....

excellent! it is a question i pose to myself time to time, "did you yield to actually breathe in the substances, / and get lit off the read?" why yes i did, lol, always A-1, i SEE you doing yo thang, poetic swag on a hundred thousand...

lol...... love when you soak me up, Dean! Gonna' tried to continue to do my poetic thang', :)
Thanks hun, appreciate ya....

The analogies with point-in-fact certainly leaves the reader begging for more of the no nonsense approach.  
Lady R, so glad to see your honest and true ink, people try to write like this but fail and yet you do it so naturally, truly gifted writer and i'm learning so much from you every day.

Rina, your comment is so gratifying to me. I respect you as a woman and poet greatly, so your positive support makes me feel good! Thank you lovely lady! Appreciate Ya....

That's a really valid question in the title.  You pour your heart and soul into your work and hope for the best, that someone will take the time to understand you.  It's a consolation if they at least try to see, making some attempt to justify your own.  You're always worth the effort, Rain.  Fine work!

"You pour your heart and soul into your work and hope for the best, that someone will take the time to understand you."<--- that's pretty much the hope of all poets, crowfly! Your comment made me smile!
Thank you for the poetic respect! :)

I wish to see you with a hundred eyes

^^^^ your comment put a big wide grin on my face.... Thank you so much LongW! :)
Will be sure to crash your poetic party soon....

Wow! What a way of describing the craft. I especially love this part...
"Read from the alpha to the omega of me
and soak up every nuance in-between."

Thank you JT! :) Appreciate the poetic support. Looking forward to our new ink-connect.

Beautiful.  I started writing to help ME see me. Now I'm tentatively sharing in hopes that others will see me too. To "scribe from my core with my metaphoric seeds" is a vulnerable place to be.  Hoping to learn from lovelies like you while I'm here!

....just pour your emotions on the page, and people will 'see' you! :) Thank you for the kind reply brokentitanium. I do appreciate you visiting my neck of the woods. Thank you for adding my ink to your cyber bookshelf and for the subscription. I'll be knocking at your front door soon.... Xo