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Animal on the Dance floor
Struts in tonights prey....
Ooooo laah weee!!
Ain" he Gods gift ..
'n allll jes for lil ol me.
I give him my "care less" stare..
A quick eyebrow arch up.
Shove up of my chin,
Split second grin.
My work done.
He will play it cool...
On the inside he's a mess.
'N as chill as i might act...
Between my legs already wet.
Out on the dance floor..
In my peripheral i see him a watchin
Me 'n my grrrls gettin down to the outrageous music.
Hips 'n tits shakin, our hands all over each other..
Caught up with our gyrations n the bass..
Hadn't noticed my tall 'n dark behind me..
He reached around and pulled my ass into him, then saw his hands on my pelvic bones..
And felt him huge and hard right close against me.
Leaned in to my ear said, don't turn round..
Oh lawd! I's tickled in my pink by this game.
Feelin the rhythm punk rock, blarin..
I arched and backed up on him.
His left arm tight round my waist, felt his right hand messin with sumthin 'ginst my behind n push my skirt up some.
My prey was gonna have me on the dance floor!!
I started to protest, his hand went round my mouth.
C'mon baby, take it, we gonna dance.
I bent way over, ready for entry, felt him slide into my ass!
I gasped loud!
Rose, arched my back as far as i could.....
But god damned if it didn't feel so goooood!!!
He pumped me to the beat of the music..
I don't think anyone noticed, n i didnt really care...
Hunched over me, says gonna cum now sugar..
One.
Two.
Three more and he was there!!
Felt his big cock throb in time sqirtin to the beat..
Song over, he kissed me hard as i adjusted my skirt.
He laughed, said baby that was amazin n i promise next time you squirt. Hard.
Watched him walk off, jizz runnin out my rear.
And you know what...i believed him.
Ooooo laah weee!!
Ain" he Gods gift ..
'n allll jes for lil ol me.
I give him my "care less" stare..
A quick eyebrow arch up.
Shove up of my chin,
Split second grin.
My work done.
He will play it cool...
On the inside he's a mess.
'N as chill as i might act...
Between my legs already wet.
Out on the dance floor..
In my peripheral i see him a watchin
Me 'n my grrrls gettin down to the outrageous music.
Hips 'n tits shakin, our hands all over each other..
Caught up with our gyrations n the bass..
Hadn't noticed my tall 'n dark behind me..
He reached around and pulled my ass into him, then saw his hands on my pelvic bones..
And felt him huge and hard right close against me.
Leaned in to my ear said, don't turn round..
Oh lawd! I's tickled in my pink by this game.
Feelin the rhythm punk rock, blarin..
I arched and backed up on him.
His left arm tight round my waist, felt his right hand messin with sumthin 'ginst my behind n push my skirt up some.
My prey was gonna have me on the dance floor!!
I started to protest, his hand went round my mouth.
C'mon baby, take it, we gonna dance.
I bent way over, ready for entry, felt him slide into my ass!
I gasped loud!
Rose, arched my back as far as i could.....
But god damned if it didn't feel so goooood!!!
He pumped me to the beat of the music..
I don't think anyone noticed, n i didnt really care...
Hunched over me, says gonna cum now sugar..
One.
Two.
Three more and he was there!!
Felt his big cock throb in time sqirtin to the beat..
Song over, he kissed me hard as i adjusted my skirt.
He laughed, said baby that was amazin n i promise next time you squirt. Hard.
Watched him walk off, jizz runnin out my rear.
And you know what...i believed him.
Written by
calamitygin
(Jennifer Michael McCurry)
Published 12th Sep 2015
| Edited 13th Sep 2015
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Re. Animal on the Dance floor
12th Sep 2015 1:45pm
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12th Sep 2015 1:49pm
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12th Sep 2015 1:52pm
Re. Animal on the Dance floor
Anonymous
12th Sep 2015 2:16pm
Hey! Have felt like fucking on the dance floor many times, instead settled for dry fucking all over the place until I could get her back to my pad. (pad?) Is that even used anymore. Don't think it is. Fuck it I'm a sixties/seventies guy.
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12th Sep 2015 3:27pm
I say pad, but i also say right on and dig it.....so. Lol happy you thought it was groovy man. ✌ peace
🍄🍄
Jennifer
🍄🍄
Jennifer
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Anonymous
12th Sep 2015 4:04pm
Yes, I did think it was groovy . . . Still do.
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Re. Animal on the Dance floor
12th Sep 2015 3:19pm
Yessssssssss! Your poem describes the perfect night of clubbing...hot music, friends and that well-built mysterious man. Dance on bae!
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12th Sep 2015 3:30pm
Re. Animal on the Dance floor
12th Sep 2015 3:22pm
lovely Jennifer hot, sexy erotic..
loved these lines..
"I give him my "care less" stare..
A quick eyebrow arch up.
Shove up of my chin,
Split second grin."
shows your seductive attitude :)
and this was so damn hot..
"I started to protest, his hand went round my mouth.
C'mon baby, take it, we gonna dance.
