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I Wanna Wear Your Rage
I want to moan you.. Fucking own you..
trap scabs and scars 'twixt tattoo'ed ink.
Suck your soul 'neath my skin in slow sink,
wear borrowed raw Rage without blink..
Feed you emotion.. ~Sanity seeds~
taste deathwish fierce-spit.. as I breathe.
Choke hard on angsty sighs denied scream,
hear lewd hexes.. as I daydream~
Feel your deep seethe at heart-solid worth,
scalding ill tempered tyrant's birth.
Squeeze tight enough to render thrown hurts,
let jade innocence force your curse.
Buried silent, beneath silken skin-
May you see for certes pale fend..
Forgiving you ..'tis my Only Sin~
I failed wear [away] grim raging stage..
[unreciprocated blinding hate]
Expelling you free from my sad skin-
[Soul witnessed oath, Rage refused listen]
Love-Spirit Law guides small wounded hand,
as unresolved wreckage exits pure woman.
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Re. I Wanna Wear Your Rage
4th Sep 2015 6:48am
I want to moan you...fucking own you..
Said saturated slow, low n deep. Narrowed wing tipped eyes, cherry red lips hissing....
Had me pulled sucked into darksighs dark cries..
"[Soul witnessed oath, Rage refused listen]
Love-Spirit Law guides small wounded hand,
as unresolved wreckage exits pure woman."
Poor guy, poor sighs, he didnt have the unheart to give your souls sucks back...
Pure woman.
Love that. Luv u. Epitomy of T.
🙌🙌
Jennifer
Said saturated slow, low n deep. Narrowed wing tipped eyes, cherry red lips hissing....
Had me pulled sucked into darksighs dark cries..
"[Soul witnessed oath, Rage refused listen]
Love-Spirit Law guides small wounded hand,
as unresolved wreckage exits pure woman."
Poor guy, poor sighs, he didnt have the unheart to give your souls sucks back...
Pure woman.
Love that. Luv u. Epitomy of T.
🙌🙌
Jennifer
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Re: Re. I Wanna Wear Your Rage
5th Sep 2015 2:48pm
Darling you.. fer seeing the depth here..
I have learned and expelled much in this write, almost for 'my peace' if there is such..
Your poetic replies are so dear to my fierce heart crackle.
Purely lovin your "..to give your souls sucks back." observe.. ever and deeply resounding
thru me, ty creampuff [u earned that one in ur naughties.. lol]
my epitomized T adores you wif aggressive sweet luvs, Jen of my heart..
mwahs endless lil lady,
~d
I have learned and expelled much in this write, almost for 'my peace' if there is such..
Your poetic replies are so dear to my fierce heart crackle.
Purely lovin your "..to give your souls sucks back." observe.. ever and deeply resounding
thru me, ty creampuff [u earned that one in ur naughties.. lol]
my epitomized T adores you wif aggressive sweet luvs, Jen of my heart..
mwahs endless lil lady,
~d
Re. I Wanna Wear Your Rage
4th Sep 2015 12:03pm
why do i find this really sexy [?] gawds sick kitty in heat i am...
"I want to moan you.. Fucking own you..
trap scabs and scars 'twixt tattoo'ed ink.
Suck your soul 'neath my skin in slow sink,
wear borrowed raw Rage without blink..
Feed you emotion.. ~Sanity seeds~
taste fierce-spit death wish.. as I breathe."
^^^^
kinds n.i.n "closer" vibe there or tis the mood i'm reading in but the cycle of want & dislike seems inescapable
*
either way, i dig diggity dig this spill (like everything you write, really)
loves you & that damn pen that confuzzles me so
xoxox
"I want to moan you.. Fucking own you..
trap scabs and scars 'twixt tattoo'ed ink.
Suck your soul 'neath my skin in slow sink,
wear borrowed raw Rage without blink..
Feed you emotion.. ~Sanity seeds~
taste fierce-spit death wish.. as I breathe."
^^^^
kinds n.i.n "closer" vibe there or tis the mood i'm reading in but the cycle of want & dislike seems inescapable
*
either way, i dig diggity dig this spill (like everything you write, really)
loves you & that damn pen that confuzzles me so
xoxox
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Re: Re. I Wanna Wear Your Rage
4th Sep 2015 1:01pm
Confuzzles lol K kill me. N i N vibe big def agreed!! Glad to read this comnent and the piece again with Closer in mind!
