Misguided Urges

beautiful one how you light up my day with the love you show me and my ink..

thank you and I love you..

hugs and kisses Brenda

Ms Brenda, truly heartbreaking
honest write. Courageous to
bare one heart and soul.  You are
so wonderful at conveying emotion
with such vivid imagery. Take care, love.


Keith

thank you most kindly Keith :)

with love Brenda

I love the emotions you put into this poem I can feel them great job on this

thank you graciously Kavik you made me smile :)

love Brenda

Pain and sadness are strong tools when writing poetry and, you Lady Crim, wear like a shroud when inking poetry like this.

you're right Lord Hades apologies for the heavy shroud..

thank you for brightening my page with your visit..

with love Crimsin

the pull of unsatisfied lust, Crim, drives us crazy, so we release it by making poems. & in other ways...

thank you John for understanding poetry helps..

with love Crim

I don't know Brenda, sometimes i think the unworthy ones get the most love but they're too daft to appreciate a precious gift.
You can't help but be a giver, you're born for it..just as some are born to be takers.
but we love you for who you are, keep on penning my beautiful friend.

thank you Rina for such a kind a comment though I'm afraid I'm the taker in this instance..

love Brenda

some men are professional victims; spineless, ball-less... so wrapped up in the pitiful mediocrity they've created for themselves that i doubt they're able to leave it for damn near anything. architects of their own circumstance & somehow still try cement us to the cheap facade
[does that sound bitter? ltm]
exceptional ink, beautiful one
xoxox

thank you beautiful Katja though I'm afraid I be the weak one in this case..

love you lady..

xoxoxo Brenda

Brenda, this is a very gripping ink.. full of venom, and passion.. your words bleed the truth.. and drive home reality, as only you can.. brilliant write.. into the list it goes... with love...



Dave

thank you Dave for brightening my day :)

with love Brenda

gritty and raw write, really slapped my mind back into active thought - I just so love 'paper machete hearts'

such a great write :-)

thank you graciously David :)

with love Crim

paper machete heart
made from scraps
of yesterday's news

I love this. It says so much about how you are feeling. Excellent!

thank you graciously Sir :)

with love Crimsin

So in love with this part..
"bruised lips from biting them in regret  
for the careless thoughts spilt from trembling lips  
whispered in your ear "

This is really an exraordinary piece Brenda...
Paper Machete...love the play on words paper mache
RL fasho!
💋Jennifer

thank you beautiful Jennifer made me smile wide this morning :)

love Brenda

i dislike the struggle you endure... but love the way your art confronts these struggles naked... you got this girl

thank you Dean it's sometimes just therapy for me..

with love Crimsin

"bruised lips from biting them in regret    
for the careless thoughts spilt from trembling lips" ... the secret of seduction is whispered through trembling lips. Your ink always tempts me. love it.. - blue angel

thank you beautiful Angel for such a lovely comment :)

with love Crim

Crim,

Perfect title. Favorite lines:
"i'll sweep my feelings    
under the carpet    
   
where they can't be seen    
not really a tidy ending    
though the best I can do"

tornado    

thank you Tornado for making me smile with your comment :)

with love Crim

"Paper machete heart."  Love that intro!

"you evade me not that I blame you    
can't be my fix or Mr. fix it    
i'll suppress my misguided urges"

I think you're too hard on yourself.  I he's being elusive it's his loss.  Your urges are sublime, particularly when the result is work like this.  Excellent!  

thank you Sir Crow for such an insightful comment :)

with love Crim

Love your spill Brenda.. the mind over matter you put into play
is nothin short of beauty!

"paper machete heart    
made from scraps    
of yesterday's news"
~my fav & a fragile mind pic that has me maulin u in huggins!  

"bruised lips from biting them in regret    
for the careless thoughts spilt from trembling lips    
whispered in your ear"
~soo guilty of this lipbiting stifle.. strength is urs darlin.. I see ur resolve
grow w/every pour..    

warding the misguided looks lovely from ur page..
much luvins
~d

thank you lovely d~ for such loving comments brightening my day with your heart :)

with love Brenda

SPECTACULAR  LIKE

thank you Poet you made me smile with your comment :)

love Brenda

Dear Brenda:  A brave poem.  Your honesty is your first companion and love and serves you very well. Verses 4 and 6  speak to me.

thank you graciously lovely Shauna for your kind thoughts on this write :)

love Brenda

The struggle is real, Crim. Hold on tight darlin....If I could hold on to you I wouldnt let you fall....

thank you dear lady for showing me and this write love :)

love Crim

Wish I could say I didn't know this feels, but sadly I know it all too well... Outstanding spill regardless though.

thank you Poe only sorry you can relate..

love Crim