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Creaming For You
I dreamt about you last night
you told me if I was a better writer
then I would hold your interest
we speak sporadically
when I approach with trepidation
whiskey in my belly
a belt of courage
you scare the shit out of me
I don't tremble for anyone
though there's something about
your I don't give a fuck attitude
that has me creaming in my panties
I imagine leaving cum stains
on your pages when I brazenly comment
leaving my mark on your poetic perfection
no that isn't quite right
you mind fuck us with your ink
I love your dirty fingers in my brain
seducing me inspiring me like no other
I came on myself
when you left me a great comment
you rarely comment
high on the echelon
too arrogant which I adore
to come to the gutter and visit this whore
I'm left wondering
if out of some morbid curiosity
do you find yourself perusing
my naked, nasty, finger fucking pages
if so I wonder do I affect you at all
aloof and out of reach
is what I prefer
I don't like to be coddled
you used to beat me with your words
do it again please
oh fuck you know I like it
never mind just keep
inking out your thoughts
i'll keep creaming on your pages
Written by
crimsin
(Unveiling)
Published 22nd Aug 2015
| Edited 23rd Aug 2015
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Re. Creaming For You
Great analogy sweets
Though who is this Shakespeare better. Than my delicious Brenda
Doubtful
Maybe this boy has stolen confidence from you
Lemme get my hands on him. ✊✊✊✊✊✊✊✊✊✊✊✊✊💜
Great fucking piece doll!
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Re: Re. Creaming For You
23rd Aug 2015 00:15am
thank you beautiful Jennifer but shhh it's a secret ;)
no he makes me brazen so no worries lovely one..
with love Brenda
no he makes me brazen so no worries lovely one..
with love Brenda
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23rd Aug 2015 00:27am
Re: Re. Creaming For You
23rd Aug 2015 00:35am
thank you Jennifer sorry about not understanding..
you made me giggle with your reply :)
with love Brenda
you made me giggle with your reply :)
with love Brenda
Re: Re. Creaming For You
23rd Aug 2015 3:39am
No sorries please. Just wanted you to know i think you wield great power in both.
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23rd Aug 2015 4:30pm
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Re: Re. Creaming For You
23rd Aug 2015 00:21am
beautiful Taryn you made me giggle hard with your comment thank you lovely one..
the masochist in me hopes he tears into me soon ;)
the softy hopes he will see what you see..
love Brenda
the masochist in me hopes he tears into me soon ;)
the softy hopes he will see what you see..
love Brenda
Re. Creaming For You
Feel free to leave a stain anytime Crim. I'd consider it a badge of honor. I always love your edgy erotica! "Aloof and out of reach." Sounds cool, but I just wish the guy would stoop to say what a wonder you are. Just hope he's listening, and reading...
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Re: Re. Creaming For You
23rd Aug 2015 00:23am
thank you Sir Crow I love to leave my cum on your pages ;)
if he said I was a wonder the masochist in me would pout I think..
catch 22 either way..
I do adore his praise as well..
with love Crim
if he said I was a wonder the masochist in me would pout I think..
catch 22 either way..
I do adore his praise as well..
with love Crim
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23rd Aug 2015 7:50pm
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23rd Aug 2015 8:20pm
Re. Creaming For You
22nd Aug 2015 7:47pm
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23rd Aug 2015 00:25am
Re. Creaming For You
22nd Aug 2015 8:05pm
FUCK Brenda, You know how
to set the pages on FIRE and
to ENGORGE a mans member
with enough blood that he
becomes light-headed.
I feel sorry and happy for the
man Whom You're talking
about, thinking that he'd
probably get the FUCKING
of his life, leaving him DRAINED
of all his fluid.
Would be Best to bring a
few gallons of water into
the room to stay hydrated with.
By the way... You could
make me SWEAT and CUM
PROFUSELY anytime... Your scribe here has me close to both ):-)
An Incredibly Enticing Write here... Pan
to set the pages on FIRE and
to ENGORGE a mans member
with enough blood that he
becomes light-headed.
I feel sorry and happy for the
man Whom You're talking
about, thinking that he'd
probably get the FUCKING
of his life, leaving him DRAINED
of all his fluid.
Would be Best to bring a
few gallons of water into
the room to stay hydrated with.
By the way... You could
make me SWEAT and CUM
PROFUSELY anytime... Your scribe here has me close to both ):-)
An Incredibly Enticing Write here... Pan
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Re: Re. Creaming For You
23rd Aug 2015 00:27am
Sexy Pan but damn it man you know how to make a girls day..
what a hot and sexy comment leaving me blushing ;)
thank you Sexy man for leaving your hot thoughts on my page..
with love Brenda
what a hot and sexy comment leaving me blushing ;)
thank you Sexy man for leaving your hot thoughts on my page..
with love Brenda
Re. Creaming For You
Anonymous
22nd Aug 2015 8:37pm
Sexy Crim......what a great ink you've spilled here......I'm sure he's creaming for you as well......you create the most awesome writes......enjoyed.....luv and hugs xo :)
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23rd Aug 2015 00:28am
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Anonymous
22nd Aug 2015 10:51pm
Brenda, this is brilliance divine.. only a true poetess can write with such elegance.. just beautifully done.. with love, and respect..
