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Ambrosia
His straps being of mild tension
She retains her circulation
Perfectly content to play the part
A brief show of resistance
Gradual then complete surrender
She accepts this with her lips and tongue
The measure of slow sliding
His ambrosia a just dessert
The flavor of her favorite god.
She retains her circulation
Perfectly content to play the part
A brief show of resistance
Gradual then complete surrender
She accepts this with her lips and tongue
The measure of slow sliding
His ambrosia a just dessert
The flavor of her favorite god.
Published 25th Oct 2015
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25th Oct 2015 7:11pm
26th Oct 2015 9:01pm
25th Oct 2015 7:17pm
26th Oct 2015 9:02pm
The word "slowgasm" comes to mind. Can't remember where I heard that. Thanks DPW!
25th Oct 2015 7:21pm
26th Oct 2015 9:03pm
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26th Oct 2015 9:06pm
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26th Oct 2015 9:10pm
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26th Oct 2015 2:43am
Suddenly I'm hungry for desert!. . .Excellent, Sir Fly, and bad Crow for stirring up my taste buds;). . .xo, Devlin.
26th Oct 2015 9:13pm
Taste buds on the alert and mouth watering. This is just an appetizer, Dev. Stick around for the main course. Thank you!
26th Oct 2015 2:44am
I adore this delightfully sexy piece Crow.
His ambrosia a just dessert
The flavor of her favorite god. <--Love those lines
His ambrosia a just dessert
The flavor of her favorite god. <--Love those lines
26th Oct 2015 9:15pm
Even gods come in many flavors. Chocolate and vanilla are only the beginning. Thanks Rain!
26th Oct 2015 8:46am
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26th Oct 2015 5:51pm
"The flavor of her favorite god." A great line indeed. Wonderful piece, Crow. Bravo!
26th Oct 2015 9:19pm
26th Oct 2015 7:03pm
Dynamite comes in small packages, dear Crow just as this little poem was. <3
26th Oct 2015 9:20pm
2nd Nov 2015 5:10pm
Of slow-sliding and immortally sips.. hot and sensual w/soft control, submit and gifting..
Man should always be homaged just so.. love the attention to detail building this one up..
Now you've got me wondering-- bout those naughty Greek doves-- I think they were mistaken & mayhap
it was a Crow dropping such nectars on the Mount O! ..[yes-no-maybe..?] lmsao*
"His ambrosia a just dessert
The flavor of her favorite god."
~the end starting the beginning of the After... is a tingle to the tastebuds with perfect word use!
'dessert' leaves all sorts of mindspace to picture the goings on.. [oh my mind too!] eg.. ;)
nectar captured in sweetest inks methinks.. missin your pages T2!!
loves n awes
~T
Man should always be homaged just so.. love the attention to detail building this one up..
Now you've got me wondering-- bout those naughty Greek doves-- I think they were mistaken & mayhap
it was a Crow dropping such nectars on the Mount O! ..[yes-no-maybe..?] lmsao*
"His ambrosia a just dessert
The flavor of her favorite god."
~the end starting the beginning of the After... is a tingle to the tastebuds with perfect word use!
'dessert' leaves all sorts of mindspace to picture the goings on.. [oh my mind too!] eg.. ;)
nectar captured in sweetest inks methinks.. missin your pages T2!!
loves n awes
~T
3rd Nov 2015 4:23am
