Demon Speak

Nope.  I pick myself up and ready for a fight, tough lady.  Not down for the count at all.  Now it's your turn, since I do speak Demon, just not as fluently as you.  Fine job lovely Crim!    

you made me giggle with your comment :)

thank you Sir Crow with love Crim

thank you beautiful Taryn for encouraging me to post this and loving all sides of me :)

with love Brenda

beautifully hard as nails - difficult to get this right, you  seem to do it with ease - excellent :-)

thank you David sometimes the darkness just flows of it's own accord :)   with love Crim

An legion is marching across the page!!
Gone sweet, hello hell bitch!

Love it!

Chills

🚬💋J

thank you lovely Jennifer for such a great comment..

this just poured out of me I wasn't sure I should post it after my peaceful poem..

with love Brenda :)

You're bringing it hard and
deadly Brenda.

Has someone pissed in Your
cornflakes? J/k

Keep hitting Us with this rawness.

  Angst filled pages... Pan/Dantalian.

thank you Dantalian-Pan lol no one has pissed in my cereal..

the darkness just came pouring out :)

with love Brenda

Brenda, remind me to never piss you off.. i'm joking.. would never do that.. but this is so raw.. kicking ass and taking names brutality.. really feel this one.. with love, and respect..



Dave

thank you graciously Dave :)

with love Brenda

last line brings it home

Bravo

thank you Poet means a lot :)

with love Brenda

Miss Crim,
I said it once
and I'll say it again:

"Bitch Wicked ink,
my Demonic friend."

Ooh, chills!. . .xoxo, Devlin:)

thank you lovely Devlin smiling at you with a wicked grin on my face :)

with love Crim

"Bitch wicked ink" I like that and I think it compliments this nicely. I couldn't have said it better.

thank you Sir Hades for making me smile :)

with love Crim

Crim: I'm blown away and little scared..uh oh.   You have gathered all the dark skies and angry winds and placed them in this fantastic poem. Someone out there needs to shaking in their boots or kissing yours.  Enjoyed this poem!!!

thank you Shauna I love your comments :)

with love Brenda

Wowzer Crim....hell of a write here....I enjoyed this so very much......you need to unleash your demon side more often.....luvin this......luv and hugs xo :)

thank you lovely Flower for showing love for the demon in me :)

with love Crim

"legion is marching across the page
entering your home through the screen
licking balls and pussies alike"
~I'm justa sittin' here wif my fuzzy screen on gal, bring it! [please?]  

"darkness incarnate
I live in the shadows
where false light can't scorch"
~rings like a clear bell in my head.. truth in that warm wet dark, I do know!

"wipe my feet on you then keep walking" ...excellent departure, my dark Royalty...*mwahs

Gotta confess, my Crim de la crème .. lovesitt when your minions are off da hook!
*in wicked purrs
~d

lovely d~ how I adore and cherish your comments..

thank you beautiful one for leaving me such delicious thoughts on my ink :)

with love Brenda

I think you just made the sun sink in the wake of your poetic Darkness. It definitely got a shade darker here.
I'll be reading more of you

thank you DevilsPoet for such a wickedly great comment..

i'll be checking you out as well..

with respect Crimsin

Damn! What a badass you are.....love.that third stanza because I knew it would explode after that..... enjoyed it!

thank you Lena couldn't ask for a better comment :)

with love Crim

treading fiercely on the path of war, Crim. I can hear the hounds of hell growling...

thank you John though not feeling so fierce today..

with love Crim

Wow, this was intense!

I really relate to the first stanza, that's how I've been feeling since Friday.

I feel for you it's a hard place to be in..

hope you feel more at peace soon..

thank you kindly for leaving your thoughts :)

with love Crim

Sometimes there is light once the darkness is lifted...I can relate to this on a personal level...Well done. :)

thank you lovely lady for an insightful and beautiful comment :)

with love Crim

I absolutely love this poem!!

thank you graciously..

love Crim