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Listen to your Whispers...
Whispers...are
lil' beacons
of light
though one
won't ever find it
they don't see it right...
Whispers,
are like
butterfly kisses
'pon the soul
as they tug
insistent, softly,
then take hold...
Whispers...
roam thru the mind
to reach the heart
as they combine
to do their part...
So embrace
the whispers
when they call unto you
once acknowledged,
it just may bring
life's blurry picture
into view.
lil' beacons
of light
though one
won't ever find it
they don't see it right...
Whispers,
are like
butterfly kisses
'pon the soul
as they tug
insistent, softly,
then take hold...
Whispers...
roam thru the mind
to reach the heart
as they combine
to do their part...
So embrace
the whispers
when they call unto you
once acknowledged,
it just may bring
life's blurry picture
into view.
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Re. Listen to your Whispers...
1st Sep 2015 10:08pm
Re: Re. Listen to your Whispers...
1st Sep 2015 11:03pm
Thank you my dear Crim, very pleased to hear it lifted your spirits! Appreciate u always :)
Re. Listen to your Whispers...
1st Sep 2015 10:14pm
ohhh Poe, yes! just like this...
"Whispers,
are like
butterfly kisses
'pon the soul
as they tug
insistent, softly,
then take hold..."
^^^^
[goosebumps]
... this is absolutely gorgeous!
loveeeeeeeeeeeed
xoxox
"Whispers,
are like
butterfly kisses
'pon the soul
as they tug
insistent, softly,
then take hold..."
^^^^
[goosebumps]
... this is absolutely gorgeous!
loveeeeeeeeeeeed
xoxox
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Re: Re. Listen to your Whispers...
1st Sep 2015 11:14pm
Honestly mami U give me goosebumps! N I'm so lucky to have ur support... :) muah! :)
Re. Listen to your Whispers...
Such an absolutely gorgeous write PM....as I type I see the one above, who is it? ....shadoe, has used the same two words, 'absolutely gorgeous'...great minds think alike...lol...
really, these words make me weak with tenderness...
well done PM... :)
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Re: Re. Listen to your Whispers...
1st Sep 2015 11:15pm
Aaaawwww sweet K, ur so good to me! :) thank u my dear, flattered n honored I am! :)
Re. Listen to your Whispers...
1st Sep 2015 11:13pm
Read another poem today involving whispers. Hmmm. Both beauties. You are sweetie, a beaut. A creative soul. You should put your art on your pieces.
🌷J
🌷J
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Re: Re. Listen to your Whispers...
1st Sep 2015 11:35pm
Thank u my sweetness, I'm happy you liked I do have to tell u though, I've done about a half dozen pieces n added my artwork to it. :)
Re: Re. Listen to your Whispers...
2nd Sep 2015 7:13am
Fairly new, havent seen them all. But good to know, will dig and look! 💋
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Re: Re. Listen to your Whispers...
2nd Sep 2015 8:50am
Re. Listen to your Whispers...
2nd Sep 2015 2:21am
"Whispers...are
lil' beacons
of light
though one
won't ever find it
they don't see it right... " <~~yep.
~you had my awwes from this! your flow reminds me of that in an Ani DiFraco song on 'puddle-dive'..
grzz cuz I can't remember song title.. maybe was 'IQ'..? hmm will check on that.
Your whispering is beautiful advice here, w/ great images brain-bursting as read.. and? smirking at ur mushy side-
as it suits you. gentle flow-bold words.. like this sweetie!
~d
lil' beacons
of light
though one
won't ever find it
they don't see it right... " <~~yep.
~you had my awwes from this! your flow reminds me of that in an Ani DiFraco song on 'puddle-dive'..
grzz cuz I can't remember song title.. maybe was 'IQ'..? hmm will check on that.
Your whispering is beautiful advice here, w/ great images brain-bursting as read.. and? smirking at ur mushy side-
as it suits you. gentle flow-bold words.. like this sweetie!
~d
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Re: Re. Listen to your Whispers...
2nd Sep 2015 9:02am
Aaaawwww I so adore you! Thank you my sweetheart, so grateful for your support always :)
Re. Listen to your Whispers...
Anonymous
2nd Sep 2015 6:07am
ah perfection!!! now come whisper in my ear ;)
It just flowed with fluidity and ease, PIKM, you captured it all with grace and beauty.
It just flowed with fluidity and ease, PIKM, you captured it all with grace and beauty.
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Re: Re. Listen to your Whispers...
2nd Sep 2015 9:06am
Hell yea I will! C'mere baby... what u think bout mmmmmm... n a lil of yea yea yea! n add a bit of mmmmmmm yummy... Lol muah! Thank you my sweet Lady V! Always :)
Re. Listen to your Whispers...
2nd Sep 2015 6:31am
Re: Re. Listen to your Whispers...
