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My Naughty Doll
God girrrl! Aren't you just the vision of sin!
I go cherry read just thinkin bout the places your image takes my head.....
Your hawt body becums a fun adventureland thrillride....
Curves up then down and shwooosh! around, till the get off!
Yes please...and please do tease...
The entertainment's well worth any torment you can give.
I'd play every game, g' head..take me for all you can...
And have my yummy prize.. Something much more fun than a teddy bear for my naughty doll.
A night filled with wild amusements and rare treats..
Ice cream licks, tonguing till we've had both our fill..
Of sugar sweet pink like cotton candy..
Winding through that tunnell of love.....till cumming out the exit...what a ride!!
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8th Sep 2015 6:09am
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8th Sep 2015 6:12am
Re. My Naughty Doll
8th Sep 2015 7:10am
I'm always up for rollercoaster and sugared sweet pink cotton candy.I like the way it melt in your mouth. The sweeter the better so eat lot of pineapple. Lol
Enjoyed your poem Mc curry
Enjoyed your poem Mc curry
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Re: Re. My Naughty Doll
8th Sep 2015 7:22am
Lol pineapple whips? Whats funny doll is im eating a big bowl of pineapple sherbet (tastes just like the hula grrrl treat) n blueberries on top! You read minds DP, mind fucker.
Lol Tjanks
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J
Lol Tjanks
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J
Re. My Naughty Doll
8th Sep 2015 8:07am
Naughty doll provides copious amounts of sweetness
the addiction is powerful and real
oral stimulation always a given
so exciting when you can break that seal
the addiction is powerful and real
oral stimulation always a given
so exciting when you can break that seal
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I love naughty doll
To hundreds of degrees
But me thinks that seal did cum open
Round 1993
If wrong, and naughtys' hymen remains tight and in tact
Then sir. I dip.Take a bow from me
But i doubt i will have to bend
No way naughty kept that sweet cherry!
Lol thanks JM
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8th Sep 2015 12:00pm
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8th Sep 2015 12:08pm
Re. My Naughty Doll
8th Sep 2015 8:58am
Calamitygin, luv ~ :-*
This is such a delightful treat! You've excellently conveyed the sumptuousness of the pinup girl and juxtaposed this vixen expertly with all the treats to be had at Carnival. ;-*
I rather fancy this one, luv...
This is such a delightful treat! You've excellently conveyed the sumptuousness of the pinup girl and juxtaposed this vixen expertly with all the treats to be had at Carnival. ;-*
I rather fancy this one, luv...
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Thank you so Savaja! Honored by your keen insight, fine compliment, and to have read it at all!
I loved your entry in the SS comp. I expanded my comments, felt in a better state of head to make them than before and Derrick has put up his.
Luv💋
Jennifer
Re. My Naughty Doll
8th Sep 2015 10:51am
Aaawww now THAT was truly a naughty tease!!! Cotton candy!? Ur soooo wrong lol. Loved it though!
lol
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Anonymous
8th Sep 2015 1:46pm
Lustilickableicious.
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Re: Re. My Naughty Doll
8th Sep 2015 3:06pm
You should here me groove out that word in a hillbilly whine n moan.
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Jennifer
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Jennifer
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Anonymous
8th Sep 2015 2:46pm
Just the way I like my pinups, all sweaty and juicy inside, and ready to ride the man beast. Okay, so you didn't have her riding the man beast, but I damn well believe the sweet, naughty thing would eagerly straddle some lucky guy and give him the thrill of his life.
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8th Sep 2015 3:08pm
After a few goes with me and i care to move on! Lol kidding Jer, sure shed eat you for breakfast lunch and dinner!
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Jennifer
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Jennifer
Re. My Naughty Doll
8th Sep 2015 4:16pm
what a delicious, yummy treat she sounds like but then so are you beautiful ;)
sexy inking!!!
with love Brenda
sexy inking!!!
with love Brenda
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8th Sep 2015 4:32pm
Re. My Naughty Doll
8th Sep 2015 5:26pm
I've always loved carnivals with low tech thrill rides and tawdry booths. Winning a naughty doll would complete the dream. Really enjoyed this Jennifer!
