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Sacred Contracts IV: Bridging
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It was no pretense, the stretching
into the reservoir's muddy mouth
where I fashioned brick into steps:
A desert dweller, solitude sitter
breathing dry particles of earth,
vestige love, recycled words.
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Micro-climates part sunflowers,
Elevation becoming seraphic;
His hand concrete around mine:
Two enervated refugees bridging
toward an unforeseen denouement.
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Re. Sacred Contracts IV: Bridging
29th Aug 2015 10:58pm
I love the idea and the concrete fact
of bridging, I guess because both
fill a void, although perhaps the emotional
and spiritual one is my bridge
of choice..:)
of bridging, I guess because both
fill a void, although perhaps the emotional
and spiritual one is my bridge
of choice..:)
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Re: Re. Sacred Contracts IV: Bridging
Or cross a void with another voyeur.
It's all a beautiful journey through each stunning and yet painful moment filled with no promises or guarantees of where it's going. That's pretty exciting. Makes me wonder what I'll be doing tomorrow.
Re. Sacred Contracts IV: Bridging
Oh excelente! I like the surprise ending and the empathy you must have to write this poem. You have a third eye..yesyesyes! I hope you publish a chap book.
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31st Aug 2015 8:52pm
Re. Sacred Contracts IV: Bridging
30th Aug 2015 00:44am
out of the desert, to a field of flowers. it's an illustrious bridge...
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31st Aug 2015 8:53pm
Re. Sacred Contracts IV: Bridging
30th Aug 2015 9:19am
Taking yourself from a comfort zone of isolation, unhappiness even, partnering, and building a path to the sublime, not knowing or not caring about the resolute end?
This is what i take from your words and that inspires me.
Your soul is somethin darlin. 🌟💥
🌙J
This is what i take from your words and that inspires me.
Your soul is somethin darlin. 🌟💥
🌙J
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31st Aug 2015 9:01pm
Caring about the destination subtracts from the present beauty methinks. Thank you, Jennifer. I'm glad you could glean some inspiration.
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30th Aug 2015 2:05pm
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31st Aug 2015 9:02pm
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Re: Re. Sacred Contracts IV: Bridging
31st Aug 2015 9:04pm
Knowing where they're leading would be a bit boring for me. I like hiking a mountain full of surprises at every turn. As long as they aren't hungry bears, that is. Thank you for taking time to respond, and welcome to DUP.
Re. Sacred Contracts IV: Bridging
19th Sep 2015 8:16am
You can't imagine how much I love this Ahavati
I always look for you when I return to DU
I always look for you when I return to DU
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19th Sep 2015 10:16pm
You can't imagine how good it is to see you back, Whale.
I barely have time to write currently, much less be on here. But I'm hoping that changes in the near future.
I barely have time to write currently, much less be on here. But I'm hoping that changes in the near future.
Re. Sacred Contracts IV: Bridging
25th Sep 2015 8:41pm
Title alone speaks volumes, yelps in a way for which this reader cannot help but read on with fangs exposed. No pretense, although I would say it holds a compelling, as well as stirring metaphor by which the reader should ingest; bridges connect all things in many ways. all varying distances and hopefully even further into oblivion vis-a vis your poem. Thanks~
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26th Sep 2015 2:36am
Re. Sacred Contracts IV: Bridging
Ahavati,
Dear sweet Ahavati,
I walk away with feelings of self awareness, I soak in all that is earth and around us...
Just stunning!
RL
loves
Zazzles xo
Dear sweet Ahavati,
I walk away with feelings of self awareness, I soak in all that is earth and around us...
Just stunning!
RL
loves
Zazzles xo
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