2nd Sep 2015 9:07am
Re. Listen to your Whispers...
2nd Sep 2015 1:46pm
This such a thing of beauty PM. Love it when u share ur softer side Sir
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Re: Re. Listen to your Whispers...
2nd Sep 2015 2:00pm
Well my 'soft' side gets hard when excited lol sooooo lol anyways, yea I'm grateful to my lil southern one
for this sweet lil comment... :) appreciate u much :)
for this sweet lil comment... :) appreciate u much :)
Re. Listen to your Whispers...
I love whispers and I listen to mine....lol
Your wonderful ink has brought it forth so eloquently....thanks Poe ; )
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Re: Re. Listen to your Whispers...
2nd Sep 2015 2:02pm
Thank you my dear, I'm happy
you liked my lil whisper... Truly n always appreciate ur support :)
you liked my lil whisper... Truly n always appreciate ur support :)
Re. Listen to your Whispers...
2nd Sep 2015 2:42pm
Lovely whispers! There is a peaceful calm within this poem. Serene, and nicely writ. Respectfully, blue angel
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Re: Re. Listen to your Whispers...
2nd Sep 2015 3:12pm
Well I've been known to be calm at times lol. Thank you sweetheart, appreciate your thoughts on my ink :)
Re. Listen to your Whispers...
2nd Sep 2015 6:09pm
Whispers are the thing most people ignore whether its whisper for help sent by look of hopelessness or whisper of love that given to you daily in way she looks into your eyes leans in for a kiss with her hand upon your chest and you don't realize what you had till she gone.
My favorite line
may bring
life's blurry picture
into view.
My favorite line
may bring
life's blurry picture
into view.
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Re: Re. Listen to your Whispers...
2nd Sep 2015 7:36pm
Oh I so agree!! Many don't listen to those voices that may answer questions that plaque them! thank you so much, I promise I will return the consideration. ASAP :)
Re. Listen to your Whispers...
3rd Sep 2015 12:35pm
"So embrace
the whispers
when they call unto you
once acknowledged,
it just may bring
life's blurry picture
into view." love that stanza...this was Fabulous!!! the gentle tone was as soft as butterfly kisses...Beautifully Crafted Poetik!!!
the whispers
when they call unto you
once acknowledged,
it just may bring
life's blurry picture
into view." love that stanza...this was Fabulous!!! the gentle tone was as soft as butterfly kisses...Beautifully Crafted Poetik!!!
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Re: Re. Listen to your Whispers...
3rd Sep 2015 1:00pm
Aaaawwww my desirous one! Gracias Mi Amiga! lol truly, I'm flattered n honored for your continued support :)
Re. Listen to your Whispers...
3rd Sep 2015 1:10pm
Re: Re. Listen to your Whispers...
3rd Sep 2015 5:50pm
Yes I agree, funny thing though
'Screams don't seem to get ignored as often lol... Truly, I thank you for your wisdom, time, n support always :)
'Screams don't seem to get ignored as often lol... Truly, I thank you for your wisdom, time, n support always :)
Re. Listen to your Whispers...
5th Sep 2015 1:37am
Re: Re. Listen to your Whispers...
5th Sep 2015 11:24pm
Aaawww my dear sweet Lady... Thank
U! I'm so pleased you liked n I'm grateful for ur visit n thoughts on my ink... :)
U! I'm so pleased you liked n I'm grateful for ur visit n thoughts on my ink... :)
Re. Listen to your Whispers...
6th Sep 2015 00:42am
Re: Re. Listen to your Whispers...
6th Sep 2015 11:45am
Aaaawww hey my dear... Been awhile
but I'm to see ur visit! n thank u so much for the sweet words n curtsy :)
but I'm to see ur visit! n thank u so much for the sweet words n curtsy :)
Re. Listen to your Whispers...
8th Sep 2015 4:11pm
Re: Re. Listen to your Whispers...
8th Sep 2015 7:33pm
Yea, from the soul is the Only way to do it as you know my talented bro! :)
Truly n always grateful for your support :)
Truly n always grateful for your support :)
Re: Re. Listen to your Whispers...
13th Sep 2015 10:42am
Re. Listen to your Whispers...
11th Jun 2016 10:40pm
I love the whispers. If you listen with your soul, they often seems as loud as screams. Wonderful expression here that you've penned. ☺
Willow
Willow
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Re: Re. Listen to your Whispers...
12th Jun 2016 8:00am
Re. Listen to your Whispers...
8th Mar 2017 12:58pm
I love rummaging through your treasure chest & finding nuggets, lil beacons of light, when most needed. LadyRain :)
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Re: Re. Listen to your Whispers...
8th Mar 2017 1:16pm
I love that you do! I'm honored n flattered that you're the only one who does that... deeply grateful to you :)