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8th Sep 2015 8:44pm
I know. A bit of country trash nirvana!
And yep, been to a couple with naughty dolls in tow. Lol thanks Crow!
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Jen
And yep, been to a couple with naughty dolls in tow. Lol thanks Crow!
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Jen
Re. My Naughty Doll
8th Sep 2015 7:20pm
"Your hawt body becums a fun adventureland thrillride....
Curves up then down and shwooosh! around, till the get off!"
wow this ride is too hawt for Six Flags or Disney World... what a trip to paradise hehe :D
"A night filled with wild amusements and rare treats..
Ice cream licks, tonguing till we've had both our fill..
Of sugar sweet pink like cotton candy.."
makes me wanna have a sweet tooth for daysss *LOL*
"Winding through that tunnell of love.....till cumming out the exit...what a ride!!"
*whoooweee* pass me a cigarette... what a great journey there hehe
very sexyyy and creative ink Jenn... i enjoyed the trip :D
Curves up then down and shwooosh! around, till the get off!"
wow this ride is too hawt for Six Flags or Disney World... what a trip to paradise hehe :D
"A night filled with wild amusements and rare treats..
Ice cream licks, tonguing till we've had both our fill..
Of sugar sweet pink like cotton candy.."
makes me wanna have a sweet tooth for daysss *LOL*
"Winding through that tunnell of love.....till cumming out the exit...what a ride!!"
*whoooweee* pass me a cigarette... what a great journey there hehe
very sexyyy and creative ink Jenn... i enjoyed the trip :D
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8th Sep 2015 8:41pm
Lol thanks. Id had another ending, then Glen joked about tje tunnel of love in his comment. I litteraly smacked mihself on my forehead for not cummin up with that one. D'oh!! Lol
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Jennifer
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Jennifer
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8th Sep 2015 7:23pm
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Re. My Naughty Doll
8th Sep 2015 10:00pm
A sweet desert I can lick all day long without much for a pause. Candy and ice cream. Lovely write, Calamity.
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9th Sep 2015 2:09am
Right on DPW! Thank you for reading. So happy you enjoyed. Treats to u!
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J
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J
Re. My Naughty Doll
9th Sep 2015 2:58am
Alrite my sexy creampuff.. I'm lured into your brain as much as your naughty toppings.. a'puurrzzz
"God girrrl! Aren't you just the vision of sin! "
~hear you sayin this one in that smooth southern drawllll darlin..
*pinned-up divinely.. gawdsdamn luvitt!!
"Curves up then down and shwooosh! around, till the get off!"
~The curvaceous ride just reminds me of a naughty sit & spin.. w/more class & appeal o'course ;)
Sweet hellz I needs get out more.. divine playful you.. has given me vixen smile.. ty luvzie!
indecent lickins & heart rings to you & this ode of naughty doll-all..
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"God girrrl! Aren't you just the vision of sin! "
~hear you sayin this one in that smooth southern drawllll darlin..
*pinned-up divinely.. gawdsdamn luvitt!!
"Curves up then down and shwooosh! around, till the get off!"
~The curvaceous ride just reminds me of a naughty sit & spin.. w/more class & appeal o'course ;)
Sweet hellz I needs get out more.. divine playful you.. has given me vixen smile.. ty luvzie!
indecent lickins & heart rings to you & this ode of naughty doll-all..
~d
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Re: Re. My Naughty Doll
9th Sep 2015 4:55am
Well when you sit and draw a sexy woman for a couple hours in a day you gotta get that shit out or self combust!! Lol
Naughty sit and spin!! How did you know my colllege nick name!?
Teehee
Luvs and kisses all over back!
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Jennifer
Naughty sit and spin!! How did you know my colllege nick name!?
Teehee
Luvs and kisses all over back!
👅🍧
Jennifer
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