Longing

"though you're not for me  
I am beer on the weekend  
you are bourbon on the rocks  
Bukowski after dark"  
(Wow, simple statement, yet...packed with [struggle for appropriate word] awesomeness)  
 
I relate to this sentiment, though I feel it when I read the works of some of the great poets here. Like my words are chintzy dime store toys masquerading as something more in Santa's workshop. [see struggle above]  
 
Beautiful!

thank you graciously Harlie for relating and such a beautiful comment :)

with love Crim

You've got genuine class, Crim, and a taste for the finer things in life.

"you are bourbon on the rocks
Bukowski after dark"

Sounds good but I'd be more than satisfied with beer on the weekend.  "Longing" goes down like champagne...  

thank you Sir Crow for such a fantastic comment I am humbled :)

love Crim

Sweet mercy. "I would bring down heaven to taste your hell" really captured the longing. And a great visual to boot!

thank you DPW for a great comment putting a smile on my face :)

with love Crim

Lovely verse

Bukowski honor Like

thank you Poet I cherish your thoughts and visits :)

love Brenda

"you are bourbon on the rocks  
Bukowski after dark" ... maybe a little pink bubbly to boot. Wonderfully artistic, Dear Crim. Your ink is gracious and ambiguous within. Savoring a brilliant mind, blue angel

thank you lovely Angel for gracing my pages with your thoughts..

love Crim

thank you beautiful one you always touch my heart and make me smile with you thoughts and visits :)

I love you..

xoxoxo Brenda

Absolutely amazing

thank you most kindly Kavik :)

love Brenda

I LOVE the softer side of this place...and the softer side of you sweet lady. <3

thank you graciously lovely lady :)

with love Crim

Brenda, you're on a roll.. i'm a huge fan.. loving all this.. brilliant writing.. into the list it goes.. with love..




Dave

thank you kindly Dave making me smile wide :)

love Brenda

the ladies know the sexiness in those rough hands, Crim,
& Bukowski goes down smooth w/beer...

thank you John I always love your comments they are poetic all by themselves :)

love Crim

AggRee most certainly with T Crowfly,,,,you my dear one are a vintage a discerning pallette instantly recognizes as rare one of a kind and to be appreciated,,, suck in and taste layers of flavour...breathe in through the sip and find aromatic bouquet of cherry rose and something undefined and pure surprise!!
But hell!! A nice cold beer with perfect head....well that's a treat any man or WOman savours!
Brenda, you are that unique blend of both...
Not many can make that claim.  

This is a great piece.  

Love  
Jennifer

thank you most graciously beautiful Jennifer for such a loving comment I am humbled :)

love Brenda

This is good. I like it

thank you most kindly :)

with love Crim

A very imaginative love poem that is a pleasure to read ( turning out light as I depart) the last stanza is my favorite.

Thanks for sharing

thank you DP I love your thoughts and visits :)

with love Crim

Something about how you've structured your pieces lately
make them seem like, like... Like
Oh everything you spill...OUT-FUCKING-STANDING!!! yea, like U
They stand out! :)

aw Poe you're making me blush thank you graciously dear friend :)

love Crim

beautiful brenda, you're breaking my little black heart with this tender longing...
"you are bourbon on the rocks
Bukowski after dark"
^^^^^
... so brilliant i could quite happily lick your mind for inspiration
xoxox

beautiful Katja thank you for putting a big smile on my face though it is I that would love to taste your mind if it would make me write as stunningly beautifully as you :)

love Brenda

Everything you write about is always so deep Crim, absolutely gorjus sis!
Keep em coming !
Loves you
Jackie xoxoxoxoox

thank you lovely Jackie for making me smile wide with your comment :)

love you lady..

xoxoxo Brenda

"arsenic kisses on bruised lips" lights the wick, powerful contrasts, your pen has 360 degrees, nice Crim (well this prob more Brenda)... love your scrolls...

thank you graciously Dean you have a keen eye yes this is my softer side.. thank you for showing me love on my ink :)

love Brenda

For Fuck Sake
Crim

You left me speechless

And

In Lust

;)
Love@YOU

aw Al how you've made me smile touching my heart so with your comment thank you :)

with love Crim

A masterfully written piece Crim...open and tenderly raw

"I tread your depths with deftness    
so as not to disturb you  
   
turning out the light as I depart"

An absolutely lovely piece of ink dear.

thank you most graciously Sir with love Crim..

'you are bourbon on the rocks  
Bukowski after dark'  - now that's what I call a compliment :-)

excellent write with a different style, fascinating stuff :-)

thank you David for a great comment yes I try different styles :)

love Crim

Outstanding read. I really enjoyed this.

thank you most graciously Gregory..

with respect Crimsin