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We
Purpose is nonexistent
at best vague
a psychotic paradigm
round and round we go
in our vast multiverse
less than a single grain of sand
at best vague
a psychotic paradigm
round and round we go
in our vast multiverse
less than a single grain of sand
Written by
Zazzles
(Broomie)
Published 17th Aug 2015
| Edited 8th Jul 2022
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Re. We...
18th Aug 2015 00:02am
I like your perspective here, Jackie. We're collectively insignificant in most ways, and individually pretty close to nonexistent. It can be overwhelming to think of our place in the cosmos. So much inflated self-importance by so many. It's pretty funny how science once thought we were the center of the universe. My hat would be off to you if I had one. Not too many think about these things, much less write about them. I wonder about "veigh." I tried looking this up on Google and couldn't find a definition. Otherwise you provoked my thoughts with this. Nice brief write!
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LOL i meant Vague... I didn't realized i spelled it that way...
Anyway, it is crazy when you think about it eh?
always a pleasure to read your thoughts based off of mine..
i truly appreciate you in my poetic life Thomas <3
(((((((((((((((Crow)))))))))))))))))))
Jackie xoxoxox
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18th Aug 2015 00:39am
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18th Aug 2015 00:48am
I saw u entered this in your readers list.. i have to say Ahavati, u gave me chills!
I consider you an extremely gifted writer in fact in my top 5...
So coming from you that you thought enough of my ink to list it
makes my day and then some
Ears!
Thank you!
love
Zazzles xoxoxox
I consider you an extremely gifted writer in fact in my top 5...
So coming from you that you thought enough of my ink to list it
makes my day and then some
Ears!
Thank you!
love
Zazzles xoxoxox
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Anonymous
19th Aug 2015 3:18am
Ms. Z. simply brilliant.. much love..
Dave
Dave
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28th Aug 2015 4:19am
I like this piece it's simple yet thought provoking at the same time. "Less then a single grain of sand".
I often felt this way when I look at the sea of humanity around me all that have lived and ever will live. Then you add in the infinite universe the earth become the grain of sand what's that make us?? Thanks for the poem
I often felt this way when I look at the sea of humanity around me all that have lived and ever will live. Then you add in the infinite universe the earth become the grain of sand what's that make us?? Thanks for the poem
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28th Aug 2015 8:34pm
Exactly Devil ")
Thank you for the read and the list, and lovely comments...
Nice to meet you btw..
Zazzles
Thank you for the read and the list, and lovely comments...
Nice to meet you btw..
Zazzles
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30th Sep 2015 7:37am
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