Goodbye

That's a sad goodbye, beautiful Crim, free from bitterness and blame.  

"though I've found my way to shore
saying goodbye
to someone I care for hurts"

I think that pain will fade, with time.  You may have set yourself free as well.  Love this one Crim, as always.
 

thank you Sir Crow for words of wisdom :)

love Crim

I love the poem it is a brilliant write. The emotions are raw and feel like they are still sting you at your core. I'm not the best at consoling words all I can say is I know how it feels. Hope you find someone that will love u better.  Great poem  

Thanks for sharing

thank you DP though our parting was on me I went away and he moved on..

love Crim

pretty deep pretty lady, this hits the heart chakra like a hammer... Bren de la Bren...

thank you for feeling me Dean..

love Brenda

Brenda, this a very powerful write.. filled with raw emotion.. the way you shed the toxins, that way heavy on your heart is masterfully precise.. into my list it goes... with love..




Dave

thank you Dave you always brighten my day :)

love Brenda

Miss Crim, Miss Crim. . .you are (if this is even about you) not alone. . .I'm here:). . .xo, Devlin.



and Damn!. . .It is poem~ments like these when I fucking hate poetry!. . .:(

thank you Devlin for being there I appreciate you.. yes it's about me..

love Crim

The most painful goodbyes are the ones that are never said and never explained. Crim, your goodbye was beautiful!
 Your realization of letting go is the golden nugget. I wish you a sway in your hips while walking in your stilettos during your journey to healing.  

.....time is the only elixir that can heal a broken heart, but a broken spirit takes great effort to mend. #Love&Light


"you are the depths I got lost in"<--- that line! Wowzer.... Xo

thank you beautiful Rain for such a loving comment :)

with love Crim

Not sure what to say to this

it's ok Kavik thank you for just being you :)

love Brenda

tiny gods, brenda, i feel like castrating the bastard for you tbh...
... this is a heartbreakingly beautiful goodbye from a beautiful heart
xoxox

thank you for the fierce love beautiful Katja though I was at fault for just going away no notice..

love Brenda

Beautiful Crim, sorry you're feeling sadness, and yeah, saying goodbye in any way is painful...
Great expression lovely one!
(((((((((((((((((((Brenda)))))))))))))))))
Love
Zazzles xoxoxoxoxo

thank you lovely Jackie for the love :)

love you..

xoxoxo Brenda

But better to say goodbye than stay in a bad place.  Very melancholy piece, Crim.

goodbyes are never easy thank you lovely lady :)

love Crim

Sad to see you hurt, but glad to see you accepting life on life's terms and surrendering. Heal soon. <3

thank you beautiful lady for the love :)

love Crim

Baby girl, wants to call you that here. I understand so well that kind of replace ment. The picture with this added a sigh..
Im sure both of you will be well.

Love
Jennifer

thank you beautiful Jennifer for you love and understanding :)

love Brenda

Well put. It is a common thread among poets that we feel deeply and in a perverse way this sets us up to sound out of our depth as we try to interpret and express our feelings. I have great love for you Crim, you have alot to give.

Duncan x

thank you Duncan for showing me love :)

love Crim

I like this kind of ink from your pen

Honest,  open, vulnerable

Like

thank you Poet this is the hard kind of inking the tough side of me comes easy..

love Brenda

beautiful one I owe you so much you had just come to really know me when you decided to commit to a friendship with me and have pulled me through my addiction with your patient heart I love you :)

xoxoxo Brenda

Saying so long was never my favorite thing to do however sometimes its totally necessary, maybe even imperative for survival. Loved. <3

thank you lovely lady not my favorite thing to do either but I realized I had to think about more than myself..

love Crim

No such thing as a good bye 😓 Hearts heal but stay scarred or bruised or something like that. Good luck with moving on though 😀

thank you DC knowing they are well is all I needed my heart will heal knowing that..

love Crim

Genius. These are the inks you are meant to pen. The raw emotion...vunerability and strength are amazingly conveyed.

                     Deepest regards
                       
                                           Fifty

thank you Fifty for such a fantastic comment though these kind of writes hurt too much..

love Crim

You are so open and honest with your feelings Brenda and you show strength in the trials you face.
Warm wishes and much love to you. Sincerest hopes for healing of your heart. My heart aches for you.

Keith

thank you Keith for showing me and this write love...

love Brenda

A farewell to a friend? Hum, I always enjoy the depth of your inked emotions. Sadness is felt. - blue angel

thank you beautiful Angel showing this write love..

love Crim

Those damn rebound addictions are made beautiful in your baring release here..
all goodbye's hurt in some harsh fashion and my hand gives gentle squeezes, darlin Brenda!

"you are the depths I got lost in"
~sweet, understanding of worship..

deeply touching scars & perfect poetry, my lady of divine pen..
loves & misses to you
~d  

lovely d~ thank you for your love and understanding :)

love Brenda

Melancholia strikes. Using a poet in place of one's addiction...one wonders if the poet was even truly seen as a person, instead just an substitute addiction. Again humans torturing themselves needlessly but always makes for good poetry.   *Shauna

this person was my friend years before my addiction.. then when I became addicted I deactivated my account and disappeared.. then upon getting clean I felt an intense need for this person after awhile I realized I was trying to fill my  void with him.. though now better I realize he's moved on and I need to let go.. though he will always be a friend and important person to me.. thank you Shauna for leaving your thoughts on this sensitive write..

love Brenda

Always hard to let go Crim and maybe writing down a goodbye helps with that transition. Keep moving lovely lady, make wise choices.  There is strength and acceptance in this touching piece.  Well done.  :) x

thank you lovely Magdalena for showing me understanding I will try to make better choices..

love Crim

a real sad write I really feel for you - can't think of anything else to say so I am sending you a hug :-)

thank you for the hug David hugs you back :)

love Crim

Damn, i love it, i love it..Relates to me in the situation  I'm in, with  a girl of different emotional  interests

thank you kindly Jake for relating..

love Crim

Goodbyes are never easy and the hardest words to say, but the only to feel a little relief is to them. I love it.

thank you graciously Forsaken for your thoughtful comment..

love Crim

I felt this one, when it is someone that you once held in high regards and loved deeply, it hits different when you have to let them go...