Dave
Dave
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23rd Aug 2015 00:29am
Cream and Sugar
22nd Aug 2015 11:41pm
Sounds like you are hooked on the white stuff that is his pages, yet how very delicious is your expulsion.
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Re: Cream and Sugar
23rd Aug 2015 00:30am
yes Lord Viddax I'm a true addict..
thank you for such a sexy comment..
with love Crim
thank you for such a sexy comment..
with love Crim
Re. Creaming For You
22nd Aug 2015 11:41pm
This is the hottest fuckin heads-up anyone cud receive.. purrz & 'luckee they'. You are perfect Crim de la crème here..
see, my title dubbs thee well I keep thinking. you lmk lady.. teehee
"you scare the shit out of me
I don't tremble for anyone"
&
"though there's something
about your I don't give a fuck attitude
that has me creaming in my panties "
~just deliciously played yearn & burn. beautiful!
"you mind fuck us with your ink
I love your dirty fingers in my brain"
~vivid & dirty. exactly right!!
so many perfect lines that command all eyes on you. Mine are!
drips n'kisses hotly, ladyluvs, enjoyed..
~d
see, my title dubbs thee well I keep thinking. you lmk lady.. teehee
"you scare the shit out of me
I don't tremble for anyone"
&
"though there's something
about your I don't give a fuck attitude
that has me creaming in my panties "
~just deliciously played yearn & burn. beautiful!
"you mind fuck us with your ink
I love your dirty fingers in my brain"
~vivid & dirty. exactly right!!
so many perfect lines that command all eyes on you. Mine are!
drips n'kisses hotly, ladyluvs, enjoyed..
~d
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Re: Re. Creaming For You
23rd Aug 2015 00:34am
d~ you always leave the hottest comments ;)
I look forward to your visits with anticipation..
thank you sexy for such gorgeous thoughts on this ink :)
with love Crim
I look forward to your visits with anticipation..
thank you sexy for such gorgeous thoughts on this ink :)
with love Crim
Re. Creaming For You
23rd Aug 2015 00:48am
Wow...I love this. So full of heat and I love your phrasing. I've cut myself off from sex for awhile and this poem is making me want to come out of hibernation. I know you're not talking about actual sex but the written form but it set me on fire.
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23rd Aug 2015 4:31pm
Re. Creaming For You
23rd Aug 2015 3:00am
I'll give you a million bucks to tell me WHO this !#%?!! is... It's quite insane to think he could possibly be THAT good in light of the fact that on a scale from one to ten your ink is at the very least a 9.99... :)
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Re: Re. Creaming For You
23rd Aug 2015 4:32pm
Poe you really know how to make a girl's day :)
though I have to keep who it's about a secret..
with love Crim
though I have to keep who it's about a secret..
with love Crim
Re. Creaming For You
23rd Aug 2015 5:01am
This has gone beyond the "smoking" phase and has gone straight into " smoldering".
Through all the shadows
Beyond the light of day
Come hither, read me again
And leave me a stain
Through all the shadows
Beyond the light of day
Come hither, read me again
And leave me a stain
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Re: Re. Creaming For You
23rd Aug 2015 4:34pm
thank you Sir Hades for the awesome poetic response..
I shall continue to cream on your pages ;)
with love Crim
I shall continue to cream on your pages ;)
with love Crim
Re. Creaming For You
23rd Aug 2015 3:27pm
Crimsin ...Wow...baby you love the arrogant. I admire the pleasure you receive from nonchalant attitudes. Brenda you write with such bravery
and pleasure in who you are, or perhaps just the narrator or a little of both.
and pleasure in who you are, or perhaps just the narrator or a little of both.
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Re: Re. Creaming For You
23rd Aug 2015 4:35pm
thank you Shauna for getting this write with your keen eye :)
with love Brenda
with love Brenda
Re. Creaming For You
24th Aug 2015 5:27am
Hell-of-a-fucking write.
It's no secret, I prefer your slutty side. Back or front page. ;)
you know,
C.
It's no secret, I prefer your slutty side. Back or front page. ;)
you know,
C.
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Re: Re. Creaming For You
24th Aug 2015 3:23pm
thank you Chad going to have me giggling all morning with your comments ;)
with love Brenda
with love Brenda
Re. Creaming For You
24th Aug 2015 8:50am
you know how to dig pleasure out of good poetry & soak up every drop of it, Crim. sexy...
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24th Aug 2015 3:24pm
Re. Creaming For You
25th Aug 2015 10:00pm
Such pent-up passion in these lines. The drooling pussy pining away for the mysterious alluring figure is captivating, all built around the idea of leaving cum stains on pages. I think that's such a creative and powerful idea and you executed it so well here.
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Re: Re. Creaming For You
26th Aug 2015 00:46am
thank you as I have great passion built up for this person and I creamed out my lust for his style and ink..
with respect Crimsin
with respect Crimsin
Re. Creaming For You
20th Sep 2015 5:47am
Went from smoldering to deep fried and sexy I have to say you are awesome on the word play of this I love it
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20th Sep 2015 3:08pm