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I am full of your church
full from the water in the bowl between your thighs
full of your tongue so cool, so slow, so arrogant
I am ripening
ripening
...
I am full of your church
full from the water in the bowl between your thighs
full of your tongue so cool, so slow, so arrogant
I am ripening
ripening
...
Published 3rd Sep 2015
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3rd Sep 2015 1:57am
Excellent, Shauna. Love the metaphor of reference regarding the church and body, re: the temple and holy water. And, lastly, the tongue, a holy communion that leads to maturity. Excellent weave.
3rd Sep 2015 2:12am
3rd Sep 2015 3:03am
I love this delectable write comparing church and his or her body and your ripening or becoming..
blow my mind with your scribes Shauna with love Brenda
blow my mind with your scribes Shauna with love Brenda
3rd Sep 2015 2:02pm
3rd Sep 2015 4:52pm
3rd Sep 2015 5:51pm
testify, miss shauna, testify!!!
have you heard hozier's take me to church [?] if not, you must... this is reminiscent of its chrism, it's intimate spirituality that borders on something lush & pagan...
"I am full of your church
full from the water in the bowl between your thighs
full of your tongue so cool, so slow, so arrogant"
^^^^
this speaks beyond some whispered prayer to be lost against the ceiling, this is raw, so raw & necessary
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christ on a cracker, this is how brevity should be used
xoxox
have you heard hozier's take me to church [?] if not, you must... this is reminiscent of its chrism, it's intimate spirituality that borders on something lush & pagan...
"I am full of your church
full from the water in the bowl between your thighs
full of your tongue so cool, so slow, so arrogant"
^^^^
this speaks beyond some whispered prayer to be lost against the ceiling, this is raw, so raw & necessary
*
christ on a cracker, this is how brevity should be used
xoxox
3rd Sep 2015 11:33pm
Hello AvahatiAngel: Thank you. Yes...a holy communion that leads to maturity...love that insight..hadn't even thought of that.
3rd Sep 2015 11:34pm
3rd Sep 2015 11:34pm
3rd Sep 2015 11:36pm
Hey Shadoe: thank you! yes...a whispered prayer against the ceiling. I wil check out Hozier Take me to church.
3rd Sep 2015 11:51pm
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