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Bitch
I'm going to be my fierce self
fuck it if no one likes it
not going to cower
pretend to be a wilting flower
when I'm an orchid in full bloom
dripping my menstrual blood
in your face
if you want to get with this bitch
better earn those red wings
don't tug at my bra straps
i'll only slap you in the face
i'm in a I don't give a fuck attitude
dancing on this macabre stage
a devilish ballerina on point
I have a style and grace all my own
i'm my own woman
not a trophy to be cased
see me dancing now not for your audience
life's stage is mine
lovers will come and go
you're just a player who's been played
Written by
crimsin
(Unveiling)
Published 23rd Aug 2015
| Edited 24th Aug 2015
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Re: Re. Bitch
24th Aug 2015 1:02am
Re. Bitch
23rd Aug 2015 9:14pm
I pity the fool who tries to get one over you. They obviously don't know who they're fucking with.
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Re: Re. Bitch
24th Aug 2015 1:03am
Re. Bitch
23rd Aug 2015 9:16pm
Wow!!!!
Fierce self indeed! Some amazing imagery here...I really like "I'm my own woman, not a trophy to be cased"
Again, wow!
Lulu
Fierce self indeed! Some amazing imagery here...I really like "I'm my own woman, not a trophy to be cased"
Again, wow!
Lulu
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Re: Re. Bitch
24th Aug 2015 1:04am
Re. Bitch
23rd Aug 2015 9:33pm
Unholy Shit Brenda: You've come out
swinging the club with the barbed-wire
wrapped all around it... crushing, battering
skulls and ripping flesh from bones... OooRah
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/155296-eroticism-through-bloodletting/
This is the link to a poem I wrote on here a
long while back now.
This Wonderful Assault that You've Slaughtered
us all with reminded me of the above poem that
I've provided You with the link to.
swinging the club with the barbed-wire
wrapped all around it... crushing, battering
skulls and ripping flesh from bones... OooRah
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/155296-eroticism-through-bloodletting/
This is the link to a poem I wrote on here a
long while back now.
This Wonderful Assault that You've Slaughtered
us all with reminded me of the above poem that
I've provided You with the link to.
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Re: Re. Bitch
Pan thank you for the fantastic comment making me giggle wickedly..
I read your poem and commented you certainly are a man who knows this territory ;)
with love Brenda
Re. Bitch
I would NEVER ask you to be a wilting flower Crim. I do like visualizing you as "a devilish ballerina on point." That's more like it. "I have a style and grace all my own." There's nobody quite like you, lady. I'll stop short of calling you a bitch lest I get blown away. Hows about badass?
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Re: Re. Bitch
24th Aug 2015 1:10am
Re. Bitch
23rd Aug 2015 10:20pm
Crimsin, luv ~ :-*
This is GORGEOUS volatility right here! I am feeling quite enamored of this poem, luv. Tis one delicious assertion of battle stance and victory.
Written exquisitely! :-*
This is GORGEOUS volatility right here! I am feeling quite enamored of this poem, luv. Tis one delicious assertion of battle stance and victory.
Written exquisitely! :-*
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Re: Re. Bitch
24th Aug 2015 1:11am
Re: Re. Bitch
24th Aug 2015 5:20am
Oh, and so you know, luv, part of what's enamored me so about this poem of yours is that "work" earning the privilege of your torrid tropical orchid favor. ;-*
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Re: Re. Bitch
24th Aug 2015 3:17pm
Re. Bitch
23rd Aug 2015 10:31pm
Someone definitely not to be messed with. I must second, Mr. Crow > devilish ballerina on point> cool shit>some really
vivid imagery>really enjoyed it Crimson.
K2m
vivid imagery>really enjoyed it Crimson.
K2m
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Re: Re. Bitch
24th Aug 2015 1:13am
thank you kindly K2m for visiting me and leaving your thoughts :)
with love Crim
with love Crim
Re. Bitch
23rd Aug 2015 11:06pm
YES! A cool and strong manifesto. You are a hero and let it be known. Adore verses 2, 5,6,7 esp. The edgy ballerina...dreamed of being just that.
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Re: Re. Bitch
24th Aug 2015 1:14am
Re. Bitch
Anonymous
24th Aug 2015 00:23am
Well stated!. . .Gotta love those Angel's Wings. . .Few and far between are capable of performing such erotic delights. . .Bitch Wicked Ink!. . .xoxo, Devlin;)
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Re: Re. Bitch
24th Aug 2015 1:16am
I didn't know how many people would get the red wing reference ;)
thank you Devlin for a wicked great comment :)
with love Crim
thank you Devlin for a wicked great comment :)
with love Crim
Re. Bitch
24th Aug 2015 00:45am
I didn't realize it Brenda but I at some point
wrote two poems on the aforementioned
issue, (no pun intended).
This one You had actually commented on.
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/189610-bloodlust-very-explicit/
wrote two poems on the aforementioned
issue, (no pun intended).
This one You had actually commented on.
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/189610-bloodlust-very-explicit/
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Re: Re. Bitch
24th Aug 2015 1:17am
I remember reading that one it's fantastic when you first posted I thought that was the one :)
thank you again Pan
with love Brenda
thank you again Pan
with love Brenda
Re. Bitch
24th Aug 2015 5:33am
Love the confidence emblazoned here, lovely lass.
Multiple red wing trophies in this house.
I rip or cut, never tug. Just sayin'. ;)
you know,
C.
Multiple red wing trophies in this house.
I rip or cut, never tug. Just sayin'. ;)
you know,
C.
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Re: Re. Bitch
24th Aug 2015 3:19pm
thank you Chad made me giggle with you comment :)
I bet you do ;)
with love Brenda
I bet you do ;)
with love Brenda
Re. Bitch
24th Aug 2015 8:56am
Re: Re. Bitch
24th Aug 2015 3:20pm
John didn't mean to damage any hearts..
thank you for visiting me you are cherished :)
with love Crim
thank you for visiting me you are cherished :)
with love Crim
Re. Bitch
24th Aug 2015 8:02pm
Re: Re. Bitch
25th Aug 2015 3:36pm
Re. Bitch
Anonymous
24th Aug 2015 9:07pm
Brilliant, Brenda.. this is a powerful write, full of rage and passion.. really love this one.. with love, and respect..
Dave
Dave
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Re: Re. Bitch
25th Aug 2015 3:23pm
Re. Bitch
26th Aug 2015 11:32am
Somehow i had missed this one, happy as fuck i found it. One of your best!
Better earn those red wings.
Had to smile big. Red wings indeed.
Teehee
Sexy, deep, you.
💘 love
Jennifer
Better earn those red wings.
Had to smile big. Red wings indeed.
Teehee
Sexy, deep, you.
💘 love
Jennifer
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Re: Re. Bitch
26th Aug 2015 8:33pm
thank you lovely one for such a beautiful heart touching comment :)
with love Brenda
with love Brenda