Sexier still! If possible. Fellow kitty here! Mee oww 🐱🐱🐱
Sexier still! If possible. Fellow kitty here! Mee oww 🐱🐱🐱
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Re: Re. I Wanna Wear Your Rage
5th Sep 2015 3:06pm
"why do i find this really sexy"... larger Q here.. how'd I *know you wud? eg. plain tickled am I
at your song relation. you whammed my brain back to 18 falling in heated luvz w/that song &
Reznor's voice... oooo yes, perfect addition here sister-mine.. mwahs..
want vs dislike[of blank-blank-blank].. gets a wicked cackle cuz you spank me into grin w/ur insight..
have no choice but to lick your confuzzles.. luv that.. and you, everly.
ty fer smiles of devious grin wif my espresso kittensKat,
~d
at your song relation. you whammed my brain back to 18 falling in heated luvz w/that song &
Reznor's voice... oooo yes, perfect addition here sister-mine.. mwahs..
want vs dislike[of blank-blank-blank].. gets a wicked cackle cuz you spank me into grin w/ur insight..
have no choice but to lick your confuzzles.. luv that.. and you, everly.
ty fer smiles of devious grin wif my espresso kittensKat,
~d
Re: Re. I Wanna Wear Your Rage
5th Sep 2015 3:10pm
Much lovins on your review, dear man.. ty fer takin time on my bitch-laden truths ;)
curtsies kindly to a great 3day weekend!
~d
curtsies kindly to a great 3day weekend!
~d
Re. I Wanna Wear Your Rage
4th Sep 2015 2:03pm
Alas, no rage to lend.
a beautiful melancholian 'resolution' (in irony)
a beautiful melancholian 'resolution' (in irony)
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Re: Re. I Wanna Wear Your Rage
5th Sep 2015 3:18pm
You are pure balm to see the true see-see here..
as I'm a muddle-fuk of emotion at moment..
*beach snuggles fer your time, my dear Sirz o D..
~d
as I'm a muddle-fuk of emotion at moment..
*beach snuggles fer your time, my dear Sirz o D..
~d
Re. I Wanna Wear Your Rage
Anonymous
4th Sep 2015 2:04pm
Great outlet for your inner emotion.
"Forgiving you ..'tis my Only Sin~"
Brilliant, and oh so true . . .
"Forgiving you ..'tis my Only Sin~"
Brilliant, and oh so true . . .
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Re: Re. I Wanna Wear Your Rage
5th Sep 2015 3:22pm
Ah, sweet Jerry.. cannot ty enough fer your support.. we both know my innards are mussied
& I'm learning not to pick scabs.. trying hard dammit. ;)
you are a blessing to my page, hughug
~d
& I'm learning not to pick scabs.. trying hard dammit. ;)
you are a blessing to my page, hughug
~d
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Re: Re. I Wanna Wear Your Rage
5th Sep 2015 3:31pm
"I also get ones want to view all through another's eyes"
..just *this.. reminds me how deeply you dwell in my heart of tangled strings & I am the luckiest
seester ever.. I just know! to acknowledge-release-forgive and heal.. you have held me through
all and I am warmly snugglin your soul, sister-mine. I willingly play bitch to your Faerie heart all ways!
miles of luvins & fondle sweet Taryn OFK.. [mineminemine]
~says the sultry CS seester ;)
..just *this.. reminds me how deeply you dwell in my heart of tangled strings & I am the luckiest
seester ever.. I just know! to acknowledge-release-forgive and heal.. you have held me through
all and I am warmly snugglin your soul, sister-mine. I willingly play bitch to your Faerie heart all ways!
miles of luvins & fondle sweet Taryn OFK.. [mineminemine]
~says the sultry CS seester ;)
Re. I Wanna Wear Your Rage
4th Sep 2015 5:30pm
Re: Re. I Wanna Wear Your Rage
5th Sep 2015 3:37pm
Blah to the exact irony of the today's.. and grins to you dear lady..
Appreciate your presence as a steady soothe of no equal!
enjoy your weekend, sweetest heart that I've known,
~d
Appreciate your presence as a steady soothe of no equal!
enjoy your weekend, sweetest heart that I've known,
~d
Re. I Wanna Wear Your Rage
4th Sep 2015 6:44pm
Re: Re. I Wanna Wear Your Rage
5th Sep 2015 3:41pm
Makes my day to have you here darling one.. ty fer taking time on my purging manifesto ;)
always wicked huggs fer you!
~d;
always wicked huggs fer you!
~d;
Re. I Wanna Wear Your Rage
4th Sep 2015 7:24pm
lovely d~ your savage ink rages masterfully..
so in love with your masterful pen with lines like this..
"Feel your deep seethe at heart-solid worth,
scalding ill tempered tyrant's birth.
