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Lethal Effects
Counted among the walking dead
But it's more of a shamble these days
Post-apocalyptic hues of reds and blues
And appendages dropping in the dust
"Looks like you've seen better days,"
The assistant director smirks
"But maybe it's your diet, my late friend"
Vocal chords have atrophied and tongue withered
So no reply forthcoming anytime soon
But duty calls
"Night of", "Dawn of", "Day of" and all the rest
Then a hit TV show, highest ratings
Praise for "state-of-the-art effects"
But the flesh is weak
Left in the wake of a crumbling star.
But it's more of a shamble these days
Post-apocalyptic hues of reds and blues
And appendages dropping in the dust
"Looks like you've seen better days,"
The assistant director smirks
"But maybe it's your diet, my late friend"
Vocal chords have atrophied and tongue withered
So no reply forthcoming anytime soon
But duty calls
"Night of", "Dawn of", "Day of" and all the rest
Then a hit TV show, highest ratings
Praise for "state-of-the-art effects"
But the flesh is weak
Left in the wake of a crumbling star.
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Re. Lethal Effects
28th Sep 2015 6:17pm
Sir Crow I feel your pain in this write so masterfully scribed..
hugs and love Crim
hugs and love Crim
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Re: Re. Lethal Effects
28th Sep 2015 6:24pm
Thanks Crim! I could use a higher budget and some computer graphic imaging to make it through the day.
Re. Lethal Effects
28th Sep 2015 6:32pm
What a great little piece Crow. Love the campy old Zombie films, hate the new. They made the first of the old on something around 100, thou, probobly spend that on one actor now.
Casting a black man back then was v controversial.
Great stuff Crow. Love your work, adore you muuaagh💋
💋Jennifer
Casting a black man back then was v controversial.
Great stuff Crow. Love your work, adore you muuaagh💋
💋Jennifer
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Re: Re. Lethal Effects
28th Sep 2015 6:42pm
It's also interesting that "Night of the Living Dead" was considered garbage by most "reputable" film critics when it was first released back in '68. They obviously changed their tune over the years. "The Walking Dead" is a great show, but I also prefer the older, lower-tech zombie films, particularly Romero's. Horror films in general play far too much with gore and make up effects to the detriment of solid writing and character development. The psychological aspect, how the characters cope, is a hell of a lot more interesting than corpses munching entrails.
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Yeah, i agree. I dig the old slasher films, zombie movies, humour to it, and a quality thats just not in the scary stuff now. If it were more about the psych effects, i would be down. Just get tired of the shoot em cut em decapitate em and still taking themselves so seriously.
Ive enjoyed bits of Walking Dead, as a whole the noise and violence wears mih nerves. Romeros friends and fam would play extras to cut budget, there is a great documentary on him on netflix T, you should watch. Gettin old Crow lol
Ive enjoyed bits of Walking Dead, as a whole the noise and violence wears mih nerves. Romeros friends and fam would play extras to cut budget, there is a great documentary on him on netflix T, you should watch. Gettin old Crow lol
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Re. Lethal Effects
28th Sep 2015 7:52pm
Remarkable. Loved it. I smiled and shook my head several times. Definitely a good read.
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Re: Re. Lethal Effects
28th Sep 2015 9:22pm
Re. Lethal Effects
28th Sep 2015 8:06pm
Excellent scribe Crow...
loves you doll!!!
(((((((((((((Crow)))))))))))))))
Jackie xoxoxxo
loves you doll!!!
(((((((((((((Crow)))))))))))))))
Jackie xoxoxxo
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Re: Re. Lethal Effects
28th Sep 2015 9:23pm
Re. Lethal Effects
Anonymous
28th Sep 2015 8:55pm
I guess after playing a Zombie for so long, it actually starts to rub off on you (well, that's my opinion, anyways). . .I guess it's that time of year again for everything that is a walking dead. . .Impressive ink, Mr. Fly. . .xo, Devlin;)
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Re: Re. Lethal Effects
28th Sep 2015 9:25pm
Yes, it seems like Halloween's just around the corner again. Time fries! Thanks Devlin.