I bent way over, ready for entry, felt him slide into my ass!
I gasped loud!
Rose, arched my back as far as i could.....
But god damned if it didn't feel so goooood!!!
He pumped me to the beat of the music..
I don't think anyone noticed, n i didnt really care"
creamy erotic beautiful ;)
with love Brenda
loved these lines..
"I give him my "care less" stare..
A quick eyebrow arch up.
Shove up of my chin,
Split second grin."
shows your seductive attitude :)
and this was so damn hot..
"I started to protest, his hand went round my mouth.
C'mon baby, take it, we gonna dance.
I bent way over, ready for entry, felt him slide into my ass!
I gasped loud!
Rose, arched my back as far as i could.....
But god damned if it didn't feel so goooood!!!
He pumped me to the beat of the music..
I don't think anyone noticed, n i didnt really care"
creamy erotic beautiful ;)
with love Brenda
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13th Sep 2015 9:39am
Re. Animal on the Dance floor
12th Sep 2015 3:23pm
throw in a gas mask & too short tutu & i'm there ltm
lawds miss jen, this makes me wanna hit the town tonight, wonderfully vivid & descriptive
loveeeeeeed this ooohhwwweeee piece!
xoxoxo
lawds miss jen, this makes me wanna hit the town tonight, wonderfully vivid & descriptive
loveeeeeeed this ooohhwwweeee piece!
xoxoxo
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Re: Re. Animal on the Dance floor
13th Sep 2015 9:46am
Think inknow what id do with the tutu, but the gas mask......you got me thinkin...what to play with that!!
♨♨
Jennifer
♨♨
Jennifer
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12th Sep 2015 5:40pm
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13th Sep 2015 2:33pm
Re. Animal on the Dance floor
12th Sep 2015 7:33pm
I think this is a want for many people. I remember back in college there was one club that added extra bouncers on the weekends because the city council was getting complaints. At first I was trying to detect the rhyme scheme: then I gave up and just went with the poetic flow.
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13th Sep 2015 2:32pm
Sometimes ill throw a lil rhyme here a lil illiteration there and leave it inconsistent. Here, they"re listening tp punk, its loud, confusing , wanted the "scheme" to be the same. Happy you wete able to let go and just ride.
Thanks. JZM!
🎷🎧Jennifer
Thanks. JZM!
🎷🎧Jennifer
Re. Animal on the Dance floor
12th Sep 2015 8:53pm
I like your complete abandon, not caring about any spectators to your fun! This is a thrill to read. Your descriptions are raw, intense and erotic, but you have a great sense of humor. Really enjoyed this Jennifer!
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13th Sep 2015 7:00pm
Thank you Crow. The image came because i feel so free, in my own world on the dance floor. I love the feeling, sex, naked, alone. But in a crowd.
💫💫
Jennifer
💫💫
Jennifer
Re. Animal on the Dance floor
12th Sep 2015 9:16pm
Do I detect shades of Barbarella from the pic? This is more daring than Jane Fonda!
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13th Sep 2015 7:02pm
Re. Animal on the Dance floor
12th Sep 2015 9:31pm
When I could dance...I thought about this many times...felt like an animal...and I fucking loved it;)...great lil adventure Jen;)
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13th Sep 2015 6:58pm
Re. Animal on the Dance floor
12th Sep 2015 10:23pm
"I give him my "care less" stare.. / 'N as chill as i might act... /Between my legs already wet. "
These three lines build that perfect adrenaline rush when the flirty begins... purrz*
"Leaned in to my ear said, don't turn round..
Oh lawd! I's tickled in my pink by this game."
~ damn sexy thots of darkness & mystery man..
"C'mon baby, take it, we gonna dance. "
~sweet fucks creampuff!.. wetting commentary throughout..but this one? lickin as my fave!
I exit, an arching mess to your trickling "exit" here.. hot-hot!
wif endless luvins
~d
These three lines build that perfect adrenaline rush when the flirty begins... purrz*
"Leaned in to my ear said, don't turn round..
Oh lawd! I's tickled in my pink by this game."
~ damn sexy thots of darkness & mystery man..
"C'mon baby, take it, we gonna dance. "
~sweet fucks creampuff!.. wetting commentary throughout..but this one? lickin as my fave!
I exit, an arching mess to your trickling "exit" here.. hot-hot!
wif endless luvins
~d
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Luv u found it sexy goodness my dark kitten. Lick n lick till youve had your fill then puulllleeez cum back fur more!!
Sweet butterfly kisses leavin red marks allll ova!
💋💋💋
Ur Jennifer
Re. Animal on the Dance floor
13th Sep 2015 5:22pm
Sexy, sexy, sexy!! Burning hot imagery dancing 'round in my mind. That smile can melt the iciest of hearts, Gin. Lovely ink.. - blue angel
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13th Sep 2015 7:11pm
Thank you sweet n sexy remark, n holy! That pro pick, makes me wanna lay back n....think teehee!!
💙Jen
💙Jen
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13th Sep 2015 6:01pm
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13th Sep 2015 6:56pm
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