Squeeze tight enough to render thrown hurts,
let jade innocence force your curse.
Buried silent, beneath silken skin-
May you see for certes pale fend..
Forgiving you ..'tis my Only Sin~"
I bow to the mastery of you ink beautiful one..
with love Crim
so in love with your masterful pen with lines like this..
"Feel your deep seethe at heart-solid worth,
scalding ill tempered tyrant's birth.
Squeeze tight enough to render thrown hurts,
let jade innocence force your curse.
Buried silent, beneath silken skin-
May you see for certes pale fend..
Forgiving you ..'tis my Only Sin~"
I bow to the mastery of you ink beautiful one..
with love Crim
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Re: Re. I Wanna Wear Your Rage
5th Sep 2015 3:46pm
Gots nothin' but loves fer your heart dearest Brenda..
ty always fer being *you & accepting my myriad soul parts with support..
warmest nuzzled kisses, darlin-purrrfect!
~d
ty always fer being *you & accepting my myriad soul parts with support..
warmest nuzzled kisses, darlin-purrrfect!
~d
Re. I Wanna Wear Your Rage
4th Sep 2015 7:47pm
That strikes me as a very brave request, Darksighs!
"Feel your deep seethe at heart-solid worth,
scalding ill tempered tyrant's birth.
Squeeze tight enough to render thrown hurts,
let jade innocence force your curse."
It sounds like you're invoking some demon, forcing him to comply. He gets a look at that jade innocence and considers it a challenge.
"Expelling you free of my sad skin-
[Soul witnessed oath, Rage refused listen]
Love-Spirit Law guides small wounded hand,
as unresolved wreckage exits pure woman."
The demon does his damage but is defeated. "Love-Spirit Law" supports you, and you emerge from the wreckage not as some phoenix but a pure woman.
I might over-simplifying but I love this Darksighs. Makes me want to take you under my wing!
"Feel your deep seethe at heart-solid worth,
scalding ill tempered tyrant's birth.
Squeeze tight enough to render thrown hurts,
let jade innocence force your curse."
It sounds like you're invoking some demon, forcing him to comply. He gets a look at that jade innocence and considers it a challenge.
"Expelling you free of my sad skin-
[Soul witnessed oath, Rage refused listen]
Love-Spirit Law guides small wounded hand,
as unresolved wreckage exits pure woman."
The demon does his damage but is defeated. "Love-Spirit Law" supports you, and you emerge from the wreckage not as some phoenix but a pure woman.
I might over-simplifying but I love this Darksighs. Makes me want to take you under my wing!
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Re: Re. I Wanna Wear Your Rage
5th Sep 2015 3:59pm
Oh damn.. you got a smirk dear Crow.. I'm wondering at the brave but appreciate hells outta
your take on this.. love how you put it into perspective with resounding alacrity..
If not fer my "Love-Spirit Law".. I'd be a ravenously posting bitch on my inner feelings, so
you seeing the attempt of restraint is such solace.. This being my only public response to
a certain set of misconceived thoughts.. I feel..idk.. cleanly refreshed.. ;)
keep that wing handy sweetie.. I'm known to backslide a time or two & I count you to be in
my circle of keep-me-sane ones..
if only I could purge demon thoughts from others? wow, divinity that would be!
nuftin but luvstuffs misters, ty.
~d
your take on this.. love how you put it into perspective with resounding alacrity..
If not fer my "Love-Spirit Law".. I'd be a ravenously posting bitch on my inner feelings, so
you seeing the attempt of restraint is such solace.. This being my only public response to
a certain set of misconceived thoughts.. I feel..idk.. cleanly refreshed.. ;)
keep that wing handy sweetie.. I'm known to backslide a time or two & I count you to be in
my circle of keep-me-sane ones..
if only I could purge demon thoughts from others? wow, divinity that would be!
nuftin but luvstuffs misters, ty.
~d
Re. I Wanna Wear Your Rage
Anonymous
4th Sep 2015 11:08pm
*Spellbound* ~ I am. . .Miss DarkSighs, what to say, what to say. . .I think everyone else has said what is needed to be said, so I echo their praise and your rage. . .Wicked ink. . .Enjoyed!. . .xoxo, Devlin;)
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Re: Re. I Wanna Wear Your Rage
5th Sep 2015 4:05pm
Lovely LadyDevlin.. appreciate your presence greatly.. means the world to me during
heart fuckeried times..
[no i don't think 'fuckeried' is a word..ha!.. but you know ;) ]
To spell or bind your sharp brain, even in combo.. humbles me, ty so much!
adorin' you,
~d
heart fuckeried times..