Re. Lethal Effects
28th Sep 2015 11:12pm
Re: Re. Lethal Effects
28th Sep 2015 11:54pm
Thanks Lady! Sometimes the special effects are shaky at best. The reality's often a lot scarier anyway.
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29th Sep 2015 2:34am
Re. Lethal Effects
29th Sep 2015 00:46am
Sad....the rise...and fall of the (original) zombie genre.......
Unfortunate, how all those "B" grade, black-and-whites, that permitted the audience to exercise at least a bit of their imagination, lost out to all the graphic gore of those hightech pics!
Crowfly, my friend, this piece provides the readers/fans nostalgic sympathy for the fallen star of those early days....and a longing for those original films!
here's to white grease paint.....charcoal....and the Zombie Shuffle......and to you as well!!
SL`AINTE!!
Creatively Crafted!
Unfortunate, how all those "B" grade, black-and-whites, that permitted the audience to exercise at least a bit of their imagination, lost out to all the graphic gore of those hightech pics!
Crowfly, my friend, this piece provides the readers/fans nostalgic sympathy for the fallen star of those early days....and a longing for those original films!
here's to white grease paint.....charcoal....and the Zombie Shuffle......and to you as well!!
SL`AINTE!!
Creatively Crafted!
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Re: Re. Lethal Effects
29th Sep 2015 5:01pm
Thanks Enchantress! I love the films of Val Lewton (the original "Cat People"), "The Innocents" and the original version of "The Haunting." Those were beautifully crafted and really did allow the audience to use their imaginations. What's implied is much more frightening than special effects and clichés.
Re. Lethal Effects
29th Sep 2015 2:20am
Used to love Christopher Lee but its a tired old line now...just pretty faces. Like Pattinson.:) Crowfly always love your write.
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Re: Re. Lethal Effects
29th Sep 2015 5:04pm
I was a big fan of the late Christopher Lee (the best Dracula, in my opinion) and Peter Cushing. The Hammer productions made the most of a modest budget. Thanks Grace!
Re. Lethal Effects
29th Sep 2015 2:38am
I'll skip the walking dead cult & get my fright from Dracula, Frankenstein's monster & Chaney as WolfMan, the true classics,,,
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Re: Re. Lethal Effects
29th Sep 2015 5:05pm
I agree. I can do without the blood, gore and excess. The older films had style and class. Thanks John!
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Re: Re. Lethal Effects
29th Sep 2015 5:08pm
Some of the new ones are quite good, largely because of solid writing. "Insidious", "Sinister" and "Cabin In the Woods" are three relatively recent ones that stand out. Thanks Taryn!
Re. Lethal Effects
30th Sep 2015 11:46am
Amazing title play here misters.. the depths of your gory 'brain[s]' ..know No bounds..;) grin*
"Post-apocalyptic hues of reds and blues
And appendages dropping in the dust"
~tried to stifle my smirk at thought of arms splatting in wet thud.. but you lol'ed me..ty..
"But the flesh is weak
Left in the wake of a crumbling star."
~even taken from the context here.. this last set is a wrenching somber verse & makes a solid ending!
Cannot help but put a lil squeaked vote in fer "The Birds"..soo funny while creeping me out. plus we may
needs tussle fer Bela Lugosi as 'Count Dracula' [1927]..- classic- 'no jump-scare' in b&w..I can safely luvitt ;)
enjoyed greatly dear Crow.. you are in your poetic element here!
~d
"Post-apocalyptic hues of reds and blues
And appendages dropping in the dust"
~tried to stifle my smirk at thought of arms splatting in wet thud.. but you lol'ed me..ty..
"But the flesh is weak
Left in the wake of a crumbling star."
~even taken from the context here.. this last set is a wrenching somber verse & makes a solid ending!
Cannot help but put a lil squeaked vote in fer "The Birds"..soo funny while creeping me out. plus we may
needs tussle fer Bela Lugosi as 'Count Dracula' [1927]..- classic- 'no jump-scare' in b&w..I can safely luvitt ;)
enjoyed greatly dear Crow.. you are in your poetic element here!
~d
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Re. Lethal Effects
1st Oct 2015 5:29pm
Better than any film review. Stars in these kinds of films are meant to die. Enjoyed this one Crow.
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