Dark and Deep

"Eyes water, and mascara smears,
My cock so deep it brings her tears. <~ *sigh
Steel ball spelling her name on vein,  
All in the hope I bring her pain."
~gawdamn beautiful handling, Mr Sighs.. fav in Big ways.

"While pumping deep the stars that bring  *** omg. the look ;)
Her tummy familiar zzzing!!!
She creams my shaft, and I explode...
As down her thighs our love is showed. "
~ love the stars and tummy zzzing babies.. can tell you've been paying attention.
this being second fav with no less of a drip factor..

The names, the details and beautiful recollections.. gdit, you've captured it all Michael [luv-tap & u know y]
naming you f-ing hawt fer this one, *meows & kisses
~T

Oh i pay very detailed attention, babe...lots n lots of mentals notes.  :)  

Stars were all urs babe, I was just honored to bring em to you.  Not much *recollection babe, went with pretty much just our fresh stuff mostly...but you know that.  ;)  I still recall our past with every bit of detail I do our present though.

Glad to get the sexy meow out of you...love to make MY kitty purr.  :)
 
Luvz n kisses.

Michael

This really flows, and the rhyme scheme's nicely played.  And the eroticism's stirred in that "dark sunshine."   "My baby's good to go again."  Great final line!  Your confident tone here suggests you're more than capable of keeping up with her.  Fine job Michael!

Thank you very much, crowfly, for visiting my page and the comment.  I was kinda partial to the dark sunshine line myself.   Lol on the keeping up... it's like a never-ending ride where we just have to remind ourselves to stop for food occasionally.  Ok, I may exaggerate a lil, but I do try my best to keep up.  :)
 
Michael

we're just gonna have to hand you the title of "king of erotica" and be done with it...
... love this steamy write, michael

I sincerely doubt I am worthy of such a title, dear Katja...  but am glad you enjoyed this write even so.  Thank you for stopping in, and don't think we've forgotten who originally came up with the "Mr. Sighs" moniker.  :)  owe you for that one.
 
Michael

I always love watching the interaction between muses and how their energy plays out in verses. You two...

Oh we get carried away with it at times too, Ahavati...but for the most part it's just good poetic banter.  A lil push one direction...a lil push harder the other.  We have a lot of fun with it.  Thank you for the read and the reply.  :)
 
Michael

Creative

Thank you for the read and the reply, illumnated.  And welcome to DuP.  I will be sure and check out your work when I get some reading time in.  Glad you enjoyed.
 
Michael

Ha....catching up is hard here I know.  Glad you felt this worthy of a stop and comment, Taryn.   Always happy to have you.
 
Michael

Really enjoyed the rhyme and flow some pretty clear images there too. Really hot
read Mr. I wonder how many more nicknames that bit of work earned you. Great stuff!
Keith

Thank you Keith for the kind words.  Nicknames huh....that might depend on whether stfu a nickname?  Lol.  Always a stickler for flow on these.  Glad you took note.  :)

Michael

make her tap out again Mike hehe... this ink hot like fire! *fist bump* :D

Haha, yep MV, here's to redefining the all-nighter.  Thank you for the read and the comment.  :)

Michael

when i was young
i too had solid one
long steel cock
they say
and
balls of brass
hits hard
the gals cried all day
and yet longed  for more
to be
banged banged and banged
the whole day and night
till in my cock  blood ran
then they did

till then stay now still
don't tell Jill


i once saw a couple
on the floor
she had a skirt side slit
nothing in it  

he had a zipper sliding
nothing hiding

a long one trying to peep
and
as the lights dimmed
they did win
was in
she said ouch
he said no ,
no couch
said he
then on the floor
like doing a salsa
he did it many a times
till she yelled  
hold me man
it cums.....