[no i don't think 'fuckeried' is a word..ha!.. but you know ;) ]
To spell or bind your sharp brain, even in combo.. humbles me, ty so much!
adorin' you,
~d
Re. I Wanna Wear Your Rage
5th Sep 2015 3:28am
& I want to straddle your lap!!
Oo darling love, do you pierce
me with your graceful rawness.
Thy wounds shall be kissed..
loving you my lady sighs
Oo darling love, do you pierce
me with your graceful rawness.
Thy wounds shall be kissed..
loving you my lady sighs
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Re: Re. I Wanna Wear Your Rage
5th Sep 2015 4:11pm
awwes.. you straddle and I shall have to tickle spine spots.. adorable kindred!
making me smile soft and purr loudly at your healing support *mwahmwahs
one day.. I shall needs steal you, I just feel it ;)
hugs n adores forever ladyluv,
~d
making me smile soft and purr loudly at your healing support *mwahmwahs
one day.. I shall needs steal you, I just feel it ;)
hugs n adores forever ladyluv,
~d
Re. I Wanna Wear Your Rage
5th Sep 2015 7:44pm
Love the way you ink your rage. A very well written poem.
as unresolved wreckage exits pure woman.
It sounds like you resolved the rage from this last line
Thank for sharing
as unresolved wreckage exits pure woman.
It sounds like you resolved the rage from this last line
Thank for sharing
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Re: Re. I Wanna Wear Your Rage
10th Sep 2015 00:39am
All resolves at sum point I think/hopes like hells. ;)
Thanx so much fer gracing my page sweetie..
ever a fan of your pen, in witchy bow,
~d
Thanx so much fer gracing my page sweetie..
ever a fan of your pen, in witchy bow,
~d
Re. I Wanna Wear Your Rage
6th Sep 2015 00:34am
Holy Christ you are a fierce woman with a trick Jaw you gorjus creature!!!!!
Feed you emotion.. ~Sanity seeds~
taste deathwish fierce-spit.. as I breathe.
Choke hard on angsty sighs denied scream,
hear lewd hexes.. as I daydream~
on fire luv!!!
loved this... (((((((((((((((Dark)))))))))))))))))))))))
Zazzles xoxoxoxoxox
Feed you emotion.. ~Sanity seeds~
taste deathwish fierce-spit.. as I breathe.
Choke hard on angsty sighs denied scream,
hear lewd hexes.. as I daydream~
on fire luv!!!
loved this... (((((((((((((((Dark)))))))))))))))))))))))
Zazzles xoxoxoxoxox
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Re: Re. I Wanna Wear Your Rage
10th Sep 2015 1:01am
Unholy kisses to you, my darkling sister Jackie.. misssssssss your loves & giggles on my page...
.. we needs catch up soon. Until then, rock on as only you can-- in style!
kisses n misses you,
~d
.. we needs catch up soon. Until then, rock on as only you can-- in style!
kisses n misses you,
~d
Re. I Wanna Wear Your Rage
6th Sep 2015 4:06pm
So brave to lay open book>
Nothing held back> adrenaline
filled release> such a torrent of
Feeling fired out with the perfect wording to convey. Heal, beautiful
One.
Forgiving you tis my only sin
Priceless
Keith
Nothing held back> adrenaline
filled release> such a torrent of
Feeling fired out with the perfect wording to convey. Heal, beautiful
One.
Forgiving you tis my only sin
Priceless
Keith
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Re. I Wanna Wear Your Rage
7th Sep 2015 3:37am
so damned intense this piece is.. raw and full of emotional abandonment..atone for naught..justification not needed..boundaries not heeded....deep seeded passion the only prerequisite..yeah...I totally vibe this!!
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Re. I Wanna Wear Your Rage
8th Sep 2015 10:59am
Holy Shitzsticks Batman!! Lol
Wow for real, this was powerful, raw, dark, searing ink!!! N I'm impressed by your rhythmic, hypnotic flow here too!! Yup, one of your very best my dear... wow!
Wow for real, this was powerful, raw, dark, searing ink!!! N I'm impressed by your rhythmic, hypnotic flow here too!! Yup, one of your very best my dear... wow!
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Re. I Wanna Wear Your Rage
1st Oct 2015 9:58am
Hello my friend; favorited this and had to tell you, you did very well here, Tis a perfect composition in my eyes... For the raw sheer power, innocents of want and your description of desire, dig this one... you really have something here my friend... yer friend: wolf
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Re. I Wanna Wear Your Rage
6th May 2016 7:28pm